VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Old Man Al

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Hello all!

Pretty good week here, hit that flow and just started typing away at almost 27,000 words of the script completed. Really quite pleased with that result. I think that puts me a little over half of this updates script, hoping to wrap it up at around 55,000 words. But plans and creative types are ... So we'll see how that goes. Hoping to hit an even 30,000 by then end of the weekend/early next week.
Probably start knocking out renders next week. Things are looking ready on that end.
Nothing else today, fairly standard work week. I'll check in again next week,hope you have a lovely rest of your week. Hope you have a lovely weekend Thank you as always for the support.

Sláinte!
 

ZazzyBoi

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Alright, I must be blind cuz I'm not seeing Ethan from Unleashed as credited. I thought I was keeping an eye out for him but I guess not.
 

balboa2151

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hey everyone, I know this isn't a harem type game but I sure wish it was...all the women are beautiful and sexy in their own way but I'm trying to narrow down my choices for when it's time to decide...I find Kana extremely stunning with her beautiful blue eyes and her intimacy is very sexy...Elsbeth is my second choice...very beautiful and even though Kana's body is sexy Elsbeth's body is perfect...she's a little bossy but she makes up for it with how well her and MC read each other and knows what each is thinking(good chemistry) but in the end it will be very very difficult but my choice will probably be Kana because of her beautiful blue eyes...everyone's opinion would be greatly appreciate!!!
 
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maroek

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hey everyone, I know this isn't a harem type game but I sure wish it was...all the women are beautiful and sexy in their own way but I'm trying to narrow down my choices for when it's time to decide...I find Kana extremely stunning with her beautiful blue eyes and her intimacy is very sexy...Elsbeth is my second choice...very beautiful and even though Kana's body is sexy Elsbeth's body is perfect...she's a little bossy but she makes up for it with how well her and MC read each other and knows what each is thinking(good chemistry) but in the end it will be very very difficult but my choice will probably be Kana because of her beautiful blue eyes...everyone's opinion would be greatly appreciate!!!
The Author is throuple endings with multiple LIs together; like Viridiana and Ines.

To add to the throuple discussion:

I am more of a "all of the above" type of guy in most AVNs, but there are some games, including Unbroken, where the protagonist just catches me. I mean, that's the real reason behind the existence of creative works like novels, theatre, cinema etc.

So, I won't go after anybody but Elspeth, on my main play. However...

There's something about Ines that I dig. She's beautiful, just like every other girl in the game, but there's more to it. And we just found out where that was going: We can make Ines either a sub or a self reliant woman. I'm sure there will be many benefits of both choices but for me, a good sub is always welcome.

Though, I'm not sure how Elspeth would react to Ines, I'm not sure. She looks like she can accept Vi, because of our history and her resemblence with herself, but other than that... I don't think Els would go for a fellow wife.

There are clear favourites for throuples, like explained before:

Vi-Ines: they are quite open to each other about their actions and intentions, and they obviously don't mind sharing Valentine.
Kana-Amrit: Now this is super easy. Super obvious. Amrit would be the perfect protege, and pet for both. Though I don't like them together because they look almost the same. It's like being involved with twins, one of which is about 10 years younger than the other.
Elspeth-Viridiana: Same problem with the last sentence, except the height difference, of Kana-Amrit team. I mean, what's the point of having two wives, if they look and act almost exactly the same?
Amrit-Ines: That can work, but both are late teens. Also eventually they'd develop egos. A champion fighter and an multi talented academic... They feel like water and oil. This would be hella tiresome for Valentine for sure.
And I also made a tier list of LIs for myself:

S - Elspeth (she's the one)
A - Ines (she'd be the best one if not Elspeth)
B - No one here
C - Amrit (she's an airhead jock but not the worst since many coaches marry/fuck their trainees)
D - Kana (her whole existence is a mockery to what Valentine is, apart from loyalty stuff)
E - Serena and baker chick (just FWB)
F- None
T(oxic) - Viridiana (too much baggage, too incestious)

Now, I enjoy some incest in AVNs but this isn't the game for that. This is a much more realistic than almost all other AVNs. Besides I think fucking the little sister is quite contradicting to Valentine's honour code.
 

doovel

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Uhh.... you do realize that scene is about how Valentine's subconscious is aware that Elspeth is a liar? And that he thinks she's the opposite of him? And he's worried that she could be a danger to him and the people he cares about?

