VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

[doovel]

Hey, been playing this since yesterday basically all day for 2 days, and I gotta say that I find this one to be exceptional. The synopsis and pictures on the first page really doesn't make it justice because I genuinely didn't except such a good story as this just from those. Should probably update both the pictures and the text because I really wouldn't have tried this one for quite a long while still if I didn't do a random flip between a few games, which this one won. It has an absurdly good amount of content which is somewhat excepted for a game that's been releasing for 3 whole years.

Genuinely some of my favourite characters I've seen in VN's. I'm really looking forward to future updates.

edit: also, if some people have recommendations of good written stories with good written characters, I'd really appreciate DM's with names. I really like somewhat serious stories like this one and I don't care if the main character is a sex machine or not, I care more about the story than the number of sex scenes.

the scenes are the cherry on top. Granted the stark difference between the Daz stills and the blender videos (especially noticeable in the Ines shower scene). Make them hard to enjoy for me. And they’re a bit too short and quick for my tastes. The story and character work more than make up for it.

the characters are all unique and have their own shit going own making them feel much more real than the average AVN. Even though they all want to be with the MC when he plays his cards right it doesn’t feel forced as the game hasn’t reached a point of “you have to choose” yet. I’m looking forward to the potential drama when you do.

Unfortunately most AVNs aren’t as well written as this one so it’s hard to give you names of other AVNs. Most of them are already near the top when you sort by likes.

 

[cxx]

can't say that stwa isn't making fun games since this is hilarious. anyways funny update, plot going somewhere and sex with 1 of girls until other wants "treatment" too.

Spoiler: besties

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[cxx]

if she needs warming up i will volunteer.

 

[Mwrp]

Holy Shit, Montreal Screwjob Reference I didn't expect . Nice job. My fav game so far

 

[MF_DOOM]

Check in 08/23/2024
4 hours ago

Hello all!
Fun times here at at Stew industries. ATM about 38,000 words of the script completed, churning through at a decent pace. Hoping that I should be finished and off to the proofreader by early or mid Oct, huzzah!
Started renders today, and as of the moment I have a whopping a herculean 9 renders finished as I type this. Try not to swoon, I promise my PC won't catch fire at those blistering speeds. Jokes aside I'm about where I was hoping to be at the begin of September progress wise so that gives me about a week or so of wiggle room for things, always exciting.
That's about it on update stuff. A few behind the scenes notes. When I started dev stuff back in the day I found that Wednesday and Sunday where the best days for me to make my weekly/ Blue belt update posts respectively. Since then my schedule has shifted slightly so it's been easier to to do Friday/Monday, so while I've been sort of drifting there unofficially this is the official announcement so you can expect those days going forward, no change otherwise, just a shifting of days.
Final note I'll be having an impromptu art stream for an hour or two Sunday at 1pm pacific time, it will be open to all patrons so feel free to drop by, I'll be working on supplementary work and or customs so no spoilers for Unbroken part 8.
That's it for today, hope you have a lovely weekend and as always thank you for the support.
Sláinte!

 

[DevinHesi]

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[cxx]

here kitty kitty.

whatta big kitty you are.

 

[maroek]

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Now I see what Elspeth means when she claims she sees her own youth in Viridiana. Shit, she looks scary as fuck! She looks like she just tortured and murdered a baby and loved every moment of it. And since Vi and Ines have a punk band, I guess this is Viridiana's song:

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So, I presume Ines dropped out of university and established her own drug lab, cooking meth.

I'd love a giant Sir-Pounce-a-Bunch but I don't dig the image. Those two ladies love eachother.

BTW, is it me or is Vi getting uglier every update?

 

[cxx]

BTW, is it me or is Vi getting uglier every update?

just you.

 

[cxx]

she doesn't have that much spots on her face.

 

[Elduriel]

It may not be 100% accurate but it's close enough I think

 

[maroek]

First attempt:
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I'm just getting started on this topic. As expected, I've decided to start with Elspeth. Anyone who wants to help out on this is more than welcome.
https://f95zone.to/threads/stwa-unbroken-fan-art-and-assets.220471/

Way too much complexion and freckles but not bad in general.

 

[Rehwyn]

the scenes are the cherry on top. Granted the stark difference between the Daz stills and the blender videos (especially noticeable in the Ines shower scene). Make them hard to enjoy for me. And they’re a bit too short and quick for my tastes. The story and character work more than make up for it.

the characters are all unique and have their own shit going own making them feel much more real than the average AVN. Even though they all want to be with the MC when he plays his cards right it doesn’t feel forced as the game hasn’t reached a point of “you have to choose” yet. I’m looking forward to the potential drama when you do.

Unfortunately most AVNs aren’t as well written as this one so it’s hard to give you names of other AVNs. Most of them are already near the top when you sort by likes.

Quick comment on the animations, but from what I understand Stew has been getting tips recently from Puggy in how to up their animation. It especially shows in update 7, imo.

 

[doovel]

Quick comment on the animations, but from what I understand Stew has been getting tips recently from Puggy in how to up their animation. It especially shows in update 7, imo.

This scene is from update 7:

Spoiler: Daz still

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Spoiler: Blender animation

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She goes from looking human to looking like wet clay. The animation is smooth, it's really just the lighting and model that turn weird.

 

[Rehwyn]

This scene is from update 7:

Spoiler: Daz still

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Spoiler: Blender animation

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She goes from looking human to looking like wet clay. The animation is smooth, it's really just the lighting and model that turn weird.

There was a discussion in the Discord I think about how to deal with this, so perhaps it'll be improved next update. Still, what I mainly was pointing out is that if you compare update 7 animations to one of the early updates, there's definitely been noticeable progression.

 

[cxx]

She goes from looking human to looking like wet clay. The animation is smooth, it's really just the lighting and model that turn weird.

well she is clay in mc's hands.

yes it looks weird and yes could have normal skin color.

 

[doovel]

well she is clay in mc's hands.

yes it looks weird and yes could have normal skin color.

Yeah I'm not pretending moving between two completely different render engines isn't going to make it hard to get comparable renders. But the massive difference in looks here was so completely daunting that it took me straight out of the scene. It went from nice bulid up to

Spoiler: Reaction Jif

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[MF_DOOM]

Check In 08/30/2024

8 hours ago

Hello all, a bit banged up today so trying to be prompt.
ATM about 46,000ish words of the script completed, looking like first draft will finish in a week or two. Then a few weeks of running through again, editing and such. Puts my hopeful timetable of getting it to the proofer some time in October.
Renders a little slower this week. We're sitting on about 65 at the moment. I made the good choice of putting the scene with six people in it right at the beginning of the update. Extra fun.
Really about it today. Finishing up monthly special renders and a few more customs the next few days and then as we move into Sep it's gonna be serious nose to the grindstone time.
That's it for today, hope you have a lovely weekend and as always thank you for the support.
Sláinte!

 

[maroek]

Second attempt
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Returning to this project again, I can confirm the combination of these two assets:

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(skin)

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However, the head morphology is still the same as the previous one:

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If not this, the rounded head shape is quite similar
At the moment I have not found a suitable morphology and colors for the eyes and eyebrows. I will continue investigating.

Better, but still way to go. First of all, your Els looks like she's about to kiss someone.

 

[Walter Victor]

Better, but still way to go. First of all, your Els looks like she's about to kiss someone.

And that's a problem, because...