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Techn0magier

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There is conflict, the government shit going on.
I know. It is an answer to perverteers comment, that some people complain about the existence of that arc. Without the government plot, there would be nothing at stake for the MC himself. Which means, as a story, it would be plain and boring.
 

Avaron1974

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I know. It is an answer to perverteers comment, that some people complain about the existence of that arc. Without the government plot, there would be nothing at stake for the MC himself. Which means, as a story, it would be plain and boring.
Depends on the story. I've read plenty without any conflict going on.

Triangle is one of the better received stories on here and not a single bit of conflict in it.
 

Techn0magier

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Depends on the story. I've read plenty without any conflict going on.

Triangle is one of the better received stories on here and not a single bit of conflict in it.
Are you sure about that? The pitch itself reads otherwise. I will check it ASAP. But currently I stick to the school of thought that there is no story without any kind of tension.
 

Goblin Baily: DILF

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Depends on the story. I've read plenty without any conflict going on.

Triangle is one of the better received stories on here and not a single bit of conflict in it.
Are you sure about that? The pitch itself reads otherwise. I will check it ASAP. But currently I stick to the school of thought that there is no story without any kind of tension.
Actually I agree with Ava, as she's mistaking tension with conflict, unlike someone else, however there's enough psychological happening to keep the players that are into the story interested and if you are familiar with the notion of the lie, I'll try to showcase Bella's storyline in 3 acts. Act one : the lie is that she hates the MC. Reaction to the lie: MC breaks through her layers and we reach act two, where the lie is that they have to keep it secret, people find out and we reach act 3, Bella dreams of being her brother's wife but they obviously can't, they go and Bella tries wedding gowns... due to the pregnancy they get as close as possible as they can... fin...
There's no conflict as Ava said but there's emotional and personal growth ( obviously in the frame of an incest game)
 

Techn0magier

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Actually I agree with Ava, as she's mistaking tension with conflict, unlike someone else, however there's enough psychological happening to keep the players that are into the story interested and if you are familiar with the notion of the lie, I'll try to showcase Bella's storyline in 3 acts. Act one : the lie is that she hates the MC. Reaction to the lie: MC breaks through her layers and we reach act two, where the lie is that they have to keep it secret, people find out and we reach act 3, Bella dreams of being her brother's wife but they obviously can't, they go and Bella tries wedding gowns... due to the pregnancy they get as close as possible as they can... fin...
There's no conflict as Ava said but there's emotional and personal growth ( obviously in the frame of an incest game)
Agreed. Bellas arc alone has more character development in itself than some professional VNs at all. But the tension comes into play when the MC decides to help her, or not. The MC agency here defines which kind of relationship will be established. The MC could also keep the status quo and risk to worsen her behaviour towards him later down the road.
 
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Yakis0ba

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Well, if one were able to write something enjoyable to read but it technically had no tension... if it isn't a story, then what is it?
 

HomerJSimpson

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I like the fact of pregnancy its not going to be just a ending image but something more worked on future updates, the timeskip really got me surprise but a liked, Bella and Liza pregnant its going to be very fun to go along.
 

eavloolvvle

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Love this game.

I must say though I'm surprised that neither Alina nor Adriana were yet part of some watersports fun.
Or have I missed it?
 

Eula25

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That is the right attitude (y) My favourites are Bella avoided the hell out of the dom route for her though it just doesn't fit. And I like Iris :love: as much as I like Susan Iris is the best milf, who are your favourites?
I guess we both on the same boat. I like bella Iris and susan. I agree with you that susan and iris are the best milf:love:. When susan at discreet is just wow. I also play love route with bella. She didnt deserve to be in dom route
 
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