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It's one of the best reasons to avoid Elspeth.



Is she an active duty intelligence officer who has been given orders to spy on Valentine?

No? Well then she's just a creep.



See that part right there? That's the provocation we've been accusing Elspeth of.

The idea that she could intimidate them by boasting about her service record is incredibly stupid. How would they know if she's telling the truth? They don't have acess to her military records, and she certainly doesn't look intimidating at all, so of course they're going to think she's full of shit. All they see is a scrawny woman insulting them and boasting about how easily she could beat them up.

Her actions ensured that the fight would happen.
Wow, I was with you until you called Elsie scrawny, that woman is anything but scrawny.

Other than that I completely agree with you. Also I just wrapped up pt7. She even confirms it on the couch.
 
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balboa2151

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The Author is throuple endings with multiple LIs together; like Viridiana and Ines.



And I also made a tier list of LIs for myself:

S - Elspeth (she's the one)
A - Ines (she'd be the best one if not Elspeth)
B - No one here
C - Amrit (she's an airhead jock but not the worst since many coaches marry/fuck their trainees)
D - Kana (her whole existence is a mockery to what Valentine is, apart from loyalty stuff)
E - Serena and baker chick (just FWB)
F- None
T(oxic) - Viridiana (too much baggage, too incestious)

Now, I enjoy some incest in AVNs but this isn't the game for that. This is a much more realistic than almost all other AVNs. Besides I think fucking the little sister is quite contradicting to Valentine's honour code.

thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?
 

Elduriel

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thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?
it's Elspeth. Anyway, you're not in an exclusive relationship at the moment with anyone, so you can play the field. But just as with the prequel, you'll have to make a choice near the end of the game. That may or may not include a throuple or two.
 

Zorro#34

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thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?
While some throuples will indeed be available, I very much doubt that the Elspeth-Kana combination is among them. They barely know each other and, while Elspeth finds Kana attractive, she's only playful about it if she's getting friendzoned. If romanced, she sees competition in Kana, first and foremost.
Probably not the preferred situation for us, as I find those two to be the best as well (just with swapped places - Elspeth 1st, Kana 2nd), but let's be real.
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Outfit Poll 08/20/2024

8 hours ago

I have this stupid Author post sitting in my drafts but no matter how many times I futz with it, it just doesn't feel quite right, so back to the backburner for now. But since I have to give you guys a post, I pulled this poll out a bit early.
So spoilers this update you may have made certain choices that lead you on a date with a certain French. Here are some potential looks for that. And no I'm not telling you what the date is, don't want to ruin the surprise.







A
22%
B
55%
C
23%

69 votes total · 7 days left
 

Scyths

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Hey, been playing this since yesterday basically all day for 2 days, and I gotta say that I find this one to be exceptional. The synopsis and pictures on the first page really doesn't make it justice because I genuinely didn't except such a good story as this just from those. Should probably update both the pictures and the text because I really wouldn't have tried this one for quite a long while still if I didn't do a random flip between a few games, which this one won. It has an absurdly good amount of content which is somewhat excepted for a game that's been releasing for 3 whole years.

Genuinely some of my favourite characters I've seen in VN's. I'm really looking forward to future updates.

edit: also, if some people have recommendations of good written stories with good written characters, I'd really appreciate DM's with names. I really like somewhat serious stories like this one and I don't care if the main character is a sex machine or not, I care more about the story than the number of sex scenes.
 
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