VN Ren'Py Completed Sorcerer [v1.0.0] [Talothral]

[Talothral]

Yeah. I get that. Integral or not, I'm not a fan. Just like a I REALLY hate a certain 'Duckface' in another game that is 'integral'. I quit playing that one. I don't hate Miyuki, but, if she were to stuck in the cage that Chione was in, I wouldn't shed a tear.

Susan is my girl. With sides of the GILF and the Gorgons.

I understand it perfectly, we all like different things after all. And while somethings are unavoidable for the overall story to make sense, I try to offer an alternative when it is possible and makes sense.

But, Li returns on day 11 (and day 14 I think it was), and Susan returns on day 12 onwards for more daily interactions. And once the next "plot step" settles down there is room for more alternate paths and scenes. So while Miyuki has the spotlight as the "main girl" for now, I haven't forgotten the others and they will get their spot in the light.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I understand it perfectly, we all like different things after all. And while somethings are unavoidable for the overall story to make sense, I try to offer an alternative when it is possible and makes sense.

But, Li returns on day 11 (and day 14 I think it was), and Susan returns on day 12 onwards for more daily interactions. And once the next "plot step" settles down there is room for more alternate paths and scenes. So while Miyuki has the spotlight as the "main girl" for now, I haven't forgotten the others and they will get their spot in the light.

Very good. I'll stick around and hopefully Susan can become the alternate main. If not, I'm still here for the story. Unless you make a major faux pas as in another game that I was making a patch for did and I just dropped that one.

 

[MrFriendly]

Very good. I'll stick around and hopefully Susan can become the alternate main. If not, I'm still here for the story. Unless you make a major faux pas as in another game that I was making a patch for did and I just dropped that one.

Eh, I don't really like any of them very much. I am just here for the story. I am interested in seeing where this goes but none of the sex scenes are a turn on and the sex partners aren't exciting to me. It's fun to see a competent, mature MC who doesn't get the "shakes" when he sees boobs.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Eh, I don't really like any of them very much. I am just here for the story. I am interested in seeing where this goes but none of the sex scenes are a turn on and the sex partners aren't exciting to me. It's fun to see a competent, mature MC who doesn't get the "shakes" when he sees boobs.

Very true. But, I still like a lil 'hanky panky' once in awhile. I just finished another game, 3 times, that had 0 lewd encounters for me. The story was well written. A little 'woke', but, still good. Normally I wouldn't even have given it a try. But, having the option to make your char male or female through a semi-char creation process was what got me to try it.

 

[MrFriendly]

Very true. But, I still like a lil 'hanky panky' once in awhile. I just finished another game, 3 times, that had 0 lewd encounters for me. The story was well written. A little 'woke', but, still good. Normally I wouldn't even have given it a try. But, having the option to make your char male or female through a semi-char creation process was what got me to try it.

I can understand that. It is why we are on this site versus many other places we could find games to play. In all honesty I feel that Talothral can write an interesting story but that the renders are not nearly as good as the story he tells. In a perfect world he'd be able to team up with someone who is a great artist but a terrible writer and then they'd make "oodles" of money together. But as that won't be happening then I am good with enjoying what we have.

And when given the choice between playing a man-slut or getting zero sex I am usually closer to the zero sex side. Just the way I am.

 

[Talothral]

I can understand that. It is why we are on this site versus many other places we could find games to play. In all honesty I feel that Talothral can write an interesting story but that the renders are not nearly as good as the story he tells. In a perfect world he'd be able to team up with someone who is a great artist but a terrible writer and then they'd make "oodles" of money together. But as that won't be happening then I am good with enjoying what we have.

And when given the choice between playing a man-slut or getting zero sex I am usually closer to the zero sex side. Just the way I am.

Writing is easy. Rendering eh... I'm learning still, despite the number of renders I've been rendering for only one and a half years with just basic knowledge. And compared to TRS well... And hopefully, the next one I make has better renders than this. At least it's far easier to make environment wise -.-

 

[MrFriendly]

Writing is easy, rendering eh... I'm learning still, despite the number of renders I've been rendering for only one and a half years with just basic knowledge. And compared to TRS well... And hopefully, the next one I make has better renders than this. At least it's far easier to make environment wise -.-

Don't take my criticism as an "I can do better" or that I don't appreciate the difficulty. I enjoy your work and I sympathize with how much there is to learn when it comes to making these games. I just think that once you get the renders to a more polished state which matches your writing that the games will be a lot more successful. I'm sure that you are also hobbled by a computer that can't do nearly as much as you would like to be able to do. I look forward to seeing your future games.

