- Nov 20, 2017
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this game doesnt start at all, nothing happens after i hit the exe, only one i have problems from this site
- May 28, 2017
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- Nov 18, 2017
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Agree with the others. It'd be nice if more protags were taller. I don't know if it's a rendering issue or if devs just prefer making stories with young teen protags.
- Jul 13, 2018
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- Jan 7, 2022
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First impressions and non-exhaustive Review.
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- May 1, 2020
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MC doesn't have to be a giga chad, but he doesn't need to be a wet noodle either!!
His personality is questionable at best!!
His personality is questionable at best!!
- Apr 10, 2023
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I personally don't care much about the personality of the MC as long as the game has either harem or incest with nice renders but ofcourse if it has NTR/sharing, it's a HUGE nooo
- Sep 3, 2022
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doormat midget MC + broken english and meh writing. if you change the MC and get a proofreader the game might have some potential. also i very much doubt this is the devs first game but that is besides the point. renders do look good.
well i need to say this.......what makes a women fall for a man: wallet a big one with lot of money to spend,.2 -nice personality,alone doesnt cut so number 1 with number2 will be fine,. 3- handsome guy with a good debeloping body and not an asshole,[if have money better],.4- abig dick doesnt cut alone but if comes with money or a nice personality and handsomee will be almost a dream,....so many vn's now come with a mc that its a doormat,a "normal" dick[if for you 6 inches is normal,well someone lyed to you or still is lying to you,]. mc is an asshole no personality and a doormat,fuck that gaem,..mc is rdy to being a slave for a women ,and is open for a good cuckoldy seesion ,isnt worth the time..
so if the script is good enough we can approach this without being in the skin of the mc,but for me i cant play agame wich demans from me inmersion and i get shit for it......this here ,gets me ....to close to call,so after maybe a new profreader,and a couple of tweeks [strabism is a common thing but man ,this ladys all of them are looking me funny]......
so if the script is good enough we can approach this without being in the skin of the mc,but for me i cant play agame wich demans from me inmersion and i get shit for it......this here ,gets me ....to close to call,so after maybe a new profreader,and a couple of tweeks [strabism is a common thing but man ,this ladys all of them are looking me funny]......
- Jul 29, 2017
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I agree with you on almost everything, except for the personality, I think personality is very important.
For example I wouldn't mind if the MC is small and not so strong, but if on top of that he lets himself be pushed around, then he's a lost case.
On the other hand give him a strong personality, character and intelligence/astute, and the physique becomes less important.
- Oct 11, 2018
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Planned tags? Renders look nice and don't want future tag surprises
- Sep 22, 2021
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- I've set the game on "Ignore" already - the dialogues between the MC and all the others are a pain in the ass to read. Sorry, dev: the renders a quite good, but...
best regards
Those kneecaps are looking like some scary tumors.
- Jan 18, 2022
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Well, my grandma once said: "if you cannot say anything nice, don't say anything at all" so I try at least to be nice.
Story, yeah let's just say "been there, done that" like a thousand times.
Renders are on the better side. I daresay they are the best part here.
Music is... well not overly used at least, but a bit annoying.
The dialogues, starting with the one while moving with the best (female) friend via public transportation (great idea btw...) uff. It is not the worst I had, but it is failing so hard trying to be funny (the music accompaning it at least makes me think it is supposed to be) that it is almost tragic. The english itself is also a bit "off", nothing to major but still.
Sex (dream) scene is decent, not that I am to fond of fantasizing about fucking a woman I just have seen for 10 seconds - but I guess I am a minority on this site with it - you horndogs.
Then more dialogue with the best friend, and - how surprising - they don't even know how the place they move in looks like. Does anyone in the world (other than homeless people finally finding ANYTHING) really do that?
More strange dialogues with best friend, man and woman he meets on the street, talking to a coffee shop owner looking for a job. I guess the MC thinks he some kind of court-jester, but it is pretty much light cringe most of the time.
Next day, MC wakes up early - does litterally nothing but is still late to work... makes no sense. But doesn't matter in the end. MC daydreams on his way to work - some flashback about his father saying to him he should do what makes him happy. MC is even more late to work, or let's say he doesn't even arrive because he is fired.
