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Thank God!So yeah quit it, nothing will be changed.
Thank God!So yeah quit it, nothing will be changed.
Are you actually for real? Trying to be all reasonable now when you first said:I'm not sure where "you guys are relentless" is coming from, I assume it means mine wasn't the first complaint. I haven't read much (anything at all really) on this forum so if others have I'm unaware of it.
As for how I'd handle it, I made a suggestion in my first post, it's about what the character deserves in my opinion. And at this point, it's what I would do IF I were writing the story, but I'm not.
so that wasn't my intent at all, nor was dog piling if you've been getting a lot of negative feedback.
You guys are fucking hilarious I'm open to constructive criticism but when someone starts like that... yeah, I won't show any sympathy.I'm really kinda hoping at this point he gets royally NTR'd and then made a cuck by his sister and mom, preferably chastity caged with the key thrown in the ocean. They could take turns pegging him when they get bored.
I thought you were going to stop posting because of that pretty reasonable comment you made before. Again, let me write my story. I take my time planning it at least a bit so everything is happening for a reason. I get the complaints, but be patient, the good stuff is only starting.So yeah quit it, nothing will be changed.
Sorry but looks like you don't understand my comment, I said this (quit it) because, he will came back again and gonna write the same thing, that's why I said quit it, it won't change anything at all, sorry bro I'm a peaceful soul I don't like others barking.I thought you were going to stop posting because of that pretty reasonable comment you made before. Again, let me write my story. I take my time planning it at least a bit so everything is happening for a reason. I get the complaints, but be patient, the good stuff is only starting.
Sorry, it's not my cup of tea, sometimes I play this type of game but it doesn't interest me much I'm much of a story type guy who loves story with good MC.But honestly, if you haven't liked the novel until now then you won't like future updates because I'm not going to make the usual story of gigachad fucks all women around him, plus some more just cuz.
If that's what you want then ok, I won't come back here, you can relax now.I thought you were going to stop posting because of that pretty reasonable comment you made before.
Tempted to update my pledge tier just to request some pegging threesome images and then post them here as spoilers for future updates to see the reactions of the forum.You guys are fucking hilarious I'm open to constructive criticism but when someone starts like that... yeah, I won't show any sympathy.
Based and fistypilledTempted to update my pledge tier just to request some pegging threesome images and then post them here as spoilers for future updates to see the reactions of the forum.
Not an act, mate, I am reasonable. I never changed my mind or withdrew what I said, I'd say the same thing about the character now and I actually did:Are you actually for real? Trying to be all reasonable now when you first said:
Again with "you guys"... do you see a conspiracy or something?You guys are fucking hilarious I'm open to constructive criticism but when someone starts like that... yeah, I won't show any sympathy.
How long did you play...? Sorry to say it but this is misinformation/lack of interest and doesn't add anything to the thread. Literally all of those points you mentioned become non-issues after the 10 min narration heavy part to set up the story. I can't expect you to like it if you don't even play past the prologue...I tried but couldn't get into this one. I barely made it through the first few minutes but my initial thought are:
- The game is technically sound and polished. The framing/cinematography is well done.
- The character designs are too bland and similar to each other. I get that they are related but they still need to be more distinct. I'm not a fan of the straw-colored hair. In general they just need more color overall. Add some blush or makeup or a tan or highlights or something
- This one is really nitpicky but the word ''abroad'' is doing too much lifting in the beginning in trying to explain where the characters have been and what they've been doing. Saying two people have been abroad doesn't properly convey that they were not together while abroad. Usually, you would assume the opposite without knowing anything else.
- I'm having a hard time articulating what rubbed me the wrong way about this one. I think it's the style of narration. I felt it was doing too much saying and not enough showing. I would rather have the characters (through their thoughts/actions/conversations) expressing/describing their own growing feelings of attraction for each other than some detached narrator doing it.
By my definition I did give it a chance but I don't believe in having to ''tough it out'' if the appeal isn't there. There are too many alternatives out there to stick it out with something that doesn't tickle your fancy.Did you only play 5 minutes? Sorry to say it but literally all of those points you mention become non-issues if you play past the intro, which is the narration heavy part to set up the story. I can't expect you to like it if you don't even give it a chance and read at least some of the text, it's a visual NOVEL after all...
