Azsouth

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Mar 1, 2021
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would love a choice of where to cum (will this have pregnancy?), no choice at all kinda sucks. also would love some sex scenes where the camera is to the side instead of POV, or at least show the LI faces more in POV.
 

BoomX

Newbie
Aug 30, 2019
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As always thanks for your comments and feedback. Let me try to shine some light on some of your questions. :)

v1900
Everyone fukcs your LIs? (in short no :))
MC arrives to the city. Not all the characters are waiting for him single and without some kind of relationship (most of them are single). So on a rare occasion, there is possible to see other relationships (you saw one with Scarlett, there 2 left in the story - needed for the story).
You will decide which path you go: Sharing / Harem (with each character that has two paths).

Why were the tags removed?
In future tags, I wrote what is planned for the whole game, but members here hated some of them (probably my bad, as I didn't know how to communicate that they are decided by the player if they want them).

If I take one tag for example: Prostitution
I added a tag because there is one scene in the game where a prostitute is involved. But you can fuck her or only talk to her. Is it valid to add this tag to the game? Or does it send a message that the game is about prostitution? Got quite a lot of heat because of my tag list.

Hope you still try my game someday. :)

SoonAtHome Thank you! Adding to bugfix list :)
Azsouth Thanks. It will work on this in future episodes. :)
 

Look-see

Engaged Member
Aug 19, 2018
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As always thanks for your comments and feedback. Let me try to shine some light on some of your questions. :)

v1900
Everyone fukcs your LIs? (in short no :))
MC arrives to the city. Not all the characters are waiting for him single and without some kind of relationship (most of them are single). So on a rare occasion, there is possible to see other relationships (you saw one with Scarlett, there 2 left in the story - needed for the story).
You will decide which path you go: Sharing / Harem (with each character that has two paths).

Why were the tags removed?
In future tags, I wrote what is planned for the whole game, but members here hated some of them (probably my bad, as I didn't know how to communicate that they are decided by the player if they want them).

If I take one tag for example: Prostitution
I added a tag because there is one scene in the game where a prostitute is involved. But you can fuck her or only talk to her. Is it valid to add this tag to the game? Or does it send a message that the game is about prostitution? Got quite a lot of heat because of my tag list.

Hope you still try my game someday. :)

SoonAtHome Thank you! Adding to bugfix list :)
Azsouth Thanks. It will work on this in future episodes. :)
i havent tried this game because of the comments so ima ask. can you avoid/prevent others from hooking up? personally i dont care about any sex scenes aside from the ones the MC is involved in. this includes lesbian scenes.

can you choose who to hook up with?

as for the prostitution tag. its my general experience that if so much as one sex scene involving said tag is in the game then it applies. i've seen games with the tag femdom for example and rarely is it the main theme.
 

v1900

Well-Known Member
Apr 21, 2020
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As always thanks for your comments and feedback. Let me try to shine some light on some of your questions. :)

v1900
Everyone fukcs your LIs? (in short no :))
MC arrives to the city. Not all the characters are waiting for him single and without some kind of relationship (most of them are single). So on a rare occasion, there is possible to see other relationships (you saw one with Scarlett, there 2 left in the story - needed for the story).
You will decide which path you go: Sharing / Harem (with each character that has two paths).

Why were the tags removed?
In future tags, I wrote what is planned for the whole game, but members here hated some of them (probably my bad, as I didn't know how to communicate that they are decided by the player if they want them).

If I take one tag for example: Prostitution
I added a tag because there is one scene in the game where a prostitute is involved. But you can fuck her or only talk to her. Is it valid to add this tag to the game? Or does it send a message that the game is about prostitution? Got quite a lot of heat because of my tag list.

Hope you still try my game someday. :)

SoonAtHome Thank you! Adding to bugfix list :)
Azsouth Thanks. It will work on this in future episodes. :)
Thanks for the answer. As look-see already said, unfortunately or not even if it is a miniscule part of the VN it is customary to tag it. Each user has his/her own reasons to avoid certain tags and I believe it is valid for anyone to do so. In my particular case I have to know what I am getting in beforehand because I get pissed really easy as I went off my meds a few years ago. Anyway I'll check back after a few more updates to see what direction your project takes.

Good luck with your endeavor.
 

Trasher2018

Engaged Member
Aug 21, 2018
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Just started.

1. When you meet Scarlet .. the MC says "And here's Scarlet" - why? ... pointless - because instead of that the MC could show manners and greet her with a "Scarlett! It is so good to see you after such a long time. Thank you for help."

