F8andy

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Do any one know how the rest 2 futalian will be introduced ??
And really waiting for 0.5 android port if possible ?
 

BGRW2020

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You basically touched on a lot of things I could mention, but I don't really feel like talking about all that since I have no idea how seriously the dev will take feedback (or even read it). The MC just has a lot of flaws that make him truly unlikable, and now that you mention it, he really is like an incel and it hits right on the nose what makes him really annoying to follow/play as. I don't even *want* to help this guy, like from the very first scene his decisions were making him super creepy. I gave it a pass at first but the more I played the less I was liking him. Some of his reactions to the girls (I didn't get as far as the aliens, so can't talk on that part), is just straight up bigotry. Honestly, a way to preserve his reticence and yet make him likable is not to outright bash/hate/dislike/claim disgust, but like be confused like. He could've been so much better.

Lana as example since she's as far as I got: He thought she was really beautiful and admired her breasts (again, creepy, but whatever, pass here because porn game). Then finds out she has a dick, and he does 180 flip in how he feels about her. Instead, he could've been confused or conflicted. It didn't have to be love/hate, it could've been "damn she's really hot...but she has a dick...but she's into video games and hot...argh!" <---something like realizing it might not be how he wants, but then after talking to dad or overhearing conversation with the mom, he could've become more curious or I dunno. I didn't get to the VR part you mentioned, when he just made her cry and run away I am just done.

I'll wait and see if the dev even takes feedback or might do something to change MC in the future, if so I might come support this game, the concept and art is really good. Regardless though, I don't feel like playing this anymore until it gets an overhaul.
Why would a heterosexual man be curious about finding out the women here have 2' long dicks - HE IS NOT GAY
 

narnif

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Why would a heterosexual man be curious about finding out the women here have 2' long dicks - HE IS NOT GAY
I'd argue that he's also not real, and can be written a different way. If he's intended to eventually open up to the idea of women with giant cock that want his booty, that's also fine.

Issues I'm seeing are either - A) The fetishes that the writer has chosen conflict completely with how the MC is written.
Or - B) The rate of the plot for intended fetishes completely outpaces the plot of the MC growing to be into it.

There is also the issue that (if everything is exactly as it should be with fetishes, plot, MC personality, etc.) there are some polarizing tags that are absolutely missing from the Overview post. We need to list ALL of them, and probably split them up into "current" and "planned" tags.

Otherwise, the easiest fix is to rewrite the way the MC thinks and interacts with the intended harem. As things stand, he's an unlikable, insensitive and annoying piece of shit incel with no redeeming qualities, that people playing this game would rather jettison into space, rather than let him near anyone remotely feminine.
 

BGRW2020

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I'd argue that he's also not real, and can be written a different way. If he's intended to eventually open up to the idea of women with giant cock that want his booty, that's also fine.

Issues I'm seeing are either - A) The fetishes that the writer has chosen conflict completely with how the MC is written.
Or - B) The rate of the plot for intended fetishes completely outpaces the plot of the MC growing to be into it.

There is also the issue that (if everything is exactly as it should be with fetishes, plot, MC personality, etc.) there are some polarizing tags that are absolutely missing from the Overview post. We need to list ALL of them, and probably split them up into "current" and "planned" tags.

Otherwise, the easiest fix is to rewrite the way the MC thinks and interacts with the intended harem. As things stand, he's an unlikable, insensitive and annoying piece of shit incel with no redeeming qualities, that people playing this game would rather jettison into space, rather than let him near anyone remotely feminine.
Normally I would agree but a normal male would not start a harem with chicks with dicks - they are totally unreal and ugly the same as a male would be without one - thus no harem
 

Domdeyso

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the game is cool and has beautiful characters but the content futa on male is inevitable, not to mention that no scene is avoidable as much as you can and skip things but it happens anyway. if you want to start a relationship with a futanari from what I'm seeing she will always fuck the MC we can only jump to not see, I don't know if I understand very well but in what I understand all the contents are avoidable which doesn't seem to happen. I'm going to drop this game but I wish you good luck.
 
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phupdup

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I find it hard to play this thing for anything more than short stretches after these first two releases. Here's why:

- Almighty deity apparently handles logistics with their herd worse than an army of conscripts from a certain country. Aren't sky daddies supposed to be perfect?

