Jack Kerouac

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Jul 30, 2018
15
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Great game. Last update was kinda short, but I get it - this is difficult work. Thoroughly enjoying it so far. Keep it up!
 

Xumeey

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Apr 27, 2017
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Holy shit this game is very good. I'm glad I finally picked it. The only problem I have with it is some of the images' quality is not good for example
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but other than that it's 10/10 for me.
 
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Laelia Aknes

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Sep 28, 2018
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This is one of the errors:
Exception: Could not load image 'images/day15_boutique_girl_posing.jpg': error('JPEG loading error',)

"JPEG loading error" looks like corrupted images. Try re-downloading the game.



Well maybe if you were :)
It works! Thank you very much, if there's anyway I can thank you, I guess feel free to ask.
 

MRMIdAS2k

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Mar 21, 2018
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A few grammar niggles, nothing massive, but yeah.

Iris says "No, I didn't think it was too much. It really fitted the atmosphere of the opera" While "fitted" is fine technically, "fit" rolls of the tongue better, like in Family guy where they have the discussion about "you did a porn" when it's either "you did porn" or "you did a porno".

In the Riley Cowgirl scene, it says she "climbs on top of you and lets herselfs slide on top of your erect cock" it should be "climbs on top of you and lets herself slide onto your erect cock"

With Ana, you tell her "spred you legs for me" obviously that should be "your"

With Rachel, it says "Rachel clitoris beckons" which should be "Rachel's clitoris beckons" and in the shower you say "On you knees baby" which should be "On your knees baby"

With Bella, she says "Because if you want to I happen to have a room booked for us" which reads a little awkwardly, and should probably be "Because if you want to, I happen to have a room booked for us"

So yeah, just minor things.

Yes I am a pedantic bastard.
 

bobomb

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Dec 2, 2017
146
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A few grammar niggles, nothing massive, but yeah.

Iris says "No, I didn't think it was too much. It really fitted the atmosphere of the opera" While "fitted" is fine technically, "fit" rolls of the tongue better, like in Family guy where they have the discussion about "you did a porn" when it's either "you did porn" or "you did a porno".

In the Riley Cowgirl scene, it says she "climbs on top of you and lets herselfs slide on top of your erect cock" it should be "climbs on top of you and lets herself slide onto your erect cock"

With Ana, you tell her "spred you legs for me" obviously that should be "your"

With Rachel, it says "Rachel clitoris beckons" which should be "Rachel's clitoris beckons" and in the shower you say "On you knees baby" which should be "On your knees baby"

With Bella, she says "Because if you want to I happen to have a room booked for us" which reads a little awkwardly, and should probably be "Because if you want to, I happen to have a room booked for us"

So yeah, just minor things.

Yes I am a pedantic bastard.
Yeah me too (pedantic bastard), but P. says he has someone working this and at least the back content should be cleaned up in the next couple of releases. Let's hope whoever it is, is a native English speaker.
 
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