VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Pinsel

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There was no Serena lewd scene in my play,(maybe just two short apperiance of her) so am i missing something or is just nothing there?
 
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Canto Forte

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MC lives with ALL the girls and gets to fool around with plenty of them, as they all recognize
hook ups are the sauce they need to be eating in order to keep the peace and living arrangements.
MC owns the house.
What kind of relationship options does MC have in this story, as there is no mention of any type of relationship in the project description? ...So is this pick one girl and try and ignore all the other girls, or play the field until MC has to lock on to one and choose (casual dating)?

Well I hope MC can choose more than one girl (Maybe a throuple or more), just having to pick one girl is just sad.
On the longer run, MC can go after the girl of his life, the girl of his dream, or the girl of his mate.
 

soneview777

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What kind of relationship options does MC have in this story, as there is no mention of any type of relationship in the project description? ...So is this pick one girl and try and ignore all the other girls, or play the field until MC has to lock on to one and choose (casual dating)?

Well I hope MC can choose more than one girl (Maybe a throuple or more), just having to pick one girl is just sad.
I'd rather choose a girl than have a harem the truth
 

Englen

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What kind of relationship options does MC have in this story, as there is no mention of any type of relationship in the project description? ...So is this pick one girl and try and ignore all the other girls, or play the field until MC has to lock on to one and choose (casual dating)?

Well I hope MC can choose more than one girl (Maybe a throuple or more), just having to pick one girl is just sad.
Good thanks if this is Harem I don't even bother downloading thanks for saving me frustration happy new year.
It's not a harem game, just like in The Author there are solo path's for the 5 main girls: Elspeth, Amrit, Kana, Ines and Vi, casual hook ups with side girls and 2 throuple paths which havent been revealed yet but probably gonna be Vi and Ines and Kana and Amrit.

in total: 5 LIs, 7 Side girls and 2 throuples.
 

Pinsel

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It's not a harem game, just like in The Author there are solo path's for the 5 main girls: Elspeth, Amrit, Kana, Ines and Vi, casual hook ups with side girls and 2 throuple paths which havent been revealed yet but probably gonna be Vi and Ines and Kana and Amrit.

in total: 5 LIs, 7 Side girls and 2 throuples.
wait, Serena is not a main Li? Nooooo damit. You sure? Looking at the banner i see Serena and not Ines. I dont think Ines is a main Li
 
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Ceesko

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I don't like how dialogue is structured in this game, or more specifically, how the MC speaks. His dialogue "sounds" like a soft-spoken intellectual, a writer or something, not an MMA fighter bursting with high T. His behavior as well. His behavior has a lot of M'lady vibes, and not the cocky, womanizing ex Casanova that the game wants to believe he was.
 

DaFlurbIsHere

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MC lives in a harem .. THE TRUTH ... the other completed game MC DID TOO.
That's true, other MC lived in a harem as well BUT in my playthrough he didn't touch any of them as there wasn't a single girl he liked in that way. So the game gifted him another girl at the very end (which he wouldn't have gone for either, TBH, but it was a nice gesture). Oh, this doesn't mean I didn't like the game, I played it to the end and thought the psychological elements of the story and MC's personal problems were quite well done and more mature than usual. The girls just didn't float my/his boat at all, no matter how desperate they got and how much they threw themselves at him (and at times that became quite embarassing for them).
 

Jericho85

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Thanks for this. This gives me a reason to avoid this game. I hate TMI.
Very odd reason to avoid the VN since you don't know the context of the conversation.

Also the "fewer" bit was something I added as a joke because "Less than ten" is grammatically incorrect. It's also a running gag in GoT. That part isn't really in the dialogue, but I suppose a few people missed the joke.
 

PopPop63

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I don't like how dialogue is structured in this game, or more specifically, how the MC speaks. His dialogue "sounds" like a soft-spoken intellectual, a writer or something, not an MMA fighter bursting with high T. His behavior as well. His behavior has a lot of M'lady vibes, and not the cocky, womanizing ex Casanova that the game wants to believe he was.
One can be both. Having a high testosterone level and being an Alpha Male does not preclude one from having a high Intelligence Quotient score. Nor does it preclude one from being a philanderer. Oft times those with the more libertine morals are the more eloquent of us.
 

somedude321

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Very odd reason to avoid the VN since you don't know the context of the conversation.

Also the "fewer" bit was something I added as a joke because "Less than ten" is grammatically incorrect. It's also a running gag in GoT. That part isn't really in the dialogue, but I suppose a few people missed the joke.
according to Merriam-Webster:

Generally, fewer is used when the number of things is counted ("fewer problems") whereas less is used when the number is measured ("less trouble" or "less time"). However, this is not a strict rule and there are accepted instances of less being used with countable amounts such as "250 words or less," "3 items or less," and especially with money ("less than $20") and distance ("less than 3 miles").
 
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Avaron1974

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Good thanks if this is Harem I don't even bother downloading thanks for saving me frustration happy new year.
It's not a harem, most you can get is a throuple.

Thanks for this. This gives me a reason to avoid this game. I hate TMI.
"Must avoid this game because of a sentence with one girl I don't even know if it's a main LI or not in a game that's not a harem so could pick someone else entirely because i'm a massive douche".....

Out of everyone on this forum, you talk the most bullshit.
 

Walter Victor

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It's not a harem, most you can get is a throuple.



"Must avoid this game because of a sentence with one girl I don't even know if it's a main LI or not in a game that's not a harem so could pick someone else entirely because i'm a massive douche".....

Out of everyone on this forum, you talk the most bullshit.
I laughed out loud at this post, but you have to realize that if he (or anyone else - not me) reports it, it will get deleted and your humor will be lost to most.
 

Englen

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according to Merriam-Webster:

Generally, fewer is used when the number of things is counted ("fewer problems") whereas less is used when the number is measured ("less trouble" or "less time"). However, this is not a strict rule and there are accepted instances of less being used with countable amounts such as "250 words or less," "3 items or less," and especially with money ("less than $20") and distance ("less than 3 miles").
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