 

[Talothral]

Don't take my criticism as an "I can do better" or that I don't appreciate the difficulty. I enjoy your work and I sympathize with how much there is to learn when it comes to making these games. I just think that once you get the renders to a more polished state which matches your writing that the games will be a lot more successful. I'm sure that you are also hobbled by a computer that can't do nearly as much as you would like to be able to do. I look forward to seeing your future games.

No worries there. Besides, it is the reality, and I'm not afraid to admit it. My renders are alright, and they work for the scene for at least 90% of the time. That doesn't mean they couldn't be better, and I know that and work towards improving things.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I can understand that. It is why we are on this site versus many other places we could find games to play. In all honesty I feel that Talothral can write an interesting story but that the renders are not nearly as good as the story he tells. In a perfect world he'd be able to team up with someone who is a great artist but a terrible writer and then they'd make "oodles" of money together. But as that won't be happening then I am good with enjoying what we have.

And when given the choice between playing a man-slut or getting zero sex I am usually closer to the zero sex side. Just the way I am.

Agreed. I'm a writer, but, I cannot do renders and I can't get away with using real porn for the story that I'm writing. So, I just keep writing and maybe one day, I'll find a good render person who can help turn my story into a game. Until then, I will just keep writing and coding. lol

No worries there. Besides, it is the reality, and I'm not afraid to admit it. My renders are alright, and they work for the scene for at least 90% of the time. That doesn't mean they couldn't be better, and I know that and work towards improving things.

I like your renders. If I ever showed the shit I tried to do, you'd laugh your ass off. Ahahaha

 

[TessSadist]

No worries there. Besides, it is the reality, and I'm not afraid to admit it. My renders are alright, and they work for the scene for at least 90% of the time. That doesn't mean they couldn't be better, and I know that and work towards improving things.

I like your writing a lot!

I totally get the struggle with rendering, it's really hard to get good at it, and computer limitations also have an impact. I even deliberately chose to do one game over another at first because I knew I couldn't do the right art to give the second story idea justice and I didn't want to waste that story without more experience. So I try and improve for the future, and I would encourage you to keep learning and improving, because I personally love your writing, and it's not something I say lightly or often.

 

[Deleted member 2735575]

No worries there. Besides, it is the reality, and I'm not afraid to admit it. My renders are alright, and they work for the scene for at least 90% of the time. That doesn't mean they couldn't be better, and I know that and work towards improving things.

We're all always working to improve! But your stories are great, and can't wait to be able to play the whole story through. Keep up the great work

 

[Talothral]

If I ever showed the shit I tried to do, you'd laugh your ass off. Ahahaha

I doubt it. We all been there at one point or another, and have more than one failed render. Patience and perseverance are needed though.

I like your writing a lot!

I totally get the struggle with rendering, it's really hard to get good at it, and computer limitations also have an impact. I even deliberately chose to do one game over another at first because I knew I couldn't do the right art to give the second story idea justice and I didn't want to waste that story without more experience. So I try and improve for the future, and I would encourage you to keep learning and improving, because I personally love your writing, and it's not something I say lightly or often.

We're all always working to improve! But your stories are great, and can't wait to be able to play the whole story through. Keep up the great work

Thanks for the kind words and I do what I can.

However, about the hardware stuff. Funny thing, I prefer being on a limited system more than one with nearly unlimited resources. With a less powerful system I can't afford to be lazy, and I have to learn to be as efficient as possible with limited resources and use every trick I've learned so far to get the best possible result I can. But I admit this, it was pure bliss going from a 6 GB GTX card to an 8 GB RTX card.

 

[Anon4321]

Talothral
I'm just going to say, I think your Faerie Dragon is just as adorable as Baby Yoda, I always smile whenever she makes an appearance.
And I hope I get to see a lot more of her.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

So I still freaking love this vn. So glad to have non cookie cutter LIs. I keep 2 walk throughs that goes back to the lovely stewardess and the randy gilf.

