VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

[Raynare69]

Just finished my first playthrough and catching up to the current patch...
This is one the better games I've played on here, and I've probably played through at least 60-70+

The writing is just so well done and engaging, the character interactions are great and feel so real compared to many others. There's a certain depth to it and the reactions are great as well. Very well done.

This has been such a great experience that, although I chose to pass up on The Author because of lack of personal visual appeal, I think I might actually check that one out. If the writing is even half as good as this latest work, then I'm sure I'll find it enjoyable. Cheers!

P.S. I need more REENIE in my life!

 

[Joseph Pierce]

I surprised myself with this game. I've actively stated with other games that I hate mental and emotional manipulation. Yet, for some reason, with this game I found myself going from actively avoiding anything deep with Elspeth, to deleting that route and going all in with her, to the point where I have the MC say he loves her. This despite seeing her active manipulations and obvious attempts at hiding things from the MC. Like after the sex scene following the fight on the beach, she's shown actively hiding something for whatever reason. Despite that, I find myself drawn to her as the only potential LI at this point. I don't know if it's because I want things to work out for the best for that relationship, or if I'm watching it in morbid fascination, waiting for the spectacular crash and burn. I've never felt this way about a LI in a game before. Hat off to the dev.

 

[maroek]

I surprised myself with this game. I've actively stated with other games that I hate mental and emotional manipulation. Yet, for some reason, with this game I found myself going from actively avoiding anything deep with Elspeth, to deleting that route and going all in with her, to the point where I have the MC say he loves her. This despite seeing her active manipulations and obvious attempts at hiding things from the MC. Like after the sex scene following the fight on the beach, she's shown actively hiding something for whatever reason. Despite that, I find myself drawn to her as the only potential LI at this point. I don't know if it's because I want things to work out for the best for that relationship, or if I'm watching it in morbid fascination, waiting for the spectacular crash and burn. I've never felt this way about a LI in a game before. Hat off to the dev.

Elspeth is suspicious yet has the gravity pull of a blackhole. I don't know if she's behind the suspicion mechanic and i don't think i'd mind if it is, unless it's personal with Valentine. And i speculated a lot about it.

i just hope it won't be something unforgivable. Els is by far the best written LI i've seen in any AVN i've ever played.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Sneak Peek 09/23/2024

44 minutes ago
So I was going to post something completely different today, but then I was informed that today is redhead appreciation day. I didn't know that was a thing but now that I do it seems like a little Viridiana was in order, so enjoy a glimpse of our Grasshopper vibing as they say. (I'm old, I don't know slang anymore.)

 

[cxx]

no freckles on sneak peeks.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Check In 09/27/2024


Hello all, another Friday, another check in .

Script revision continues to flow right along. The biggest difficulty with this one has been finding a decent balance between "Main Girl and "side girl" I'm pretty happy where we're at, I think there's something for damn near everybody. Except Reenie fans. I threw you a bone last update, don't be greedy.

About 473 renders posed and completed at the moment. As I mentioned last week renders were on the backburner this week, but I tried to fit some in while I could.

Started getting animation prep started this week as well, the who,what and where. Getting some initial blocking out, and seeing what might work and what won't.

Rest of this week was still focused on getting things finished in the back end, As well as "IRL" business things. I have some special renders and custom work to finish up this weekend so once October rolls around we're going to be sitting pretty.

It was asked about recently so I'll just make a note here. I'm waiting on one last thing before the Author Definitive steam page will go live. Hoping by this time next week, but might stretch a few days either way soonish.

That's it, not a lot of detail to get into today, mostly just technical rambling. Thanks as always for the support and I hope you have a great weekend, I'll see you next Friday.

Sláinte!

 

[warheadd]

Out of curiosity, has anyone experienced the events in where Valentine loses his fights/gets injured? I know that’s an aspect of injury in the fighting mini-games, but for me, I will never allow him to lose or possibly get injured bc he is Valentine

 

[cxx]

Out of curiosity, has anyone experienced the events in where Valentine loses his fights/gets injured? I know that’s an aspect of injury in the fighting mini-games, but for me, I will never allow him to lose or possibly get injured bc he is Valentine

only sadists/masochists.

 

[maroek]

Out of curiosity, has anyone experienced the events in where Valentine loses his fights/gets injured? I know that’s an aspect of injury in the fighting mini-games, but for me, I will never allow him to lose or possibly get injured bc he is Valentine

I did try it, but suffice to say not in my main run. Valentine doesn't lose his first two matches no matter what you do.

