I lied to myself when I said I'm done for the night and I've been wading through chapter 6. Man, what a mess!
Mislabeled characters, spelling I'd missed earlier, atrocious grammar, completely wrong words that made it through the spell check because they were spelled correctly, etc. I've been stepping through the game and script at the same time to find most of them, have finally moved up to the truth or dare game, and have saved everything there.
Oh, I also added "Lucy" to the character list and relabeled the flashback scenes. It just didn't feel right calling a young teen "Mom".
I've actually closed out all the windows now and I won't touch it again until tomorrow.... really.... I promise.... may I be struck by lightzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZAP!