VN Ren'Py Steps to Fame [v0.1] [LimWick]

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Thami_

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the models are rather nice, but the english is really badly translated, and that the story is a bit meh but hopoe it be improved.
 

Docc777

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I downloaded the game because the pics looked decent. I stopped the game a few minutes later because the story and dialogue is :unsure: . . .thinking . . . more thinking. . . yeah it´s :poop:! Sorry but nothing here makes any sense. And it is damn painful to read!
 
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Skylaroo

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WTF with all this comments about mc appereance? Its not gay novel dudes
What we can learn from being in a porn game forum is that a lot of male players self-insert themselves into these games imagining that they are the MC so they prefer to fantasize that they are the "alpha". They are extremely offended when they have to play a character that doesn't fit their imagination of what "alpha" male looks like due to their insecurity.
 

jjw2022

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Yeah, I've seen some of the previous posts complaining that 'dreams' are the first 'sex scenes' and there's too much THINKING?!! Being told, often in "My Life"©, I was "too smart for my own good". How smart is... 'just smart enough'? Pretty low bar, these days.

Been playing only 15 minutes and I'm engrossed in the scenario (relevant to today). Perhaps some of the possible audience for VNs enjoy the journey via their avatars. I enjoy vicarious sex scenes, but I LOVE a great story. The dialogues need some 'non-native English Speaker' editing needed, but I'm 'multi-cultural' in my life experiences and overlook grammar errors when communicating with someone. Kudos for your work.
 

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Yeah, I've seen some of the previous posts complaining that 'dreams' are the first 'sex scenes' and there's too much THINKING?!! Being told, often in "My Life"©, I was "too smart for my own good". How smart is... 'just smart enough'? Pretty low bar, these days.

Been playing only 15 minutes and I'm engrossed in the scenario (relevant to today). Perhaps some of the possible audience for VNs enjoy the journey via their avatars. I enjoy vicarious sex scenes, but I LOVE a great story. The dialogues need some 'non-native English Speaker' editing needed, but I'm 'multi-cultural' in my life experiences and overlook grammar errors when communicating with someone. Kudos for your work.
No! Just... NO.

Let me be clear, I understand that not everyone has a good handle on English. It's not a problem.

What is a problem, is that this Dev team, by their own decision, knowing full well that they: 1- don't speak English or 2- don't care about it, made the decision to publish themselves a game in this sad state. This tells us, that they don't care. Then we go into the game, and there's at least one coding error when the MC is talking with Alice in the car. There's plenty of Strabic people. There's the height issues. Then there's the Fake reviews here. Posts like yours telling us that in reality we aren't seeing a very bad job, but a good one. That WE are the problem, not this Dev team that simply couldn't care less. That the story(?) is good. What story if they can't even get the genders straight? Kudos for this work? The dialogues need editing? No, they need to be remade.

The MC is a stupid ass. He brought his best friend to be his "Mommy", to clean the house for him, to wake him up. He can't be responsible for himself, he treats everyone with bad manners, he is a smart-ass and I simply couldn't find one single thing about him that I could like. He's a fucking child with a bad attitude problem.

The best friend is simply irrelevant. If she wasn't there, no one would even notice. Oh, she's good at cleaning HIS house. And has an alarm clock.

I couldn't understand anything in the dialogues with Darrel. Why call him Drex? What's the point of it? The wife, the Strabic Vampire, what is she even there for? Nothing in that scene made any fucking sense.

Alice, rude, entitled and "Hot". Not a nice person. Just as bad as the MC.

No one, not a single one, is a half-decent character. None of the scenes make any sense, because either the writing is BAD or the translation kills it.

No, this is not a good job. This is in fact a really BAD job.

Peace :(
 

Snusen

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The entire dialogue in this game feels AI generated. What the fuck. It's so god damn bad to read. Had to start skipping just to see if there was anything worthy of, But there isn't.

Just some weird ass power fantasy story where MC is the greatest and everyone around him apparently is stupid.
 

ViperGts151

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Jesus this doesn't make any sense can definitely tell the dev doesn't have a proofreader or didn't check themselves
 

rafaaa

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Renders are good and story its interesting. Hope that the game has more choices and that the choices have impact on the story and the relations with the girls, hope there is more choices to choose (instead of 2 to have 3) in the future,hope that the girls arent all slutty. The game has potential but the dev cant get lost on the story,have more choices with impact on story and relations with girls and a tutorial explaining the symbols on the top and on the side of the choices and what they mean, there is tons os misspelling and that needs to be fixed and during the 1st sex scene the frames go down and after that the frames stay down and needs to be fixed.
 

Black Orchid

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What we can learn from being in a porn game forum is that a lot of male players self-insert themselves into these games imagining that they are the MC so they prefer to fantasize that they are the "alpha". They are extremely offended when they have to play a character that doesn't fit their imagination of what "alpha" male looks like due to their insecurity.
i would say it is more of a suspension of disbelief thing. would it be appropriate for james bond to be a 300 lbs 5 foot tall unathletic man? the answer is no, it woudn't. in the context of most visual novels, it makes no sense for the MC to not be conventionally attractive.
 
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