VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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DarkKiller

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On one hand, I've always disliked the idea that everything and everyone should be interconnected in a story. But on the other I'd quite like a twist like that tbh, Valentine and Els' whole lives would be turned upside down and I'd be curious to see how they'd recover.
 
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Dr.TSoni

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Actually, while it might have been US lead, it was a coalition mission or McNab would not have been part of it. It doesn't matter, however, the mission to "clean up loose ends" was subsequent and separate. We know this, partly, because MC did not know about it until after the fact. It could have been any of the major coalition partners who decided it was necessary. Anyway, it's mostly just a wild idea but, I wouldn't put it past STWAdev to toss in a twist like this... Jus' Sayin':cool:
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I'd quite like a twist like that tbh, Valentine and Els' whole lives would be turned upside down and I'd be curious to see how they'd recover.
I have 2 paths. Elspeth and Kana. It that scenario would happen, my Elspeth route wouldn't recover. She would be promptly dumped to the curb, following my MC ditching the veteran's office and cutting all ties to her.
 
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So much incredible content. Decided to replay all the way from the beginning cuz I love it so much and I 'm glad I did even tho it took me two days to finish. I absolutely love the characters and their banter.
agreed the only thing that bother me is have to choose which girl to be the one...i can't really choose i love them all..damn
 
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fishbrain

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After finishing this update I am wondering how many of the girls are main LIs. I asked a while back and know there's more than the 5 in the header and I'm currently only really fucking with Ines and Serena. Has there been any confirmation on which throuples are possible?
 

snake_27

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Great update as always! Love how the story is developing, hope we get another MMA fight in the next update.

My only minor issue with the game would be that it's getting weirder to have so many in-parallel relationships since they're all starting to get serious. I think it's time to start closing some paths...

On another note, looking to the future... Els' friends (Sarah and Anastasia) seem to be the people who checked out Cal's background an update or two ago, I also remember a call from Els to someone asking for information about him, I don't know if these two events are related... In any case, this seems to be the main story line outside of the slice of life content.

EDIT: Ahh, I forgot to mention the new art for Davis... I didn't understand the change, I think the previous one seemed more suited to his character.
 

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agreed the only thing that bother me is have to choose which girl to be the one...i can't really choose i love them all..damn
that's the neat part, you probably can have an ending with them all, there are no early lockouts where you have to maintain a dozen saves
 
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That's something we have discussed here before, along with similar theories about what might have happened that day. Although, I doubt Els would have "ordered" Zaina's death in any direct way, since she is just an intelligence officer, and she is not a commander in charge of army units. Although she could have "authorized" it to a degree, and feel some level of responsibility or guilt over how it ended up affecting the MC. Also, we're still not sure about the nature of how Zaina was killed, either. A "cleanup" op sounds like the most likely scenario, but I wouldn't be shocked if even information suggesting that scheme turned out to be a mislead in the end.

Regardless of what it is specifically, it's almost a lock that there is some past connection between Els and the MC that will be revealed in future chapters. I mean, one of the very first scenes alone with her has major flags for this very thing:

mc "I suppose I'm just a bit surprised that you have a photo of me at all."
e "Really now? Why is that? We're friends."
mc "We are. I guess I just didn't know if you considered us that close."
mc "We hang out, sure. But I think I can count on one hand the number of times we've done so without others."
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e "If you wanted to spend more time together, all you had to do was ask."

Classic Els. She doesn't give an answer, and instead she distracts you with an enticing offer to get to know her better. I mean, it's pretty clear to me that she knew quite a bit about the MC before they ever met in person, and the only question remaining is how deep that connection runs.
 

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That's something we have discussed here before, along with similar theories about what might have happened that day. Although, I doubt Els would have "ordered" Zaina's death in any direct way, since she is just an intelligence officer, and she is not a commander in charge of army units. Although she could have "authorized" it to a degree, and feel some level of responsibility or guilt over how it ended up affecting the MC. Also, we're still not sure about the nature of how Zaina was killed, either. A "cleanup" op sounds like the most likely scenario, but I wouldn't be shocked if even information suggesting that scheme turned out to be a mislead in the end.

