VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Son of Durin

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present most likely, if fb then she would be in ring.
I believe that first preview pic is of the woman he was going to marry that got killed in the war. If so, it can only be a flashback.

And now you have me explaining my pun. You take all the fun out of things some times. :rolleyes:
 
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Elduriel

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I believe that first preview pic is of the woman he was going to marry that got killed in the war. If so, it can only be a flashback.

And now you have me explaining my pun. You take all the fun out of things some times. :rolleyes:
not necessarily a flashback, MC has been "conversing" with Davis as well as Zaina in real time... the background of the picture however looks east-ish, so probably a flashback?
 

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She serves a very important role. She shall birth the beginnings of my legion of new warriors.

I mean.. sure, it'll be Call of Shooty warriors, but it still counts!
even if they all are girls? :p

whatabout rest girls?
 

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even if they all are girls? :p
Especially if they are all girls. I ain't raising no pampered princess candyasses.
whatabout rest girls?
Subject to whim. Ines+Vi is pretty much the only combo I'm interested in, though I do have an appetite for Ms. Katie Kafton, even after we found out how bad her dirty talk is.

It's nice that Kana and Amrit have a little bit of color to them, but I don't find them remotely as appealing overall. Elspeth I find physically unappealing (yes, yes, grab your pitchforks) due to both her actual model traits, and that shade of red is completely unnatural in appearance. Cute freckles, good (initial) personality, but the lack of physical appeal coupled with the player's omniscient role (and seeing that she's untrustworthy, digging into MC's personal details via questionable means rather than just asking him), that's putting her into the psycho role as far as I'm concerned. (that is, crazy redheaded nurse type).

Not sticking my MC's dick in that deep well of crazy, no thank you. Avoiding Reenie for similar reasons (psycho!)

The ring girls could come after me with an axe and I would still trust them more.
 
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Walter Victor

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Latest progress report from the developer at Patreon:

Check In 06/23/2023

No fun image this week, and my deepest apologies for being a few days behind on this update.

Renders are 3663 of 3721 completed. If you were hanging around discord last weekend you probably already heard about the difficulties a batch of renders was having, rendering no pun intended. I lost a day or so troubleshooting, but figured out a workaround. Now we're back moving forward. Posing what should be the last main scene, and then it's just fixes and supplemental work. If I'm lucky I might be able to squeeze it in under 4000 renders. Knock on wood, please God let it stay under 4000 renders. What was I saying? Anyway ...

Animations are still in the same place as previous few weeks, with the point there at they're on the backburner until I can finish everything else. Most likely they'll be the last things that finish completely.

Testers will be receiving things this week, and I've informed them of my projected release. I'll be giving it here when testing and everything has placed it near completion. The weekly updates will probably be less dense in the next few weeks, for expediency sake, I know you folks are ready to actually play the update instead of reading about it so I'll attempt to engage in a little more brevity as we approach the drop.

Okay I'm done with the word vomit, Thanks as always for the support and I hope you have a lovely weekend.

Sláinte!
 

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PlayingThe Author atm and had a good laugh in a mc/christine conversation:

MC (Author) : Still a bit early, but that means i can give one of my patented pep talks.

Christine: Your pep talks are terrible, you know that right?

MC: Valentine likes them ..

Christine: Valentine likes getting shot at ..


Made me laugh lol, i kinda like the friendship bond between the four of them even tho its not explored too deeply
 

Walter Victor

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Latest progress report from the developer at Patreon:


Check In 06/29/2023

Hey all,

Renders are 3721 of 3750 completed. Trying to get all the posed renders finished before I jump into the last bit of posing.

Animations are waiting on final rendering.

Testers have a first build. Now I'll just add and they'll test, so on and so forth until release. Finishing up the special render sets and the Dev journal for this month tonight and then for the foreseeable future it's crunch time.

See, promised I'd keep it brief. Thanks as always for the support and I hope you have a lovely weekend.

Sláinte!
 

Son of Durin

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Latest progress report from the developer at Patreon:


Check In 06/29/2023

Hey all,

Renders are 3721 of 3750 completed. Trying to get all the posed renders finished before I jump into the last bit of posing.

Animations are waiting on final rendering.

Testers have a first build. Now I'll just add and they'll test, so on and so forth until release. Finishing up the special render sets and the Dev journal for this month tonight and then for the foreseeable future it's crunch time.

See, promised I'd keep it brief. Thanks as always for the support and I hope you have a lovely weekend.

Sláinte!
Would love to find a source for the special render sets - I bet they're exquisite...
 

Walter Victor

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A journal entry from the developer at Patreon:
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Dev Journal June 2023

And now the final bit of business slipping in while I have the moment this month's journal. Today I'll be talking a little bit about Zaina and Davis.

Both characters were originally written as explorations of grief and loss, obviously with Zaina the loss of a romantic partner and with Davis the loss of an old friend, even without the additional grief of his death the realization that somebody who's been your constant companion a majority of your life is actually kind of a shit person and that you've reached a point where you may not be able to keep them in your life anymore. The latter is a pretty common experience I feel, I think we've all had somebody like that.

