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I've updated the OP with episode 3 and reported it to the mods. I removed the links I couldn't update myself.
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At the meeting in last chapter and a few images at the start of this one. there is a Blur over clients eye area.
It goes away after a few images, so that is why I was wondering if it was on purpose.
a ex-courier : an
at least your breathing properly : you're
Then what : (lacks punctuation)
geasa : (can't remember if this is how it was said in the last 2 chapters)
At the meeting in last chapter and a few images at the start of this one. there is a Blur over clients eye area.
It goes away after a few images, so that is why I was wondering if it was on purpose.
a ex-courier : an
at least your breathing properly : you're
Then what : (lacks punctuation)
geasa : (can't remember if this is how it was said in the last 2 chapters)
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Unofficial Android Port for EP3 Compressed :
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My Android Ports now have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.
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Thanks for the feedback
The blur is on purpose.
"Then what" is missing punctuation on purpose, she never finishes the sentence.
Geasa is basically plural and geas is singular so both are used.
I'll correct the other ones
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Thanks
I'm glad you like it, this episode, in particular, was... difficult to get done.
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Weird as hell.. never played anything like it.. Enjoyed every minute of it. Great renders and dialog, definitely one that I will be following. Two thumbs up. (Ususally don't write this short but not sure what else to say. Looking forward to the updates!)
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About the typo, you mean the line "To bad you're a fucking creep"? Are you sure? Grammarly claims it should be "to" and from my understanding, it should be correct.
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I gave the pen to Bad
Oh really? It's too bad it went to Bad and not to me!
You think so? Me too!
Well that makes two of us that this it's too bad
Oh really? It's too bad it went to Bad and not to me!
You think so? Me too!
Well that makes two of us that this it's too bad
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Some of the scenes give the feeling you're actually tripping or in a dream. Very beautiful visuals but strange transitions from scene to scene.
Why does MC discard his clothes just because they got wet?
Why does MC discard his clothes just because they got wet?
To break the tie, yes it should be too.
I wished the beating had some better shots, because it just seems like MC is talking to himself, we can't see anything so the opponent might have been dead at any point and it was all made up. I would suggest study a bit of cinematography for scenes like that.
Also spirit BJ felt like it ended abruptly, no cum or anything. Just a jump to a cuddle.
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I wished the beating had some better shots, because it just seems like MC is talking to himself, we can't see anything so the opponent might have been dead at any point and it was all made up. I would suggest study a bit of cinematography for scenes like that.
Also spirit BJ felt like it ended abruptly, no cum or anything. Just a jump to a cuddle.
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Thanks for the feedback!
I know I can certainly improve in many areas. I thought that scene was illuminated enough but it's hard to account for the many different screens and light settings people use. But to be certain, you are saying you couldn't see the two guys he hit or you couldn't see if they were alive or dead after they hit the ground?
About the "BJ", yeah very strange how it ended isn't it?
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