Regardless of what it is specifically, it's almost a lock that there is some past connection between Els and the MC that will be revealed in future chapters. I mean, one of the very first scenes alone with her has major flags for this very thing:

mc "I suppose I'm just a bit surprised that you have a photo of me at all."
e "Really now? Why is that? We're friends."
mc "We are. I guess I just didn't know if you considered us that close."
mc "We hang out, sure. But I think I can count on one hand the number of times we've done so without others."
...
e "If you wanted to spend more time together, all you had to do was ask."

Classic Els. She doesn't give an answer, and instead she distracts you with an enticing offer to get to know her better. I mean, it's pretty clear to me that she knew quite a bit about the MC before they ever met in person, and the only question remaining is how deep that connection runs.
I have pretty extensive military experience and I can tell you that a Captain in the Intelligence section on deployment can have a great deal of autonomy. Small units deployed to "hot spots" are not like Regimental and above theaters of operation. They often consist of a CIA liaison in addition to military personnel for intelligence gathering working with one or two Special Forces units. Operations like the assassination raid conducted in conjunction with local militia is pretty standard doctrine. Militia usually conduct diversionary raids or provide backup while Special Forces assault the main target. Even a "cleanup of loose ends" operation can be planned and executed by the "in country" unit with as little as a secure satellite communication of the plan and subsequent authorization from higher authority. This is why the senior Intelligence Officer and the CIA liaison are credited with "responsibility" for the success or failure of the operation. In his conversation with Vi in Majorca, MC tells her that her brother, "killed the woman I loved" in an operatation to "tie up loose ends". I feel pretty certain I know how Zaina died and so does the MC.

I agree that we should be prepared for some kind of twist or turn to this sub plot. It seems fairly obvious that, at the very least, there are further details in that safe at the end of Elspeth's bed.
 

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Russian translation (PC + Android) -

Перевод на русский язык (ПК + Андроид) -

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Skeltom

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Ines is honestly so stunning, one of the prettiest and most feminine models I've seen. She kind of reminds me of Trinity from the Matrix with her hair. The recent shower scene with her was hot, look forward to seeing more of her. View attachment 3791514
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She may be attractive but we still know very little about her. All of her interactions have been superficial, a few talks about what she like, a conversation about her family. Until the "date" you spend no meaningful time with her. She is just a blank slate with a pretty face. You don't make any real connections with her. The same could be said about Reenie though.
 

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After finishing this update I am wondering how many of the girls are main LIs. I asked a while back and know there's more than the 5 in the header and I'm currently only really fucking with Ines and Serena. Has there been any confirmation on which throuples are possible?
Regarding LIs, there are 5 main LIs (Amrit, Els, Ines, Kana, and Vi), but they plan to eventually let Patreon supports vote to upgrade a side girl to a main LI (Reenie and Katie seem to be leading contenders).

Regarding throuples, I'm surprised I haven't seen this mentioned here before (and I did a search), but on the Discord there's a pinned comment where the dev states there are 2 potential throuples planned, but doesn't specify which LIs are in them.
 
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Elduriel

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Regarding LIs, there are 5 main LIs (Amrit, Els, Ines, Kana, and Vi), but they plan to eventually let Patreon supports vote to upgrade a side girl to a main LI (Reenie and Katie seem to be leading contenders).

Regarding throuples, I'm surprised I haven't seen this mentioned here before (and I did a search), but on the Discord there's a pinned comment where the dev states there are 2 potential throuples planned, but doesn't specify which LIs are in them.
I'd imagine Ines and Vi would be one of them, the other could potentially involve Amrit, iirc they have the interested in girls variable
 
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