VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Book 1 Steam] [STWAdev]

[maroek]

did you know that el is also actress? starred in many movies and tv shows although using alias jess gabor.

Similarities are there but nowhere near enough for a claim like that. Els' face is drop dead gorgeous, while Jess Gabor looking like a bulldog tbh.

The story is actually good too. It has some of my favourite characters, and they are all unique. Definitely worth your time!

I've been telling this since pt.3 or something like that. This is the only AVN I actually read all the lines. The author actually doing a phenomenal job doing his research, i.e. there is an actual Adair Clan in the Lowlands. The characters have well thought back stories which come step by step. MC's decisions actually make difference, and it seems to be they'll make even more drastic ones as it gets closer to the end. All around an inspring story, TBH.

I just want some real drama and tragedy in the future, like some betrayal and/or death in the end, since it would feel like too much of a melodrama without bad endings. Other than that, I am sure I'll feel like my favourite TV series finale when it's all wrapped up.

 

[Old Man Al]

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Happy Friday all!

Exciting news, within a few hours we'll have the first draft of this script completed. It'll land somewhere around the 59,000 word mark. Over the next couple weeks, I'll do some editing and trimming, the usual work while trying to tighten up the second draft. Hoping to get it down into the 54,000 word range. Hope to get this to the proofer by mid October still looking good.
283 renders posed and completed as of writing. Finally got through that nasty little scene with every character and their aunt in it glad to have that puppy in the mirror. Moving to something slightly less maddening now.... Allegedly.
This week I've been trying something new, expanding the skill set a little. Been creating a few custom props from scratch. Lots of fun with that, modeling a championship belt is an experience to be sure. And I have basically no experience in substance painter so it's been a delight trying to get that together. Maybe one day for fun I'll get together a post showing all my myriad fuckups for fun. I am improving though, and I'm excited for you to see the hard work.
Nothing extra special to share at the moment beyond that, the wheels of development just keep churning. I'll check in with you again next Friday.
Thank you for the support and have yourselves a wonderful weekend.
(Fingers crossed the fights aren't dogwater)

Sláinte!

 

[pologne]

Should i play the first game ? i played the first 15 minutes and so far the games looks great and i want to experience it the best way

 

[AlexMpog]

Should i play the first game ? i played the first 15 minutes and so far the games looks great and i want to experience it the best way

I f you start the previous one first - It will give you some more info about the universe in general - about MC and his friends.

I also started playing this one first right to the moment when we have to choose a LI (at the beginning) and then switched to The Author and didn't regret.

Personally I would recommend to play The Author first. It's a good game as well.

 

[cxx]

Should i play the first game ? i played the first 15 minutes and so far the games looks great and i want to experience it the best way

yes and no, only tie between this and previous game is when author mc and his wife (whomever mc chose) meet unbroken's mc in the beginning of game.

 

[milan1366]

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Overview:
Fighting was always in Valentine's blood. From petty street fights, to Ranger school and finally to the 5th Special Forces Group he had thought he had found his way. Years later, he finds himself living in the heart of London, carving a path for himself in the competitive world of Mixed Martial Arts. Not the life he had envisioned himself all those years ago, but comfortable nonetheless. When a sudden tragedy leaves him the only link a young woman has to the rest of the world he finds himself thrust into a role he had long thought left behind. Can he navigate the dangerous world of professional sports, while managing to keep himself and those around him safe and sane? Or will he finally succumb to the pressure around him and break?
The choices you make will not only impact yourself, but everybody around you, choose wisely.​

Thread Updated: 2024-06-26
Release Date: 2024-06-26
Developer: STWAdev

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Censored: No
Version: Part 7
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
Other Game: Something to Write About: The Author
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Extras: Walkthrough/Cheat Mod* - Gallery Mod* - Fan Sig - Fan Sig 2 - Fan Sigs 3 - Walkthrough - Replay Mod*
Driver22 thanks for the link
* This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.

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Great quality game, the renders aren't great for the initial chapters, but you see a massive change later on. Story is great, multiple good looking girls with red heads

 

[Elduriel]

Great quality game, the renders aren't great for the initial chapters, but you see a massive change later on. Story is great, multiple good looking girls with red heads

renders were never bad in this, they may have improved overtime, but they were never bad

 

[MF_DOOM]

Sneak Peek 09/16/2024

2 hours ago
For the folks who came to the previous art stream here's a few of the results of that work. Yes they look totally different, because I completely redid them right after cause I wasn't happy with them. Truly that might be the truest insight into the artist mind.

Speaking of art streams, we'll have another this Sunday the 22nd, at 1pm Pacific. I'll either being working on supplementary work, or customs so no Unbroken spoilers.

 

[Just Jericho]

renders were never bad in this, they may have improved overtime, but they were never bad

The still renders maybe. The girls look great, particularly Ines but... not particularly fond of the animations.

 

[lorkdubo]

The still renders maybe. The girls look great, particularly Ines but... not particularly fond of the animations.