MC still arrives at the coffee shop to collect his salary for the 3 hours he worked the day before, beats up 3 guys, dialogue get's weirder with each line. Also adressing females as "him", "he" or "this guy" tells me something about the whereabouts of the dev.
Lands a new job and already thinks about moving again with his best friend. Yeah sure, you just moved in 1 day ago and your best friend spent most of the first day to clean the place up.
Lands another job as a assistant bodyguard to some internetmodel, that is the niece of the coffeeshop owner. For some reason both enroll in some blessed kids university and that is all folks.
Is it good? Nah, for me at least it is more "meh.
Is it bad? Not really, but it is nothing that stands out and that could be a problem because there are so many VNs.
So in conclusion 3/5. Maybe 3,5/5 if you can look past the strange talking. I see the work that went into it and for this at least I give a thumbs up.
Try it out, but I really doubt this will become anyone's favorite - with version 1 at least.
Oh yeah and why does the MC always sweat when everyone else does not? Some kind of thyroid dysfunction?
Story, yeah let's just say "been there, done that" like a thousand times.
Renders are on the better side. I daresay they are the best part here.
Music is... well not overly used at least, but a bit annoying.
The dialogues, starting with the one while moving with the best (female) friend via public transportation (great idea btw...) uff. It is not the worst I had, but it is failing so hard trying to be funny (the music accompaning it at least makes me think it is supposed to be) that it is almost tragic. The english itself is also a bit "off", nothing to major but still.
Sex (dream) scene is decent, not that I am to fond of fantasizing about fucking a woman I just have seen for 10 seconds - but I guess I am a minority on this site with it - you horndogs.
Then more dialogue with the best friend, and - how surprising - they don't even know how the place they move in looks like. Does anyone in the world (other than homeless people finally finding ANYTHING) really do that?
More strange dialogues with best friend, man and woman he meets on the street, talking to a coffee shop owner looking for a job. I guess the MC thinks he some kind of court-jester, but it is pretty much light cringe most of the time.
Next day, MC wakes up early - does litterally nothing but is still late to work... makes no sense. But doesn't matter in the end. MC daydreams on his way to work - some flashback about his father saying to him he should do what makes him happy. MC is even more late to work, or let's say he doesn't even arrive because he is fired.
MC still arrives at the coffee shop to collect his salary for the 3 hours he worked the day before, beats up 3 guys, dialogue get's weirder with each line. Also adressing females as "him", "he" or "this guy" tells me something about the whereabouts of the dev.
Lands a new job and already thinks about moving again with his best friend. Yeah sure, you just moved in 1 day ago and your best friend spent most of the first day to clean the place up.
Lands another job as a assistant bodyguard to some internetmodel, that is the niece of the coffeeshop owner. For some reason both enroll in some blessed kids university and that is all folks.
Is it good? Nah, for me at least it is more "meh.
Is it bad? Not really, but it is nothing that stands out and that could be a problem because there are so many VNs.
So in conclusion 3/5. Maybe 3,5/5 if you can look past the strange talking. I see the work that went into it and for this at least I give a thumbs up.
Try it out, but I really doubt this will become anyone's favorite - with version 1 at least.
Oh yeah and why does the MC always sweat when everyone else does not? Some kind of thyroid dysfunction?
- Aug 3, 2018
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yeah the next vn with an mc that looks like a schoolboy with all the women a head taller, more like a femdom i bet humilation is the next tag....yeah little guys also need love,yes, but not in my games please
- Nov 21, 2022
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Physical aspect ain't no big deal imo.
Personality, attitude and demeanour are most important.
Though gonna give this the benefit of doubt, its just at the introductory stages. Maybe dev is aiming for character growth & development for MC.
Personality, attitude and demeanour are most important.
Though gonna give this the benefit of doubt, its just at the introductory stages. Maybe dev is aiming for character growth & development for MC.
- Jan 22, 2021
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If the dev reads your comments (the majority), he'll abandon the game straight away!