The first thing he says to her is "I ate, buth thank you anyway." ... She should have kicked him out ... I mean she endangers her family because she helps the MC on his stupid revange trip and he doesnt even great her ... or at least mention her gravity defying boobs ...

Just that shows some problems with the writing skills ...

2. Lexi is changing her clothing while she picks up some towels to bring them to you room ...
3. Next scene the text doesnt match the render ..
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4. Scarlett says she will do everything for us - and we just ask for a tour around town and she denies and we have to spent time with the bratty daughter. And why? Because she has to do housekeeping at home!! ... yeah .. she will do everything for us... o_O

5. We meet a shy guy that says he is into computers and the first thought of the MC "I CAN USE HIM FOR HACKING SHIT!" - I am into computers to, but I know shit about hacking ... And dont get me wrong, it is fine that the guy is a hacker, but that should not be the first thing the MC thinks of - first he could ask him - and then dont think "oh he is just modest, he will be a hacker bc the story has to happen".

6. Later the MC says Nancy didnt show him the Library, but she did ... not form the inside, but he saw the building ^^

7. "Oh hey, Dude me and my daughter just met yesterday - can you please go to the bedroom of her and wake her up? - thanks" ... Yeah ... no ... ... just no :p

8 ... then the dean offers the MC some way to attend school ... just because.

That's when I stopped. Sorry, but the story and the writing are laughable - yeah its a porn game, and for that it might work for some ppl - but not for me. Up to that point there were no choices - so maybe they come late or there are none or only very few. Edit: Ok - just skipped thru - there are very few choices and up to the point I skipped all sex scenes were forced and you had no choice to avoid them.

The renders are serviceable. Especially backgrounds move and change a lot. The girls are solid - nothing special.

And just at that point I will try to make some guesses. Scarlett was the woman with the killer ... or the dean - but she seems suspicious.

Edit: Skipped thru the content. It seems you dont have much say in the story. You can enable a shemale character (or she will be female I guess) but if you do that you cant avoid her so be sure what you pick. Then there are several girls and not much what you can do to avoid them it seems.

So just a bad written cruise-missile-pussy game where every pussy is jumping on the MCs cock.
 
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tobyburg

New Member
Apr 19, 2020
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not really sure where the stars came from but imo its too jumpy for lack of a better word but maybe ill look again later
 

DA22

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Jan 10, 2018
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i havent tried this game because of the comments so ima ask. can you avoid/prevent others from hooking up? personally i dont care about any sex scenes aside from the ones the MC is involved in. this includes lesbian scenes.

can you choose who to hook up with?

as for the prostitution tag. its my general experience that if so much as one sex scene involving said tag is in the game then it applies. i've seen games with the tag femdom for example and rarely is it the main theme.
Also and not to be an ass about it, since possibly dev has no power over the OP and pics shared, when I look at pics in OP I do get the vibe the game is mainly or heavily lesbian focused which is not my cup of tea especially in a male MC game (I would personally even go as far to say a game has no sex scenes yet for my purposes if only lesbian scenes or other dick scenes are in :p).

MC is nowhere to be seen in anything involving action, even if just talking, while girls are shown in action. Ofc nice warning other pussy shown in action will be a thing in game, so no problem with that as such, but if lesbian or voyeur would be all there is, then why would anyone make it a male MC focused game? I would add some pics that show MC have some action at least as well. Not smart from marketing perspective as done now. :p Remember vaginal can also be a strap on in pussy.
 
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BTLD

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Sep 18, 2017
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Also and not to be an ass about it, since possibly dev has no power over the OP and pics shared, when I look at pics in OP I do get the vibe the game is mainly lesbian focused which is not my cup of tea especially in a male MC game. MC is nowhere to be seen in anything involving action, even if just talking, while girls are shown in action. Ofc nice warning other pussy shown in action will be a thing in game, so no problem with that as such, but if lesbian or voyeur would be all there is, then why would anyone make it a male MC focused game? I would add some pics that show MC have some action at least as well. :p Remember vaginal can also be a strap on in pussy.
I mean.. he has a few options ...
he could ask the help of a moderator to correct what you mentioned
or
he could ask for ownership of the thread and replace those things himself/herself
so.. it's not like he doesn't have options..
 

Arrdvark

Member
Jan 23, 2018
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186
not really sure where the stars came from but imo its too jumpy for lack of a better word but maybe ill look again later
If I understand what your getting at, yes the time skips are way out of balance. The standard day in this VN seems to consist of time periods more in line with a sandbox.
  1. Morning - The MC gets up (with way too many images of his crotch involved) and has a minor encounter at the house
  2. Noon - There is an encounter of some sort that takes about 10-20 minutes but it's suddenly late afternoon
  3. Afternoon/evening - The MC immediately goes to the next event (again, about 10-20 minutes) but now it's already late evening
  4. Night - The MC gets home, and it's already bedtime
There are a lot of those disjointed 4 - 6 hours jumps throughout the story. Occasionally they are covered by the MC working, but often you finish an event in one time period, and the next event is in the next time period 4 hours later. This happens even when that much of a time jump doesn't make any sense.

