VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Elduriel

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Man, all girls are great but I have a hard time choosing Els or Vi, they are my favorite ones. I really hope that IF there is a throuple path, like it had on The Writer, it is with Els and Vi. Ines is great too, and I guess Ines+Vi is a real path, but damn, give me a Els + Vi path, please, hahaha! Great update as always!
yeaah I don't see Els as anything but solo path, same for most girls, except as you mentioned Vi/Ines, it's within the realm of possibility. Anyway, I like them all, so I'll go through all the endings regardless.
 
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yeaah I don't see Els as anything but solo path, same for most girls, except as you mentioned Vi/Ines, it's within the realm of possibility. Anyway, I like them all, so I'll go through all the endings regardless.
Yea, so will I, but I'm hoping for a Els + Vi, I will dream till the end, hahaha, but I guess that Vi + Ines will be more possible.
 
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damn. with all those beautys i hope there´s going to be a poly path. It would suck if we had to pick one of em since most seem to be fine with sharing, even if there´s a bit of jealousy in the beginning. But as long as MC is able to make em all happy it shouldn´t be a problem imho. so pls, don´t make us choose. Ines, Vi, Els and amrit are just perfect :love:
 

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Just me or Els is the dev favorite LI.
Elspeth is definitely the favourite for the majority of the game's fanbase from what I've seen/read, so it would make sense if the dev felt the same way, or at least was influenced by that popularity. Still, the other girls do have a significant number of fans as well, and I don't feel like they have been given short shrift in the story by any means. All of the characters have important scenes, dialogue, and sexual interactions with MC that make sense and fit with both their personalities and their relationships to him.

yeaah I don't see Els as anything but solo path, same for most girls, except as you mentioned Vi/Ines, it's within the realm of possibility. Anyway, I like them all, so I'll go through all the endings regardless.
Els and "Exclusive" is the easiest way I find to say this, because of the similarity of the letters involved, and it's an attitude that fits perfectly with both her and the MC when he is with her. Who needs anything more than Els in their life? :love:

I do think Amrit is also a strong possibility for a non-solo path, based on how much she idolizes and adores Kana. Also, the way she gropes Els is suggestive that something more might happen there. Plus, from a variable standpoint, she's the one with the highest possible "interested in other girls" score of all the characters IIRC, so I suspect there may be more to come with her as regards some potential multiple girl pairings.

And this doesn't have to mean "non-solo" to the extent that polyamory is involved either. A simple casual "threesome" with another woman is actually the most common fantasy for most married couples (both men and women) from what I recall of research and surveys about the subject. So while most people don't act on that fantasy in the real world for obvious practical reasons, I think fiction can be a safe and fun opportunity to portray and enjoy that particular sexual activity.
 

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I guessed Els wasn't a virgin, but I didn't think she would have the experience of a porn star.
It was like Mc was fucking any slut, no feeling at all.
Frankly, it was a complete fiasco for me.

I normally like the type of relationship where one mc has two LIs, but since the girls here will be lesbians, monogamy is safe for me.(Ines+Vi)
Except Ines and Vi, the others can fuck off.
 

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I guessed Els wasn't a virgin, but I didn't think she would have the experience of a porn star.
It was like Mc was fucking any slut, no feeling at all.
Frankly, it was a complete fiasco for me.

I normally like the type of relationship where one mc has two LIs, but since the girls here will be lesbians, monogamy is safe for me.(Ines+Vi)
Except Ines and Vi, the others can fuck off.
So not being a virgin = porn star
Cool story bro.
 

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I mean she's not comfortable when Carl goes down on her, that doesn't scream nasty fucker at all. She tells us she hasn't seen any action in a long time. And lastly an experienced superfucker would have the giggle thing under control by now.
 
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I guessed Els wasn't a virgin, but I didn't think she would have the experience of a porn star.
It was like Mc was fucking any slut, no feeling at all.
Frankly, it was a complete fiasco for me.

I normally like the type of relationship where one mc has two LIs, but since the girls here will be lesbians, monogamy is safe for me.(Ines+Vi)
Except Ines and Vi, the others can fuck off.
Els is being wrote as someone who can and will have anything she wants, How could she be late 20s still virgin?
The sex was straightfoward.
about the "feeling" or LOVE you missed. in the next day she telling everyone that Valentine is Her man, by marking him in the kitchen
Is her showing her love, claiming her man.
You have to understand Els is the one wearing pants in their relationship. (not a problem tho, just saying.)
 
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risky0

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So not being a virgin = porn star
Cool story bro.
You may not realise that I wrote this just to exaggerate, it is completely understandable.

The last time I saw someone who could make such a logic was in a kindergarten.:FacePalm:

Els is being wrote as someone who can and will have anything she wants, How could she be late 20s still virgin?
The sex was straightfoward.
about the "feeling" or LOVE you missed. in the next day she telling everyone that Valentine is Her man, by marking him in the kitchen
Is her showing her love, claiming her man.
You have to understand Els is the one wearing pants in their relationship. (not a problem tho, just saying.)
Dude, I don't have a problem with non-virgins, I don't understand why you act as if I said something like that.
You don't read what I write well.
It's not whether she's a virgin or not, she looks more experienced than she should.

Els, she's very picky, she accepted Mc after a lot of tests. So she's not the kind of person who's gonna hook up with a random guy.
It seems out of character for him to be so experienced.
But this is my opinion, don't let it upset you.
 
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I thoroughly enjoy the game, but the way Elsie's tits bounced up and down like some slime enemies in a platformer when Valentine went down on her had me cracking up.
 
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Bombmaster

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So she's not the kind of person who's gonna hook up with a random guy.
my take is Els could compartmentalize emotions from just sex.
But this is my opinion, don't let it upset you.
passive agressive cope
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And she would hook up with a random guy if she was horny, But never waking next to him in the morning,
or giving kisses in the kitchen. A women can have a past and still be a boss. If the writing make sense.
 

risky0

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my take is Els could compartmentalize emotions from just sex.

passive agressive cope
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And she would hook up with a random guy if she was horny, But never waking next to him in the morning,
or giving kisses in the kitchen. A women can have a past and still be a boss. If the writing make sense.
I have not seen anything to confirm what you wrote in the game and most likely we will not see it.

Funny kids trying to label me as a sensitive person obsessed with virgins.
If the developer shows something like what you wrote to make the character look more consistent, these guys will cry why is there ntr in this game.

Anyway, we're just talking hypothetically, I think we're both right.
 
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