AWolfe

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Make the story now as a female protagonist
That's a stupid request. The story is called "Succubus Dream". Succubi are female demons that exclusively prey on men. If you want a female protagonist then you'd have to have a totally different game, including having a different name, as the premise would be radically different.
 

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I should also mention that there is only a dark theme. there's no toggle. This is all I could manage. Hope you all enjoy it.
I'm the guy that goes to CSS styles and changes colors to light theme in almost every twine game because no one ever bothers with a switch.
 
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AWolfe

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Fixes that I think the game needs:

1. The feminization bar at the top has the icons at the wrong ends. The progress moves from left to right, but fem is on the left and male is on the right. They should be switched around.

2. The "Learn cock sucking from the succubus" button should disappear (or be replaced by a completion message) once you have taken all of the choices that the demon offers.
 
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Make the story now as a female protagonist
There is Incubus Dreams. Look it up.

Also, this may not be of a concern to the OP and fans that did the edits, but I was hoping there would be a similar update for the offshoots of this game, akin to Incubus and the Trans version.
 

JazzPolice

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Game seems to have a save feature, but no ability to load saves, which makes it useless. No save or load menu. There is also no means from within the game to return to the start page. If you use the browser's back function to get to the start page and restart the game then your old stats get reloaded instead of getting a fresh start. The only means to restart the game cleanly is to go into the browser's cache and clear all of the game's stored data. Most people have no clue as to how to do this.

This game has a horribly unfriendly UI that is missing a lot of functions that most games have.
I've always just reloaded the page to have a fresh start which is a lot simpler and just forgo using the save feature at all, however I do agree that changing the save feature to save to an external file and load from it would be a lot nicer. The lack of a proper "back" button is also a bit cumbersome, but I think that's an affect of the game being built on the Twine "Snowman" library rather than the more popular "SugarCube" library.

If the game were to be switched over to SugarCube it would actually resolve both of these issues, as well as be a bit cleaner in terms of organization.
 

EllieR

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The new buttons aren't complete yet though... Violet's conversation where you talk to her about random things couldn't be changed for some reason. Same goes with the wardrobe buttons labeled Wear for each piece of clothing you own.
I banged my head against that issue for hours before I decided to throw in the towel. Maybe someone who actually knows what they're doing can figure it out.
Code:
window.inventory=function(){var t="";for(var n in mc.inventory){var i=window.items[n];e(n)||(t+='<div class="shop-item"><img style="width: 200px;" src="'+i.image+'"/><p>'+i.description+ " " +'<span class="code" onclick="wear('+i.id+')">'+"[[Wear->Night Bed Room]]</span></p></div>")}return t},
This replaces the inventory function (inside the story javascript) with one that has the wear buttons as requested.... if you point me to where the random convos are (in game should be fine, it's been a while since I played this one) i'll take a look

Reminded how bad Twine is; not exaggerating when I say it is one of the worst bit of software I have ever used and I understand why devs regularly quit projects (and remember why my twine project 3 years ago was dropped).

Any dev here wants some advice from a professional, learn ANYTHING else and program there
 
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Quickpawmaud

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Game seems to have a save feature, but no ability to load saves, which makes it useless. No save or load menu. There is also no means from within the game to return to the start page. If you use the browser's back function to get to the start page and restart the game then your old stats get reloaded instead of getting a fresh start. The only means to restart the game cleanly is to go into the browser's cache and clear all of the game's stored data. Most people have no clue as to how to do this.

This game has a horribly unfriendly UI that is missing a lot of functions that most games have.
I can load a save just fine but there is only 1 file. If I load a save and reload the page then click new game I get a new game. After starting a new game I reload the page again and can reload my save again. I am not sure what you are talking about?
 

EllieR

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I can load a save just fine but there is only 1 file. If I load a save and reload the page then click new game I get a new game. After starting a new game I reload the page again and can reload my save again. I am not sure what you are talking about?
I believe they meant a load during play; from what I briefly read, snowman (the story format this appears to use) doesn't have built in saving/loading like sugarcube
 

mok3yguy

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Fixes that I think the game needs:

1. The feminization bar at the top has the icons at the wrong ends. The progress moves from left to right, but fem is on the left and male is on the right. They should be switched around.

2. The "Learn cock sucking from the succubus" button should disappear (or be replaced by a completion message) once you have taken all of the choices that the demon offers.
From my understanding, that bar is supposed to represent the MC's sexual orientation. i.e. from being attracted to women at first and then slowly over time being attracted to men. If enough people think it should be as you described though, I can try to change it.

About removing the options to learn from the succubus after all choices are used... if someone has advice on how to do it, I can try.

Code:
window.inventory=function(){var t="";for(var n in mc.inventory){var i=window.items[n];e(n)||(t+='<div class="shop-item"><img style="width: 200px;" src="'+i.image+'"/><p>'+i.description+ " " +'<span class="code" onclick="wear('+i.id+')">'+"[[Wear->Night Bed Room]]</span></p></div>")}return t},
This replaces the inventory function (inside the story javascript) with one that has the wear buttons as requested.... if you point me to where the random convos are (in game should be fine, it's been a while since I played this one) i'll take a look

Reminded how bad Twine is; not exaggerating when I say it is one of the worst bit of software I have ever used and I understand why devs regularly quit projects (and remember why my twine project 3 years ago was dropped).

Any dev here wants some advice from a professional, learn ANYTHING else and program there
I actually used a different method to adjust the visual style for links in 0.3.8.3d so everything is uniform now. It is nice to know though that you got it working that way. I tried variations of that and it kept including the written code in the button.
 
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Quickpawmaud

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Where is the blonde from?
I think you can probably look at the file and search for the video or picture. I have done it before in other games. It would probably have a source and from that source you can find the actress. I am too lazy to do all of this but good luck to you hope you find her!
 

EllieR

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About removing the options to learn from the succubus after all choices are used... if someone has advice on how to do it, I can try.
Declare a variable on the mc (ie learnt_cock_sucking) as false. Then when you do the task, set it true. In an if statement around the option, "if !learnt_cock_sucking"...

.. or whatever the equivalent is for snowman; from a brief look at the code this should be something like
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<% if (!mc.learnt_cock_sucking) { %> [[ Learn cock sucking from the succubus ]], etc. etc.<% } %>
I actually used a different method to adjust the visual style for links in 0.3.8.3d so everything is uniform now. It is nice to know though that you got it working that way. I tried variations of that and it kept including the written code in the button.
Ahh cool, glad you sorted it! :D
 
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Hermundurii

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Anyone could help with the name of the blonde actress please ? 10x
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the video file in-game gives no clue as the titles look random (SpitefulTalkativeAllosaurus.webm) :(
 
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