Spoiler: I get knocked down, but I get up again You are never gonna keep me down

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No matter how easy or hard it goes for Valentine in a fight, reactions from others never change. But I believe this will change when he faces Marshman or a champion. Both would be quite climactic.

 

[HeavyFriends]

I really like the character writing in this game but I have to be honest, when we get to the sex scenes with Vi and Els I kind of wonder if the dev has ever seen what large breasts look like, or if his sole reference is women who got wonky implants.

 

[cxx]

ah fan arts vanished.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Check In 10/05/2024

Late on this, apologies, as some people already know, but a nasty bout of Norovirus hit the house, so I was out of commission for a few days, threw me off a bit. Everything's better now though so just catching up.

Script revision mostly finished, one more big scene and two smaller ones and we'll have a completed second draft.

As of writing 599 renders finished of the 607 posed. Honestly got a few more done than I expected given the week, but I can't complain about that.

Made a few new props for the update this week, and one of them is even acceptable. An improvement from when none were acceptable. Also snuck in more animation prep this week , a certain girl has a scene this update that if I don't get right my friend who adores this woman will beat me about the head and shoulders with a broom, which I'd really rather avoid. Beyond that looking at who else gets privileges this update, and who gets to wait until the next one.

That's the dev work finished up, so I'll leave it at that. Looking like next week or at worst the week after I'll start releasing the title screens with these updates so you have some fresh renders to enjoy.

Thank you as always for the support and I'll see you in our next update. Have a lovely weekend.

Sláinte!

 

[KGpride5]

Wow, all my posts about Els were deleted. Objectively I say that I fully understand that this is not the right thread to share that information, so I am not offended by it. Everything I posted was done with good intentions, just to share that information with anyone who was interested. I was not notified about this fact. The posts were deleted directly. In my defense I say that I always acted politely, I justified the reasons and I apologized in advance for it in one of those posts. I think that deleting them without prior notice was not the right way. Anyway, I understand and I apologize. Greetings to everyone

 

[Abhai]

Wow, all my posts about Els were deleted. Objectively I say that I fully understand that this is not the right thread to share that information, so I am not offended by it. Everything I posted was done with good intentions, just to share that information with anyone who was interested. I was not notified about this fact. The posts were deleted directly. In my defense I say that I always acted politely, I justified the reasons and I apologized in advance for it in one of those posts. I think that deleting them without prior notice was not the right way. Anyway, I understand and I apologize. Greetings to everyone

is fan-art thread for this game avalable?
if yes, you should have posted it there.
if not, whoever deleted your fan-art posts from here, didnt have to do so...to say at least.

 

[maroek]

Wow, all my posts about Els were deleted. Objectively I say that I fully understand that this is not the right thread to share that information, so I am not offended by it. Everything I posted was done with good intentions, just to share that information with anyone who was interested. I was not notified about this fact. The posts were deleted directly. In my defense I say that I always acted politely, I justified the reasons and I apologized in advance for it in one of those posts. I think that deleting them without prior notice was not the right way. Anyway, I understand and I apologize. Greetings to everyone

No worries mate. It was just not the right thread. I assume you have the originals. Just go and post them on Fan-Fic thread.
P.S. You were getting good. So keep your passion.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Sneak Peek 10/07/2024

9 hours ago
So as I popped these up I realised that the times I've shown this character she looks annoyed perpetually. Which isn't fair, she's a nice lady I promise. So I made a little fun render where she's actually smiling. Not a real preview just a little extra something.

 

[DirtyMario]

Sneak Peek 10/07/2024

9 hours ago
So as I popped these up I realised that the times I've shown this character she looks annoyed perpetually. Which isn't fair, she's a nice lady I promise. So I made a little fun render where she's actually smiling. Not a real preview just a little extra something.

I'm sure she's a nice lady and stuff but the bar for hot women is kinda high in this game already. And she JUST doesn't really clear that bar imo.

 

[Elduriel]

I'm sure she's a nice lady and stuff but the bar for hot women is kinda high in this game already. And she JUST doesn't really clear that bar imo.

doesn't mean if there is a new character MC is gonna fuck her. But her looks don't bother me, kinda unique.

 

[ImSenjou]

Sneak Peek 10/07/2024

9 hours ago
So as I popped these up I realised that the times I've shown this character she looks annoyed perpetually. Which isn't fair, she's a nice lady I promise. So I made a little fun render where she's actually smiling. Not a real preview just a little extra something.

In the first two pictures she looks like she's under thirty, but in the last one she looks like she's over fifty, I can't unsee it.

Will she stop my sexcapades with Julia moments before the fights?

 

[cxx]

doesn't mc already have enuf girls in his harem?