- Nov 9, 2020
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looks good overall, don't see why bother to put the HS2 warning.
Only con for me would be the lack to corrupt the girls, but that's just my preference
Only con for me would be the lack to corrupt the girls, but that's just my preference
That's actually a kinda big part of the future. This is just the first release. That kinda thing will be expanded upon once they reache the academy in future releases. I only really put the HS2 warning because I see people sometimes going all "HS ew.. DAZ or die" and that kinda thing just isn't useful.
i see, good to know, added to my ever growing watch list lol.
tbh i've seen far worst games on renpy and unity than HS, let alone rpgm
Was interested in the game until you started with this bullshit.
Do you object to the part about it not being in the game yet, or the part where it will be in the future?
- Feb 14, 2018
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First of all, thanks for sharing, second, your game looks very good, it has a premise that, although it is not original, does not mean that it cannot be excellent, so good luck.
As for the sandbox part, many don't like this because of its repetitiveness, "go with a girl, talk to her, earn 100 points and then watch a cutscene, and so on with all of them", so I would recommend that, if you are going to insert sandbox, either as summertime saga or as milf city, that is, without "affection points" and directly to the scenes, that helps users not get bored, additionally inserting things like jobs or skill improvement can help to be entertaining.
Regarding the "possible" (although I hope unlikely) "share" content (if you don't really think of putting this content, please ignore this part), I recommend that it be according to the story, that is, if the MC is dominant and is going to to have his harem, the most logical thing is that, if he puts something in, it is more like a trio or something like that (MC, ally of the MC and girl), this to have coherence with the plot, since someone appears and steals his girls to the MC (optional or not) just would not be consistent, this is just a suggestion.
Taking all of the above into account, I think your game has a lot of power, I wish you luck and they were only suggestions, I hope they are not taken the wrong way.
As for the sandbox part, many don't like this because of its repetitiveness, "go with a girl, talk to her, earn 100 points and then watch a cutscene, and so on with all of them", so I would recommend that, if you are going to insert sandbox, either as summertime saga or as milf city, that is, without "affection points" and directly to the scenes, that helps users not get bored, additionally inserting things like jobs or skill improvement can help to be entertaining.
Regarding the "possible" (although I hope unlikely) "share" content (if you don't really think of putting this content, please ignore this part), I recommend that it be according to the story, that is, if the MC is dominant and is going to to have his harem, the most logical thing is that, if he puts something in, it is more like a trio or something like that (MC, ally of the MC and girl), this to have coherence with the plot, since someone appears and steals his girls to the MC (optional or not) just would not be consistent, this is just a suggestion.
Taking all of the above into account, I think your game has a lot of power, I wish you luck and they were only suggestions, I hope they are not taken the wrong way.
Thanks for the feedback dude, of course I'll take it as you mean it, with the best intentions.
Everything you said came across as constructive and useful, so thanks for your input!
I agree with this completely. I haven't actually played either of those games (I tried ss, but the art wasn't for me) but the grindy earning points bullshit is something I want to avoid. I'm planning to make it more along the lines of having a map where you can choose different locations since there's lots of different characters, and I want people to be able to focus on the ones they like then go straight to the content for those characters. There may still be some requirements for certain events to trigger, but I decided early on to avoid the if love points greater than X kinda stuff.
This is honestly not something I'm expecting to include, as I have something else planned which isn't really sharing, but still allows for interesting group sex scenes depending on your perspective. Personally I don't like these tags, so I'd only really include them if there was a lot of demand for it, and there was a way I could write it in convincingly. I'd prefer to focus on other stuff really.
Thanks man, it's kinda scary putting something you've put a bunch of time into out there for people to see, but so far it seems like people have liked itTaking all of the above into account, I think your game has a lot of power, I wish you luck and they were only suggestions, I hope they are not taken the wrong way.
Everything you said came across as constructive and useful, so thanks for your input!
Updated to v0.1.01 (Except for the workupload links. I didn't put those there so I've only updated gdrive, mega and mediafire)
It literally just fixes a typo that was causing an error in Riley's bedroom. If you've already downloaded, just press ignore. You'll miss one line of unimportant dialogue and it'll save from you downloading again.
