VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sorrow: Rebirth [v0.99] [LustFight]

[Elefex]

Missing the "Animated" tag?

 

[LustFight]

Missing the "Animated" tag?

Yeah wait for moders

 

[LustFight]

Really want to like this game because the renders are so damn nice.

Unfortunately there is so much unintelligible bullshit in the story that my eyes start to glaze over and I just can't bring myself to make an effort to understand what in the fuck is going through the author's head.

Weird shit in stories can be cool when done right. Weird shit, just for the sake of being weird, not so much.

Best of luck to the dev though, these renders are some of the best I've seen.

This time I tried to make the narrative as simple as possible, I apologize that it was not enough.

 

[Kinch310]

If you have an editor. Fire them. There is a misspelling in the very first line of the game.

 

[LustFight]

If you have an editor. Fire them. There is a misspelling in the very first line of the game.

I will fix all mistakes in time for the next update. Thanks

 

[Before I Forget]

Hopefully the sole focus will be on the main character this time.

A couple of things I noticed this time around:

1. The story is better laid out then last time, it took me sometime just to figure out what the heck was going on. This time around it's a bit better.
2. The dialogue isn't perfect but it's still a major upgrade from the last game.

This game is still depressing though. But at least I can now understand what's going on. GL

 

[Skargaroth]

Is there another link for the incest patch? trying to download it and getting a write error

 

[LustFight]

Is there another link for the incest patch? trying to download it and getting a write error

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[Skargaroth]

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thanks.
unfortunately though I live in a country that has banned mixdrop due to piracy (UK)

 

[LustFight]

thanks.
unfortunately though I live in a country that has banned mixdrop due to piracy (UK)

No problem -

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[Skargaroth]

No problem - Pixeldrain

sweet thanks.

I know I could get around it with a VPN but I'm dumb when it comes to that sort of stuff so never bothered with it

 

[thryllth]

Mixdrop link for the patch came up clean, thanks. After finagling it seems to be MS usual crap code.

 

[LustFight]

Same issue persists, virus detected using Windows Defender

Fixed it with Pixeldrain

 

[Adoringfan]

4th pic has the 'I just got the latest booster' eye

 

[LustFight]

4th pic has the 'I just got the latest booster' eye

Yes, that's right

 

[incest lover m/s]

Will there be m/s incest in the game in future updates?

 

[LustFight]

Will there be m/s incest in the game in future updates?

hell yeah! But much later

 

[delacroix2]

Wow! nice story and interesting characters, I'm intrigued. Thanks!

 

[LustFight]

Wow! nice story and interesting characters, I'm intrigued. Thanks!

thanks you!

 

[AnubisMRM]

Because it is very badly made, I had a lot of things to fix and the bad reviews aren't going anywhere, so I decided to start from scratch

I hope the dialogue makes some sense now. I tried the original game and I liked the girls. But the map and the dialogue made no sense and the game ended without understanding what went wrong.