Zaina and Davis are also just important to Valentine as two people who had huge impacts in his life. While yes they've both died I still want them to feel like characters in their own right. Certainly we see small bits of it in flashbacks, but I still wanted to give them time to breathe as well.

Because AVNs are a visual medium, characters talking to themselves to can a bit boring, especially if they're somewhat introspective. Fortunately for me there was a ready made solution. Having people speak to imagined apparitions as foils has been a longstanding trope in media and if the shoe fits than damn it I'm going to use it.

Obviously we know that dead aren't really speaking to Valentine, and obviously he's aware of it himself, but it allows for them to be characters in their own ways. Davis gets mad if you pursue Vi, Zaina has a protective streak towards Valentine. However because of this you enter unreliable narrator territory, Davis and Zaina aren't real, they appear and act as Valentine wants/remembers them being. This plays into the game element of the whole thing. They're typical "Angel and Devil" trope fare. But not so dramatic.

I tend to personally think of them as "The person I could be, and the person I don't want to be. Valentine idealizes the time he spent with Zaina, he liked who he was at the time she was in his life, whereas the Davis he's currently remembering comes from a point in time when he was somebody he didn't like all that much. While Val is in general a nicer person he has significant self hate towards certain parts of his life, to him Davis represents these parts. Depending on the choices you make you end up having more interaction with one or the either. It's my arty farty bullshit way of visually representing where your choices might lead. You'll see one or the other more often depending.

Now I know some people might now be worried they've somehow done things wrong, but I want you to get that out of your head. Something that's important to remember is that when it comes to this in particular there are very few "wrong" answers. Just different, there very well may be situations where being more like Davis is advantageous, honestly I just want you to make the choices you think work. And bond with whatever ghost buddy you want, I think they both have fun things to say.

Eventually though I suspect that our friendly ghosts will eventually fade away, once their business is concluded. But until then I'd advise you to pay attention to some of the things they say. They're your subconscious after all and they pick up on things...

Cue spooky music.

Thanks as always for your support.

Sláinte!
 

Son of Durin

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A journal entry from the developer at Patreon:
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Dev Journal June 2023

And now the final bit of business slipping in while I have the moment this month's journal. Today I'll be talking a little bit about Zaina and Davis.

Both characters were originally written as explorations of grief and loss, obviously with Zaina the loss of a romantic partner and with Davis the loss of an old friend, even without the additional grief of his death the realization that somebody who's been your constant companion a majority of your life is actually kind of a shit person and that you've reached a point where you may not be able to keep them in your life anymore. The latter is a pretty common experience I feel, I think we've all had somebody like that.

Zaina and Davis are also just important to Valentine as two people who had huge impacts in his life. While yes they've both died I still want them to feel like characters in their own right. Certainly we see small bits of it in flashbacks, but I still wanted to give them time to breathe as well.

Because AVNs are a visual medium, characters talking to themselves to can a bit boring, especially if they're somewhat introspective. Fortunately for me there was a ready made solution. Having people speak to imagined apparitions as foils has been a longstanding trope in media and if the shoe fits than damn it I'm going to use it.

Obviously we know that dead aren't really speaking to Valentine, and obviously he's aware of it himself, but it allows for them to be characters in their own ways. Davis gets mad if you pursue Vi, Zaina has a protective streak towards Valentine. However because of this you enter unreliable narrator territory, Davis and Zaina aren't real, they appear and act as Valentine wants/remembers them being. This plays into the game element of the whole thing. They're typical "Angel and Devil" trope fare. But not so dramatic.

I tend to personally think of them as "The person I could be, and the person I don't want to be. Valentine idealizes the time he spent with Zaina, he liked who he was at the time she was in his life, whereas the Davis he's currently remembering comes from a point in time when he was somebody he didn't like all that much. While Val is in general a nicer person he has significant self hate towards certain parts of his life, to him Davis represents these parts. Depending on the choices you make you end up having more interaction with one or the either. It's my arty farty bullshit way of visually representing where your choices might lead. You'll see one or the other more often depending.

Now I know some people might now be worried they've somehow done things wrong, but I want you to get that out of your head. Something that's important to remember is that when it comes to this in particular there are very few "wrong" answers. Just different, there very well may be situations where being more like Davis is advantageous, honestly I just want you to make the choices you think work. And bond with whatever ghost buddy you want, I think they both have fun things to say.

Eventually though I suspect that our friendly ghosts will eventually fade away, once their business is concluded. But until then I'd advise you to pay attention to some of the things they say. They're your subconscious after all and they pick up on things...

Cue spooky music.

Thanks as always for your support.

Sláinte!
As I may have said to Walter Victor before, and as I said to an actual Dev on another thread just today, there are certain alerts on certain threads that just make me happy when I see them, and WV posting here is one of those.

With this revelatory info from the Dev, I now need to maybe add another route or two to see all that the Angel and the Devil have to offer = just more fun with one of my favorite titles.

Thanks, WV for continuing to do this, and if you get a chance, let the Dev know that the pirates (well, at least one of them) particularly enjoyed and appreciated the insight of this update.
 
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