It wouldn't be so bad if the MC wouldn't keep saying things like "I can't keep them waiting", and then take four hours to travel across town.
 

maximus_841

Member
Nov 15, 2020
166
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Made a quick Mod for the game, with it you can adjust some more game settings (and also the transitions/fades) + choices help/walkthrough

Jan. 7, 2022
Updated my Mod for the new game version Ep.4
New: Cheating game variables and the Walkthrough+/WT+ feature (you get ingame hints when reaching branching points in the game, you can activate/deactivate it in my Mod menu with the walkthrough button)
New with Mod version v0.4a-EP4: a scene replay function



Download Mod v0.4a-EP4 (~3MB)
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Some ingame pics of the Mod:
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I copied the contents of the mod folder into the game folder. But when I start the game, this message in notepad pops-up:-


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: Name (u'game/code/episode4.rpy', 1640776099, 0) is defined twice, at game/code/episode4.rpy:8 and game/episode4.rpyc:8.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 331, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 492, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "renpy/script.py", line 283, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", ".rpy", dir, fn, initcode)
File "renpy/script.py", line 797, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn)
File "renpy/script.py", line 473, in finish_load
check_name(node)
File "renpy/script.py", line 452, in check_name
bad_node.filename, bad_node.linenumber))
ScriptError: Name (u'game/code/episode4.rpy', 1640776099, 0) is defined twice, at game/code/episode4.rpy:8 and game/episode4.rpyc:8.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Sinful Life 0.4
Tue Jan 11 14:30:57 2022
 

KoGa3

Engaged Member
Modder
Donor
Aug 14, 2018
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I copied the contents of the mod folder into the game folder. But when I start the game, this message in notepad pops-up:-


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
ScriptError: Name (u'game/code/episode4.rpy', 1640776099, 0) is defined twice, at game/code/episode4.rpy:8 and game/episode4.rpyc:8.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 331, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 492, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script() # sets renpy.game.script.
File "renpy/script.py", line 283, in load_script
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", ".rpy", dir, fn, initcode)
File "renpy/script.py", line 797, in load_appropriate_file
self.finish_load(stmts, initcode, filename=lastfn)
File "renpy/script.py", line 473, in finish_load
check_name(node)
File "renpy/script.py", line 452, in check_name
bad_node.filename, bad_node.linenumber))
ScriptError: Name (u'game/code/episode4.rpy', 1640776099, 0) is defined twice, at game/code/episode4.rpy:8 and game/episode4.rpyc:8.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Sinful Life 0.4
Tue Jan 11 14:30:57 2022
There's a problem with the installation. The script files are somehow "double" now. You must move my extracted Mod files and the folder "code" into your ...\SinfulLife-0.4-pc\game\ directory.
Here it seems you either moved them into the main game directory ...\SinfulLife-0.4-pc\ . Or, if you installed the Mod right, there were for some other reasons the main game script files not in the right folder \SinfulLife-0.4-pc\game\code\.
I would recommed to completely re-install the game first, then my Mod again.
 

maximus_841

Member
Nov 15, 2020
166
117
There's a problem with the installation. The script files are somehow "double" now. You must move my extracted Mod files and the folder "code" into your ...\SinfulLife-0.4-pc\game\ directory.
Here it seems you either moved them into the main game directory ...\SinfulLife-0.4-pc\ . Or, if you installed the Mod right, there were for some other reasons the main game script files not in the right folder \SinfulLife-0.4-pc\game\code\.
I would recommed to completely re-install the game first, then my Mod again.
That fixed it. Thanks.
 

UncleFredo

Well-Known Member
Aug 29, 2020
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Thanks for the update, always appreciated!
My saves, from an unmodded game, failed to load with or without the mod, so I did a fresh modded play through. Nice amount of content in the latest update. Generally attractive females. Story has some odd twists but it's interesting enough to keep one's attention.

To the dev: Take all the criticism with a grain of salt. This is a pretty good effort, better than many and certainly has the potential to get much better. I'm looking forward to your next update. Good luck with the VN.
 
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herrbertold

Member
Jun 7, 2017
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In the Cafe scene when Emma is showing you around town, the server walks up and introduces herself as Kim, where as a bit later she introduces herself as Lana. Might wanna fix that Dev. :)
 
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