VN Ren'Py Steps to Fame [v0.1] [LimWick]

[LadySpider]

Normally I try not to go to hard on first releases, but there really isn't anything redeeming about this outside of the renders, and even some of the renders have issues

The grammar is the biggest thing, usually I don't mind if I can at least get the gist of whats being said, but a good portion of this made no sense, and using the wrong gender in dialogue with multiple people had me beyond lost as to who was being spoken about.

The story has a decent premise, but is terribly executed. You move to a city with no plan or job yet you somehow already have an apartment. You get a job and no-show, but the boss who fires you trusts you enough and vouches for you? I don't care if the MC fought off people, that doesn't show he is trustworthy as a worker

I understand this is your first project, I would highly recommend stepping back, find a proof reader, and really work out a logical story line that can at least make a hint of common sense

 

[Tverdislav Yablochko]

Decent models at last. High quality and good taste, no disgusting oversized melons.

 

[Skylaroo]

I just noticed that the dev is LimWick but the writer is Circus and coder is Ikarus. I don't know if LimWick is the duo or someone different altogether, and I don't know who Circus is, but man, the writing is indeed like a circus. Kudos to Circus for the character design though, credit where its due, the characters are mostly well designed.

Bad grammar can be fixed so I have nothing against non English native speaker. But the main issue is that I just don't quite understand why the characters are written the way they are. There's just no logic to it. This really needs a massive rewrite if it's going for long-term success.

 

[Jnx]

Someone get this girl some glasses

 

[MOGGERrn]

I agree with you on almost everything, except for the personality, I think personality is very important.
For example I wouldn't mind if the MC is small and not so strong, but if on top of that he lets himself be pushed around, then he's a lost case.
On the other hand give him a strong personality, character and intelligence/astute, and the physique becomes less important.

I do agree that personality is important but we can atleast hope for a wimp MC to become a chad as the story goes if its not a NTR story but if it's a NTR story then the chances of MC becoming a Chad is 0, no its less than a zero, bro would probably become a cuck in a NTR story.....wait a min, I actually forgot that there are femdom stories out there without NTR..fuck..

I hope that this won't turn into a femdom game and MC will actually grow balls.

 

[Pinsel]

Yeah, i just give up midway. Either the text was written by an AI or it was simply very badly translated. Sometimes the story just didn't make sense. Even as a non-English speaker, I just couldn't read any further.

But i like the characters

 

[Burnknight]

Good renders, good models, but it has all the makings of a game that gets abandoned by the 3rd max 5th update once the dev realizes its not so easy to keep deadlines and promised release dates. But hey, lets hope I am wrong.

 

[Reacte]

Someone get this girl some glasses
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This is because you have to adjust each eye individually. If you just use the option for both eyes at the same time, something like this will happen.
It happened to me at the beginning too, but you can see that it's a mistake and learn from it.

 

[AL.d]

I'm starting to believe devs have some kind of complex with male height. I can't find any other reason for the overabundance of goblin manlets that are always surrounded by giant women wanting their dick. Maybe some trauma from tinder dating.

 

[mrjessan]

Another great looking game. Unfortunately will be abandoned soon

 

[Furrexx]

Good quality renders, decent assets and models. This shit is gonna be abandoned by the 3rd or 4th update isn't it?

One update per year

 

[Dogorti]

The last review is a joke. I really hate when devs create multi-accounts or send friends to give their game a positive review. really cringe stuff.

 

[FatGiant]

The last review is a joke. I really hate when devs create multi-accounts or send friends to give their game a positive review. really cringe stuff.

Don't tell US, tell the moderation team with a report.

Peace

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Can't get it to start for whatever reason, and given some of the comments about the MC I'm disinclined to bother trying to solve the issue.

 

[Furrexx]

WTF with all this comments about mc appereance? Its not gay novel dudes

 

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of :
Steps TO Fame [v0.1]

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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required
Download​

 

[vonamatas]

Maybe some trauma from tinder dating.

Probably not this case, theoretically you have to be an adult to use Tinder (in practice, you can set up an account even if you are a minor)

I'm starting to believe devs have some kind of complex with male height. I can't find any other reason for the overabundance of goblin manlets that are always surrounded by giant women wanting their dick.

If you don't know what it's about, it's always about money!

Who is the biggest audience for this type of "art" (games)?
Males, age 12-16
(before having sex with another person for the first time, which depends mainly on where they live)
To attract these customers, the MC has to either be "like them" (teen vibe, if you know what I mean) or be... an idol to them? or smth.
Not Chad Tyrone or any other bully, because these are the guys they see every day at school -> which isn't fun if you're a weak beta male (...I think?)
Do I have to explain why women are "too big"? and they have huge tits/butts...yes, teenage boys have VERY predictable dreams! sex with the teacher is first on the list

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

the game as a whole is not bad, the plot, the characters are perfectly worked out, but the musical component in this game is not enough, every music is suitable for every moment, so let's see what happens next.

 

[FatGiant]

I've been reading everyone complaining about the MC's height.

He is NOT short. It's just that everyone has the same standard height in DAZ3D. 6 ft. Everyone. But, when the girls get high heels, well it adds up. If they stand on tippy toes, it also make them look taller.

The Dev team, forgot to use the characters height slider. Alice should be even taller. You would know if you had seen a Model in Real Life.

Peace

 

[FatGiant]

the game as a whole is not bad, the plot, the characters are perfectly worked out, but the musical component in this game is not enough, every music is suitable for every moment, so let's see what happens next.

What version of the game has you played that the dialogues make sense? I wish the music would be the worst problem, just MUTE it and fire up Spotify.

Peace