- Jan 19, 2019
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- Thread starter Magic Dude
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Do any one know how the rest 2 futalian will be introduced ??
And really waiting for 0.5 android port if possible ?
And really waiting for 0.5 android port if possible ?
Why would a heterosexual man be curious about finding out the women here have 2' long dicks - HE IS NOT GAY
I'd argue that he's also not real, and can be written a different way. If he's intended to eventually open up to the idea of women with giant cock that want his booty, that's also fine.
Issues I'm seeing are either - A) The fetishes that the writer has chosen conflict completely with how the MC is written.
Or - B) The rate of the plot for intended fetishes completely outpaces the plot of the MC growing to be into it.
There is also the issue that (if everything is exactly as it should be with fetishes, plot, MC personality, etc.) there are some polarizing tags that are absolutely missing from the Overview post. We need to list ALL of them, and probably split them up into "current" and "planned" tags.
Otherwise, the easiest fix is to rewrite the way the MC thinks and interacts with the intended harem. As things stand, he's an unlikable, insensitive and annoying piece of shit incel with no redeeming qualities, that people playing this game would rather jettison into space, rather than let him near anyone remotely feminine.
Normally I would agree but a normal male would not start a harem with chicks with dicks - they are totally unreal and ugly the same as a male would be without one - thus no harem
To tell you the truth the MC should help the pirates capture all the dick girls and make them into food for the station
the game is cool and has beautiful characters but the content futa on male is inevitable, not to mention that no scene is avoidable as much as you can and skip things but it happens anyway. if you want to start a relationship with a futanari from what I'm seeing she will always fuck the MC we can only jump to not see, I don't know if I understand very well but in what I understand all the contents are avoidable which doesn't seem to happen. I'm going to drop this game but I wish you good luck.
- Oct 24, 2019
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I find it hard to play this thing for anything more than short stretches after these first two releases. Here's why:
- Almighty deity apparently handles logistics with their herd worse than an army of conscripts from a certain country. Aren't sky daddies supposed to be perfect?
- Plausibility sucks. MC has memories of their former body occupant which conceivably would be their metaverse double. Thus MC should not be surprised to find their future? girlfriend is packing and also not ask stupid questions about why meatbags still work for a living.
- The journal as implemented blows. Not really helpful at all with the who, where, what and when for quests and a mess to navigate.
- Two words: Sandbox Desert. What we have so far would barely fit into a serial VN prologue.
- One more word: Ruglish. The prose flows out of this like box of brutalist apartment blocks.
- And finally, useless image map clickbait easter egg hunt minigame.
Both releases I didn't last long enough to get to the spillage of any bodily fluids if there is indeed any
- Almighty deity apparently handles logistics with their herd worse than an army of conscripts from a certain country. Aren't sky daddies supposed to be perfect?
- Plausibility sucks. MC has memories of their former body occupant which conceivably would be their metaverse double. Thus MC should not be surprised to find their future? girlfriend is packing and also not ask stupid questions about why meatbags still work for a living.
- The journal as implemented blows. Not really helpful at all with the who, where, what and when for quests and a mess to navigate.
- Two words: Sandbox Desert. What we have so far would barely fit into a serial VN prologue.
- One more word: Ruglish. The prose flows out of this like box of brutalist apartment blocks.
- And finally, useless image map clickbait easter egg hunt minigame.
Both releases I didn't last long enough to get to the spillage of any bodily fluids if there is indeed any
- Aug 22, 2021
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I've been hearing a lot of complaints about the MC, and I just don't understand it. You're not supposed to agree with the MC in every way or even at all. This isn't an RPG game. Sometimes the MC needs to be deeply flawed in order to tell a better story. Since this is a porn game, I'm not concerned with the moral of the story. I only care if it's erotic. Also. it seems to me that the MC was redeemed by risking his life to save Lana. So what's the big deal? It just seems like woke nonsense.
I quite liked this game. It definitely needs to be polished a bit more with better writing but I like the premise of the game, and the MC being on the receiving end of futa cock is nice. Looking forward to what else is in store for this game!
4/5
4/5
Short answer? No.
Long answer? Just read the replies. and you'll understand how things work here.
There's a new(ish) version of the game out, which you can grab
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. The dialogue and other text has been rewritten (by myself) on all but Bell's (short woman) intro quest and some of Lana's quests (still WIP) with the permission of the original dev Magic Dude. The story remains much the same, but there is a great deal more dialogue and I have taken into account some of the feedback voiced here.- Most of the text is now in proper English.
- Formatting more consistent across storylines (MC's thoughts are now always italicised for example).
- All characters have more depth and personality than before.
- The universe and story has been fleshed out and expanded where appropriate.
- The MC is not so schizophrenic about futa sex anymore - he gets more into it the more he does it.
- The sex scenes are spicier.
- A few glaring continuity errors are fixed, most of them are in Lana's questline though so they remain for now until I figure out how best to rewrite those quests and remain true to the story.
- Have the changes improved the game or not?
- What parts do you like/not like?
- Are there any pointers you would offer me regarding style/pacing/content?
- What other changes would you recommend?
I replayed through all the game content that I know of and I think overall you've definitely succeeded in making the game more appealing to an English speaking audience. The sex scenes in particular I think are some of the best new writing.
Before I go into some things I did and didn't like so much I do want to give Magic Dude massive props for letting you go and edit his work. With all the effort that goes into these kinds of projects they become very personal and taking criticism can become difficult let alone letting someone else take your work and change it in any way. It takes a big person to accept that criticism and letting someone else in to change it is even harder. So absolutely massive respect to Magic Dude for that, you are the type of dev we need making games.
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TL;DR Yes! I believe you've definitely improved the game's appeal to an English speaking audience, particularly with the MC, Lana, general readability, and sex scenes. However, the improvements while significant are not perfect and are somewhat hampered by the need to conform to the scene material that has already been made. Additionally they do not have any impact on shortcomings already present in the game's mechanics.
P.S. Thanks for going out of your way to and taking the time to try and improve the game. You did a lot more than the rest of us and I appreciate the time and effort you've made to do what I haven't had the time or balls to do.
