Funny you mention that, because I'm pretty sure Stew was a writer before starting The Author and now Unbroken.
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Hey guys, yesterday I decided to continue researching the character of Elspeth and the assets and morphs used to create her.
This is my third attempt. I did the render quickly because I didn't have time. Please ignore the marks on the forehead and the error in the eyelashes.
After this attempt I was able to confirm a new asset:
The eyebrows are extracted from this character. After a lot of searching I haven't found anything that comes close to the eyebrows of the original character, so I can be 99.9% sure that these are them. It's also possible that the body morphology of this character was used, I'm not sure about that but it's a similar body, obviously with modifications and breast augmentation.
Finally, I found this character as a base for the head morphology:
I can't be 100% sure that this character was used in the original Elspeth, it just seemed appropriate because the resemblance is obvious, the character offers the option of purple nails and, finally, the creator has already used other resources from this developer for "The author", his previous project. (
Nothing more for the moment. As for observations, I dare say that it has been a great step forward in being able to mold the original Elspeth. The next step will be to find the eye color, something that seems difficult to find because it can be completely random and look for another character to combine the head morphology with, since I am still not satisfied with the result.
Finally, I would simply like to say that anyone willing to collaborate in this research, any type of contribution will be welcome and appreciated.
I wouldn't like to finish without first asking if at any point the thread has discussed the increase in quality of Elspeth's character from one chapter to the next. Apart from the fact that visually she looks better to the point that Elspeth doesn't need to wear eye makeup in most scenes when she always did before. The Riza for Aiko 8 skin has also been added later. I'll illustrate it visually:
Nothing else to say. Greetings to everyone. When I can, I'll update this thread with this info.
https://f95zone.to/threads/stwa-unbroken-fan-art-and-assets.220471/
Oh, I forgot, this girl, in case anyone is interested:
This is my third attempt. I did the render quickly because I didn't have time. Please ignore the marks on the forehead and the error in the eyelashes.
After this attempt I was able to confirm a new asset:
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The eyebrows are extracted from this character. After a lot of searching I haven't found anything that comes close to the eyebrows of the original character, so I can be 99.9% sure that these are them. It's also possible that the body morphology of this character was used, I'm not sure about that but it's a similar body, obviously with modifications and breast augmentation.
Finally, I found this character as a base for the head morphology:
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I can't be 100% sure that this character was used in the original Elspeth, it just seemed appropriate because the resemblance is obvious, the character offers the option of purple nails and, finally, the creator has already used other resources from this developer for "The author", his previous project. (
You must be registered to see the links
).Nothing more for the moment. As for observations, I dare say that it has been a great step forward in being able to mold the original Elspeth. The next step will be to find the eye color, something that seems difficult to find because it can be completely random and look for another character to combine the head morphology with, since I am still not satisfied with the result.
Finally, I would simply like to say that anyone willing to collaborate in this research, any type of contribution will be welcome and appreciated.
I wouldn't like to finish without first asking if at any point the thread has discussed the increase in quality of Elspeth's character from one chapter to the next. Apart from the fact that visually she looks better to the point that Elspeth doesn't need to wear eye makeup in most scenes when she always did before. The Riza for Aiko 8 skin has also been added later. I'll illustrate it visually:
Nothing else to say. Greetings to everyone. When I can, I'll update this thread with this info.
https://f95zone.to/threads/stwa-unbroken-fan-art-and-assets.220471/
Oh, I forgot, this girl, in case anyone is interested:
You must be registered to see the links
I feel you. I am in the same boat. I have started this awesome game in the past, found out it is amazing early on (I knew from the Author it would be...) and decided to quit and wait for it to progress much more, because Quality takes time.
A decent novel is 70,000 to 100,000 words. This game is about 3 novels in length already. Probably around 250,000 words.
The game seems to be absolutely massive in scope (number of stills, animations, words), easily x3 bigger than Author was already, perhaps x4.
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you are not wrong, and it keeps growing update to update, last one was over 4k renders. Sure, it takes time but it's absolutely worth it.
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The story is actually good too. It has some of my favourite characters, and they are all unique. Definitely worth your time!
Similarities are there but nowhere near enough for a claim like that. Els' face is drop dead gorgeous, while Jess Gabor looking like a bulldog tbh.
I've been telling this since pt.3 or something like that. This is the only AVN I actually read all the lines. The author actually doing a phenomenal job doing his research, i.e. there is an actual Adair Clan in the Lowlands. The characters have well thought back stories which come step by step. MC's decisions actually make difference, and it seems to be they'll make even more drastic ones as it gets closer to the end. All around an inspring story, TBH.
I just want some real drama and tragedy in the future, like some betrayal and/or death in the end, since it would feel like too much of a melodrama without bad endings. Other than that, I am sure I'll feel like my favourite TV series finale when it's all wrapped up.
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Happy Friday all!
Exciting news, within a few hours we'll have the first draft of this script completed. It'll land somewhere around the 59,000 word mark. Over the next couple weeks, I'll do some editing and trimming, the usual work while trying to tighten up the second draft. Hoping to get it down into the 54,000 word range. Hope to get this to the proofer by mid October still looking good.
283 renders posed and completed as of writing. Finally got through that nasty little scene with every character and their aunt in it glad to have that puppy in the mirror. Moving to something slightly less maddening now.... Allegedly.
This week I've been trying something new, expanding the skill set a little. Been creating a few custom props from scratch. Lots of fun with that, modeling a championship belt is an experience to be sure. And I have basically no experience in substance painter so it's been a delight trying to get that together. Maybe one day for fun I'll get together a post showing all my myriad fuckups for fun. I am improving though, and I'm excited for you to see the hard work.
Nothing extra special to share at the moment beyond that, the wheels of development just keep churning. I'll check in with you again next Friday.
Thank you for the support and have yourselves a wonderful weekend.
(Fingers crossed the fights aren't dogwater)
Sláinte!
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I f you start the previous one first - It will give you some more info about the universe in general - about MC and his friends.
I also started playing this one first right to the moment when we have to choose a LI (at the beginning) and then switched to The Author and didn't regret.
Personally I would recommend to play The Author first. It's a good game as well.
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yes and no, only tie between this and previous game is when author mc and his wife (whomever mc chose) meet unbroken's mc in the beginning of game.
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Great quality game, the renders aren't great for the initial chapters, but you see a massive change later on. Story is great, multiple good looking girls with red heads
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renders were never bad in this, they may have improved overtime, but they were never bad
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Sneak Peek 09/16/2024
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For the folks who came to the previous art stream here's a few of the results of that work. Yes they look totally different, because I completely redid them right after cause I wasn't happy with them. Truly that might be the truest insight into the artist mind.
Speaking of art streams, we'll have another this Sunday the 22nd, at 1pm Pacific. I'll either being working on supplementary work, or customs so no Unbroken spoilers.
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The still renders maybe. The girls look great, particularly Ines but... not particularly fond of the animations.
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Hmm, hmm. The animations of this game and Chasing Sunsets, for example, just do not work for me. They are not bad, but you can see it took them a ton of work, and the result is just not worth that effort. On the other hand, you have Desert Stalker, where they have really good direction in the scenes with very little and short animations in between, and the scenes are fucking good.
STWA Unbroken has really good character design, and also all of Elspeth's idiom is mint!
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just look at his posting history and you see that futile effort.
mc is in trouble.