When I want to consume media I read the description/watch previews and if I like those then I'm initially hooked, which you can do here with the extensive overview, developer notes and previews. And only then, if the product got my initial attention, then I proceed to play a videogame, read a book, or watch a movie. But I don't quit in the first 5 minutes if the thing at least got me interested enough to download it, that's plain stupid...By my definition I did give it a chance but I don't believe in having to ''tough it out'' if the appeal isn't there. There are too many alternatives out there to stick it out with something that doesn't tickle your fancy.
If those issues are only present in the first 5 minutes, I would argue you should change those first 5 minutes so they better represent what the game is going to be. In terms of hooking people onto your game, that's the most important and most impressionable part of your game. I'd like to take you at your word that those things are non-issues after the first 5 minutes but my problems were with the narration style and the character designs, things that don't usually change once established. If they have, again, you should have those changes reflected in the prologue itself.
If you're going to be so direct allow me to return the favor. Your point of view is the narrow one, not mine. Where you would use descriptions/previews to start your screening process I prefer not to put to much weight in such things, as they don't give me a good idea of whether the product is well-done or not. The style/humor/quality of the writing is much more important to me than the subject matter or plot idea, and those are things you kind of have get a feel for yourself.When I want to consume media I read the description/watch previews and if I like those then I'm initially hooked, which you can do here with the extensive overview, developer notes and previews. And only then, if the product got my initial attention, then I proceed to play a videogame, read a book, or watch a movie. But I don't quit in the first 5 minutes if the thing at least got me interested enough to download it, that's plain stupid...
Sorry for been so direct but it just sounds to me like brainrot mentality from a world infested with a short content dopamine seeking format. It's not my fault that people got null attention spans...
So now you got mad and started attacking me and my product? Congratulations, you just got promoted to hater!The reason I couldn't get into this boring game is that its writer is crippled with the brainrot that has infected our society.
I'm not mad at all. That last line was my way of making fun of you for blaming society for someone not putting up with your game. That it went over your head frankly shouldn't surprise me as it seems from you lack of addressing my points and obsessing over how fast I was sick of your game already reveals how fragile and basic of a mind I'm dealing with.So now you got mad and started attacking me and my product? Congratulations, you just got promoted to hater!
I won't address you any more if that's gonna be your attitude. I hope you reconsider and use the time wasted in writing long paragraphs to actually give the novel a chance for more than 5 minutes!
As I said before, there will always be guys polluting threads and shitting on the game just because it's not the typical self-insert power fantasy. Just don't listen to them and do with your game whatever you want to do, it is your own game after all. Your game's plot is pretty original, keep it as it is, we really don't need another Summertime Saga clone number 28938393983985.So now you got mad and started attacking me and my product? Congratulations, you just got promoted to hater!
I won't address you any more if that's gonna be your attitude. I hope you reconsider and use the time wasted in writing long paragraphs to actually give the novel a chance for more than 5 minutes!
While you are certainly entitled to your opinion, it's almost entirely one that is subjective and abstract. By your own words, you freely admitted to nitpicking and seizing the most vague reasons for why it did not appeal to you. I would never say to keep playing something you don't like, but it sounds to me like maybe you just weren't in the right head-space/mood to play this and instead came up with vague generalizations for why you dropped it.I tried but couldn't get into this one. I barely made it through the first few minutes but my initial thought are:
- The game is technically sound and polished. The framing/cinematography is well done.
- The character designs are too bland and similar to each other. I get that they are related but they still need to be more distinct. I'm not a fan of the straw-colored hair. In general they just need more color overall. Add some blush or makeup or a tan or highlights or something
- This one is really nitpicky but the word ''abroad'' is doing too much lifting in the beginning in trying to explain where the characters have been and what they've been doing. Saying two people have been abroad doesn't properly convey that they were not together while abroad. Usually, you would assume the opposite without knowing anything else.
- I'm having a hard time articulating what rubbed me the wrong way about this one. I think it's the style of narration. I felt it was doing too much saying and not enough showing. I would rather have the characters (through their thoughts/actions/conversations) expressing/describing their own growing feelings of attraction for each other than some detached narrator doing it.