Ren'Py Abandoned Story [v0.3] [story and magic]

[PJWhoopie]

story_and_magic
I think you just need to make your game the way you want to, and let the chips fall where they may.

I liked the story, and I will stick with it cause I am curious person.

One bit of advice though, I think you need to refrain from feeling you have to defend yourself in posts here about your development decisions. Its a bit of a quicksand trap that will suck your development energy down, and you are going to need every bit of it to persevere through.

Daz is free, this site has plenty of free resources, Renpy is free as well... so if anyone doesn't like your vision, or xyz tags, they are free to develop their own game to meet their own satisfaction.

Then, they will get to deal with all of the "you should have done it this ways" themselves.

Keep at it, you are doing just fine.

 

[Hornyowl]

story_and_magic ...just got around to playing the update. Haven't finished as yet but the number of script errors (grammar, spelling etc.) is a lot. Maybe you could look at getting someone to proofread the script?

 

[JmTrad]

One of the best games around here at the moment. Lliking the story. It feels good to se a game that respect the days passing by. Majority of them try to make the MC goes from nothing to a harem protagonist in less than 1 week.

Also, please make the story you want to tell, trying to please others only ends with abandoned games. If some people hate the futa tag just leave them be. I would simply ignore them. They will only be happy when you remove it.

anyone knows what the crystals do?

In the ending of 0.3 we read on the book that red crystal is illegal to have, and red+green can revive the dead. Maybe will be something to do with the vegetable stall girl since she don't know if her friend is alive or dead.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I wish there was a walkthrough to give what each choice means.

 

[mrttao]

wait wheres the futa, i came looking for futa

It is in the future. it doesn't exist yet

 

[DrFree]

Found these typos:

 

[Herbert1]

I'd recommend changing the name of the game - right now it's impossible to search for which is a big disadvantage if you want to spread it to a wider audience.

 

[PJWhoopie]

Hmmmm probably good advice Herbert1... just from a sheer marketing perspective.

How about a naming contest?

 

[Weyrd]

Just played through 0.3 and it was a great story (pun intended). I like the characters, a bit more choice would be nice but overall a good interesting game.

 

[Onetogo]

Would be funny if we dont have high enough skill, the MC cant transform back to male.

I would agree for sheer comic relief, but only if somewhere he learns how to reverse shortly down the road(not permanent)...or maybe part of the comic relief is that someone that can transform them back "holds the hostage" until they perform something that is embarrassing. Use your imagination.

I'd recommend changing the name of the game - right now it's impossible to search for which is a big disadvantage if you want to spread it to a wider audience.

Agreed doing a search for "story" provided search results about stories in general or recommendations. I had to perform a boolean search on my browser to locate the game within f95zone.

 

[xdxdxdyopyop]

I really liked the story.

 

[FunFuntomes]

I see here people really heat it up about futa tag. I think it would be good to give a little clarification.
Amazon (Zomalia) land is just a small part of the story. Sex would be there only if you want it. (MC could fuck girl and not the other way around. No gay sex too.)
You can just cast a spell, cross the land and move on.

Also MC will not be submissive to anyone! He can get caught and have a hard time, but he will escape.
He will take over castles, lead armies, control and kill people etc... Does this sounds like pathetic and weak guy? No.
Hope this will clear the air here and everyone could now move on from this futa future tag. Totally optional and you will not see shit from it, if you don't like it.

And thank you for trying the game.

all nice an dandy but th most pressing question is.. will MC ever bed Helga and Tyra ?

 

[bruce555]

I like this game. Nice update!

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

Do the slavers still come for the village and take the women if we choose NOT to marry Maola but will choose to stick around and be the next shaman/help out the village? I'd rather marry Ria... and eventually Uma instead of Maola.

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

all nice an dandy but th most pressing question is.. will MC ever bed Helga and Tyra ?

Yeah, for those of us who passed on marrying Maola, I wanted to take Kirk up on his offer and look for a wife in Bork... or at least another member to add to the harem.

 

[Onetogo]

I have yet to hear any rule set that you cannot marry more then one woman. It's presumptuous to think a culture which doesn't frown upon a harem would then frown upon taking for yourself more wives. The dev should clarify how many wives you can have.

 

[FunFuntomes]

Yeah, for those of us who passed on marrying Maola, I wanted to take Kirk up on his offer and look for a wife in Bork... or at least another member to add to the harem.

can't you just look elsewhere and still marry her?

 

[Canto Forte]

Stogory the torry.

Episode 4 trailer

Trailer of Ep.4: The Necromancers

How about a naming contest?

Atols across time.
Cinders of atonement
Run your time
Tempest over storytimes

 

[MrBenny]

OK, I wanted to see the status of this title...and man, what a pain in the ass trying to search using just the word STORY. But I'm glad that this title doesn't have the abandon tag, as I'm looking forward to more future content from this STORY called STORY.

 

[22ndgentlemen]

OK, I wanted to see the status of this title...and man, what a pain in the ass trying to search using just the word STORY. But I'm glad that this title doesn't have the abandon tag, as I'm looking forward to more future content from this STORY called STORY.

I find it easier to use the search bar like this to find it:

Search Titles Only, make sure this is checked
Where to search? Change This Thread to Everywhere
What to type into the field? story_and_magic

basically you are searching for the dev's name