Hmm, hmm. The animations of this game and Chasing Sunsets, for example, just do not work for me. They are not bad, but you can see it took them a ton of work, and the result is just not worth that effort. On the other hand, you have Desert Stalker, where they have really good direction in the scenes with very little and short animations in between, and the scenes are fucking good.
STWA Unbroken has really good character design, and also all of Elspeth's idiom is mint!

 

[cxx]

renders were never bad in this, they may have improved overtime, but they were never bad

just look at his posting history and you see that futile effort.

mc is in trouble.

 

[Walter Victor]

just look at his posting history and you see that futile effort.



mc is in trouble.

We should all be in such trouble!

 

[cxx]

We should all be in such trouble!

yea at least it's not any girls with whom he lives, he would be shredded to pieces.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Check In 9/20/2024

4 hours ago

Hello all, another Friday, another check in .
Script revision going well, I'm rather content. Minor spoilers, but I had a lot fun writing for the lovely Jenny and Julia this update. Even though they aren't "main girls" its fun giving them a little more to work with.
400 renders posed and completed as I write this today. Made some decent progress this week. I'll be switching gears for the next week and change so I'll be holding renders here, so don't expect a huge jump in them next week. Just forewarning
As I mentioned last week I've been expanding the skill set. It has been trying to say the least, but I'm slowly chipping away at making a semi competent piece to fit the standards I want. Along with that I've been taking some time to clean up some coding in the back end, making sure things remain stable as we move into the future. The goal currently is to get all the little "errands" I need done before the end of the month so I can hit October with all that crap out of the way. A lot of the time I let those things build up until the end and then it suddenly borks me so I'm really hoping that by taking care of it in smaller increments I might maintain a little more sanity.
Anyway that's mostly it for today. I will be having a Blue belt art stream on Sunday the 22nd at 1pm Pacific time, I'll be working on supplementary renders or customs so no Unbroken spoilers . Hop on in if you have a moment.
As always thank you for the support and I hope you have a great weekend, I'll see you next Friday with another update.
Sláinte!

 

[DirtyMario]

renders were never bad in this, they may have improved overtime, but they were never bad

They were never bad, right. But also all the characters suffered from stone face syndrome early on. First 2 or 3 releases looked like Mass Effect: Andromeda. It's gotten drastically better in the meantime but some model's resting faces (ex. Vivi, Kana) are still a bit compromised by it.

That somewhat makes up for him being French

Is he? Him calling himself Stew and signing with Slainté practically screams irish.

 

[Raynare69]

Just finished my first playthrough and catching up to the current patch...
This is one the better games I've played on here, and I've probably played through at least 60-70+

The writing is just so well done and engaging, the character interactions are great and feel so real compared to many others. There's a certain depth to it and the reactions are great as well. Very well done.

This has been such a great experience that, although I chose to pass up on The Author because of lack of personal visual appeal, I think I might actually check that one out. If the writing is even half as good as this latest work, then I'm sure I'll find it enjoyable. Cheers!

P.S. I need more REENIE in my life!

 

[Joseph Pierce]

I surprised myself with this game. I've actively stated with other games that I hate mental and emotional manipulation. Yet, for some reason, with this game I found myself going from actively avoiding anything deep with Elspeth, to deleting that route and going all in with her, to the point where I have the MC say he loves her. This despite seeing her active manipulations and obvious attempts at hiding things from the MC. Like after the sex scene following the fight on the beach, she's shown actively hiding something for whatever reason. Despite that, I find myself drawn to her as the only potential LI at this point. I don't know if it's because I want things to work out for the best for that relationship, or if I'm watching it in morbid fascination, waiting for the spectacular crash and burn. I've never felt this way about a LI in a game before. Hat off to the dev.

 

[maroek]

I surprised myself with this game. I've actively stated with other games that I hate mental and emotional manipulation. Yet, for some reason, with this game I found myself going from actively avoiding anything deep with Elspeth, to deleting that route and going all in with her, to the point where I have the MC say he loves her. This despite seeing her active manipulations and obvious attempts at hiding things from the MC. Like after the sex scene following the fight on the beach, she's shown actively hiding something for whatever reason. Despite that, I find myself drawn to her as the only potential LI at this point. I don't know if it's because I want things to work out for the best for that relationship, or if I'm watching it in morbid fascination, waiting for the spectacular crash and burn. I've never felt this way about a LI in a game before. Hat off to the dev.

Elspeth is suspicious yet has the gravity pull of a blackhole. I don't know if she's behind the suspicion mechanic and i don't think i'd mind if it is, unless it's personal with Valentine. And i speculated a lot about it.

i just hope it won't be something unforgivable. Els is by far the best written LI i've seen in any AVN i've ever played.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Sneak Peek 09/23/2024

44 minutes ago
So I was going to post something completely different today, but then I was informed that today is redhead appreciation day. I didn't know that was a thing but now that I do it seems like a little Viridiana was in order, so enjoy a glimpse of our Grasshopper vibing as they say. (I'm old, I don't know slang anymore.)

 

[cxx]

no freckles on sneak peeks.