It literally just fixes a typo that was causing an error in Riley's bedroom. If you've already downloaded, just press ignore. You'll miss one line of unimportant dialogue and it'll save from you downloading again.
- Jun 16, 2018
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Hey Dev
Just played your prologue. Pretty interesting to be honest, the magic hands stuff is also pretty original in these kind of games so I wanna see where you go with that.
The only real complaint I have is how MC looks like a guy wearing heavy makeup haha. Maybe tone down the color of his lips? It's super noticeable in that scene where he's getting towels for the girls.
Anyway, nice work mate.
Just played your prologue. Pretty interesting to be honest, the magic hands stuff is also pretty original in these kind of games so I wanna see where you go with that.
The only real complaint I have is how MC looks like a guy wearing heavy makeup haha. Maybe tone down the color of his lips? It's super noticeable in that scene where he's getting towels for the girls.
Anyway, nice work mate.
Hmmm, I'd never really noticed that while I was making it but I just looked at it again and now I can't unsee it
I'll have to boot up the studio at some point tomorrow to see if that's just the lighting, or if that's actually how it is, but yeah, I'll keep an eye on that. Thanks for pointing it out, and thanks for playing
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- Apr 29, 2018
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I'm curious btw, did you manage to get the 3rd animated scene? (Riley in MC's bedroom) I wasn't sure if I'd made that one too specific to unlock for an initial release.
- Feb 11, 2018
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Is this gonna be forced harem or will be able to pick who we wanna romance?
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If you've played this first release you'll know you have the choice to reject any of the scenes. (And even the chance to actually miss the 3rd one depending on your choices) At the moment they don't really affect your relationships with characters, but in future, they will, but the choices will always be there.
(And yeah, ngl that one is my fav for cassie as well, at least out of the ones I've decided to show for her so far
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I'll use your quote to let everyone know I guess. The patreon page has passed review, so it's now up and running!
I know this is basically a pirate site but I wanna control at very least the tags and descriptions. I guess if you feel like spending money, you can at my patreon. I'm sure the non public releases will get leaked here anyway, and I'm not gonna stop it. There may be patreon exclusive stuff that outright can't be leaked here (Names in credits, that kinda thing) but for now, just enjoy the game however you like. I just think it's pretty cool that people are playing it. I'd better get back to work ;D
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- Jul 19, 2020
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Just finished and i cant come up with anything negative to say about it honestly, i really liked it. The writing is very good and got a few chuckles out of me at times, the visuals are top notch as well, as are the animations. I also like the little sound effects used at times to emphasize the dialogue, when riley calls the MC for the first time for example. The girls we've seen so far are all cute and from the sneak peek you get at the main menu the girls that we're gonna get in the future look just as good. Tho i do find the model used for the MC a bit weird? But at least it's not the same one used in so many other HS games, it doesn't bother me much, the girls are always what's most important.
I did get the one error others have reported as well but that seems to be fixed already. Oh and for some reason the last animation with Riley kinda went crazy on me, not sure if it's my system or something else cause i didn't have any problems with any of the other animations. Specificaly it happened when the timer bar thingy appeared at top when she's about to cum, the screen started flickering and the animation basically spazzed out but as soon as the bar was gone it played normally again. Again not sure what's going on there but that was the only problem i came across.
Any way great stuff Atemsiel, keep up the good work and i'll definitely keep an eye on this one in the future
I did get the one error others have reported as well but that seems to be fixed already. Oh and for some reason the last animation with Riley kinda went crazy on me, not sure if it's my system or something else cause i didn't have any problems with any of the other animations. Specificaly it happened when the timer bar thingy appeared at top when she's about to cum, the screen started flickering and the animation basically spazzed out but as soon as the bar was gone it played normally again. Again not sure what's going on there but that was the only problem i came across.
Any way great stuff Atemsiel, keep up the good work and i'll definitely keep an eye on this one in the future