Every choice that branches is worth the extra time spent playing them. Even though I truly love the gorgon route, the other route is worth the time to learn a bit of history in your world. But mainly it was awesome to free a fairy from that Carol baskens lady

Best of luck with this. Truthfully played this one cause the mc looked like dr strange of my youth and the subject matter. So glad I did. Also I do love miyuki so please don't shove her aside just for some other's taste.

 

[Talothral]

So I still freaking love this vn. So glad to have non cookie cutter LIs. I keep 2 walk throughs that goes back to the lovely stewardess and the randy gilf.

So we need more randy gilfs in games? >.>

Every choice that branches is worth the extra time spent playing them. Even though I truly love the gorgon route, the other route is worth the time to learn a bit of history in your world. But mainly it was awesome to free a fairy from that Carol baskens lady

It's kind of funny, the whole scene was added just because it felt like should be added, it isn't even in the original script. It's similar to the faerie dragon, she was never supposed to be featured as much as she has. Half of the time she isn't even in the script when she appears, it just makes sense for her to be there in those moments. Like the day 10 morning, or at the last scene of the day when the fairy visits.

Best of luck with this. Truthfully played this one cause the mc looked like dr strange of my youth and the subject matter. So glad I did. Also I do love miyuki so please don't shove her aside just for some other's taste.

She isn't going to be shoved aside, it's just that after a certain point of the main story there is more room to elevate the other characters to be there with Miyuki in terms of screen time in a group and individually. So you see Susan (for example) more, have more interactions with her and do things with her. And Miyuki is still there with her own things and interactions. After all, it isn't Miyuki who you are going to ask to operate the tank. No, there are no tanks, yet... >.>

 

[Spfjolietjake]

So we need more randy gilfs in games? >.>


It's kind of funny, the whole scene was added just because it felt like should be added, it isn't even in the original script. It's similar to the faerie dragon, she was never supposed to be featured as much as she has. Half of the time she isn't even in the script when she appears, it just makes sense for her to be there in those moments. Like the day 10 morning, or at the last scene of the day when the fairy visits.


She isn't going to be shoved aside, it's just that after a certain point of the main story there is more room to elevate the other characters to be there with Miyuki in terms of screen time in a group and individually. So you see Susan (for example) more, have more interactions with her and do things with her. And Miyuki is still there with her own things and interactions. After all, it isn't Miyuki who you are going to ask to operate the tank. No, there are no tanks, yet... >.>

Lol I'm not usually the gilf guy, randy or otherwise I have to admit I enjoyed her scenes

The faerie dragon is what I asked Santa for this year.

seriously it's bad ass.

And please know that I like all the LIs, but I am partial to Miyuki mainly for the choices she made to get where she is at the end of the update. Love that fearlessness, a trait that i think Susan also has.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Lol I'm not usually the gilf guy, randy or otherwise I have to admit I enjoyed her scenes

The faerie dragon is what I asked Santa for this year.

seriously it's bad ass.

And please know that I like all the LIs, but I am partial to Miyuki mainly for the choices she made to get where she is at the end of the update. Love that fearlessness, a trait that i think Susan also has.

Bruh, c'mon. You know the real reason that you prefer Miyuki, is because she's Asian. lol But, I'm not going to judge. We all have our tastes.

I'm the guy who likes Susan the best, then the GILF and the Gorgons. Yeah. I'm weird. Don't judge. Ahahaha

Edit:

Hmm 'GILF and The Gorgons'. Sounds like some sort of band in the making. ROFL!

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Bruh, c'mon. You know the real reason that you prefer Miyuki, is because she's Asian. lol But, I'm not going to judge. We all have our tastes.

I'm the guy who likes Susan the best, then the GILF and the Gorgons. Yeah. I'm weird. Don't judge. Ahahaha

Edit:

Hmm 'GILF and The Gorgons'. Sounds like some sort of band in the making. ROFL!

Is she Asian? I thought all Asian LIs had to have purple hair?!?!? Did someone lie to me?



I would totally rock a "gilf and the gorgons" rock t-shirt

 

[Talothral]

Spfjolietjake & Wolf Plays™ I hold you two responsible for derailing my brain on my well-earned tea break.

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[Deleted member 1571716]

Is she Asian? I thought all Asian LIs had to have purple hair?!?!? Did someone lie to me?



I would totally rock a "gilf and the gorgons" rock t-shirt

Ahahaha Same here! Get the Ts made up Talothral

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And I accept that blame! Love that render. Stealing it! Ahahaha