- Plausibility sucks. MC has memories of their former body occupant which conceivably would be their metaverse double. Thus MC should not be surprised to find their future? girlfriend is packing and also not ask stupid questions about why meatbags still work for a living.

- The journal as implemented blows. Not really helpful at all with the who, where, what and when for quests and a mess to navigate.

- Two words: Sandbox Desert. What we have so far would barely fit into a serial VN prologue.

- One more word: Ruglish. The prose flows out of this like box of brutalist apartment blocks.

- And finally, useless image map clickbait easter egg hunt minigame.

Both releases I didn't last long enough to get to the spillage of any bodily fluids if there is indeed any
 
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derpyderp123

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I've been hearing a lot of complaints about the MC, and I just don't understand it. You're not supposed to agree with the MC in every way or even at all. This isn't an RPG game. Sometimes the MC needs to be deeply flawed in order to tell a better story. Since this is a porn game, I'm not concerned with the moral of the story. I only care if it's erotic. Also. it seems to me that the MC was redeemed by risking his life to save Lana. So what's the big deal? It just seems like woke nonsense.
 

docdom

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Dec 30, 2018
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I quite liked this game. It definitely needs to be polished a bit more with better writing but I like the premise of the game, and the MC being on the receiving end of futa cock is nice. Looking forward to what else is in store for this game!

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There's a new(ish) version of the game out, which you can grab . The dialogue and other text has been rewritten (by myself) on all but Bell's (short woman) intro quest and some of Lana's quests (still WIP) with the permission of the original dev Magic Dude. The story remains much the same, but there is a great deal more dialogue and I have taken into account some of the feedback voiced here.
  • Most of the text is now in proper English.
  • Formatting more consistent across storylines (MC's thoughts are now always italicised for example).
  • All characters have more depth and personality than before.
  • The universe and story has been fleshed out and expanded where appropriate.
  • The MC is not so schizophrenic about futa sex anymore - he gets more into it the more he does it.
  • The sex scenes are spicier.
  • A few glaring continuity errors are fixed, most of them are in Lana's questline though so they remain for now until I figure out how best to rewrite those quests and remain true to the story.
Big shout-out to Magic Dude for letting me contribute to this project. I want to be clear that I volunteered originally because I saw this game's potential being compromised by poor written English through no particular fault of the dev, but once I had been very kindly furnished with a copy of the game's code, I found myself getting immersed in the universe Magic Dude had created. Either way, what I'm looking for now is further feedback from you guys:
  • Have the changes improved the game or not?
  • What parts do you like/not like?
  • Are there any pointers you would offer me regarding style/pacing/content?
  • What other changes would you recommend?
I look forward to seeing your comments, and relaying them back to Magic Dude! If you would, please go and check out his Patreon for update posts, preview content, and patron polls.
 

derpyderp123

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May 14, 2019
32
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There's a new(ish) version of the game out, which you can grab here. The dialogue and other text has been rewritten (by myself) on all but Bell's (short woman) intro quest and some of Lana's quests (still WIP) with the permission of the original dev Magic Dude. The story remains much the same, but there is a great deal more dialogue and I have taken into account some of the feedback voiced here.
  • Most of the text is now in proper English.
  • Formatting more consistent across storylines (MC's thoughts are now always italicised for example).
  • All characters have more depth and personality than before.
  • The universe and story has been fleshed out and expanded where appropriate.
  • The MC is not so schizophrenic about futa sex anymore - he gets more into it the more he does it.
  • The sex scenes are spicier.
  • A few glaring continuity errors are fixed, most of them are in Lana's questline though so they remain for now until I figure out how best to rewrite those quests and remain true to the story.
Big shout-out to Magic Dude for letting me contribute to this project. I want to be clear that I volunteered originally because I saw this game's potential being compromised by poor written English through no particular fault of the dev, but once I had been very kindly furnished with a copy of the game's code, I found myself getting immersed in the universe Magic Dude had created. Either way, what I'm looking for now is further feedback from you guys:
  • Have the changes improved the game or not?
  • What parts do you like/not like?
  • Are there any pointers you would offer me regarding style/pacing/content?
  • What other changes would you recommend?
I look forward to seeing your comments, and relaying them back to Magic Dude! If you would, please go and check out his Patreon for update posts, preview content, and patron polls.
In what way has the sex scenes become spicier?
 
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