HTML Abandoned Succubus Dream [v0.3.8.3] [Vibecaster]

[crystal-geyser]

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I mean, good on you for giving it a go, but don't promise the moon before you've actually figured out how the game actually works, since it seems like you're still not all that familiar with it. Even mentioning yourself that you don't know how to code. You may find that you're not able to do the things you actually are telling people you're adding. Even now, it seems like you're cutting content to make room for your own stuff, probably substituting and rewriting existing passages with your own stuff so that everything connects. Which is kind of bad practice imo. I don't mean to be "that guy" but you might just not be cut out for the job. At least not right now.

Lastly, I'd definitely familiarize yourself with writing english. Like, good english. It's gonna be a hell of a disparity when you're going through a passage that's written well, and then get to one that's clearly written by someone from eastern Europe. It's one thing to write the language in a way that works functionally and gets the basic meaning across, but it's another to be able to write the language in a way that's enjoyable to actually read. So yeah, definitely get more familiar with writing.
Either that, or get an editor/writer.

Best of luck to ya, but there's a reason that no one has actually picked up the torch and continued the game.

 

[CrimsonCuck]

How do you want to see events? in this form, where a new item opens after several visits.
View attachment 1146734

or for them to follow each other?( which will not be very convenient, since i will have to remove some content (but there will not be many buttons on the screen )

I would prefer the way it is, it's simple and easy to spot (we won't need to look every nock and cranky for new options xD).
And from your reply to me: I only have basic programing experience, my advise is play around with the existing code, to better see what it does.

 

[quiboune]

Harsh, but you're right. It's a big game and you can tell from looking that there's a lot going on behind the scenes. I really hope this endeavor brings fruits.

Even now, it seems like you're cutting content to make room for your own stuff, probably substituting and rewriting existing passages with your own stuff so that everything connects. Which is kind of bad practice imo.

I'll disagree with this. Rewriting existing scenes to fit your vision of the game is a good idea, it can make the events more connected and concise. As long as you're sure your new event is good enough, which you can just ask, you should rewrite whatever to improve your new game.

 

[Xtirp8]

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Basically, I do the game for myself, and change or delete what I don't like. I do not claim the laurels of the game developer and I could not post anything here, and calmly continue to do it in "offline".
But seeing how many people want to continue and that no one is taking it, why not share it with others?
People will download, play and appreciate, if many like it, then can continue. I will take into account the wishes of those who offer me something in this topic.

And as for the language, I try to convey the essence of the text as much as possible (at the level of my English and at the level of an online translator), translating the text several times (Eng-Rus-Eng-Rus-Eng like that). Again, if someone is not satisfied with something, then they can always write about it here.

As for the coding, the basic principle on which the game is built, I have mastered, yes, I know that everything is not as simple as it seems at first glance, and there are a lot of pitfalls. That's why I'm writing here, so that there will be some help.

P.S. Yes, in some places I simplify the text, because for some scenes it is difficult to search for material ( the text is very specific sometimes)

 

[Xtirp8]

Do the earlier events change after you've advanced with the characters? If not there's no reason to keep them there.

I think i can do something like this:


and of course, each item requires some conditions.
I did not finish drawing the lower points, there are many points there))

 

[UnusualBrat]

Are all these updates you're making for this version or the trap one?
Either way, good job!

 

[Xtirp8]

Are all these updates you're making for this version or the trap one?
Either way, good job!

Trap Version 0.3.7, last update from this topic i scipped, because there is no major changes.

 

[quiboune]

I think i can do something like this:
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and of course, each item requires some conditions.
I did not finish drawing the lower points, there are many points there))

What I meant was if after getting to fuck him the sit on lap event changes to a more advanced version or if it's exactly the same as before.

 

[Xtirp8]

What I meant was if after getting to fuck him the sit on lap event changes to a more advanced version or if it's exactly the same as before.

The event will remain even if you have already fucked, for example, if you sit on lap several times, then the button "Go Home" will change to "Grind on his lap" then to "Jerk off" etc.

the picture shows , if you didn't let your father finish by jerking off with hands, then "Taste his" cock button will not appear in the left column.

I think it will be clearer this way

I want to make the game more grind and complicate it, because there is a lot of media ))

 

[quiboune]

The event will remain even if you have already fucked

And it's exactly the same? Then just take the button out, no point in leaving earlier scenes that no longer serve their purpose of advancing corruption.

 

[Xtirp8]

And it's exactly the same? Then just take the button out, no point in leaving earlier scenes that no longer serve their purpose of advancing corruption.

If i pull out all buttons it will look like this: post

For fast game, maybe it's better, but I'm not focusing on speedrun))

 

[crystal-geyser]

I'll disagree with this. Rewriting existing scenes to fit your vision of the game is a good idea, it can make the events more connected and concise. As long as you're sure your new event is good enough, which you can just ask, you should rewrite whatever to improve your new game.

I'm saying it's bad practice for actually learning the system that the game is built on. It's just frankensteining the game into another one using the spare parts that are already there, instead of actually understanding how the game works and using it as a platform to build up and off of. That and it's kind of bad form and a bit disrespectful to the original dev (even if they're okay with it).
If you're going to completely rewrite the game to fit your own vision, at that point just make your own game, since you'll be alienating the people that were interested in the game in the first place. Which is fine on one hand, but on the other, by picking up an existing game where one dev left off, you're also picking up that game's original fanbase as well instead of building one by yourself. Which might leave things splintered.

I wish the dude all the luck in the world. Since at least they've got the time and enthusiasm to try it, which I lack. But I'm a bit of a cynic, and I see this fizzling out in a month or two, like most projects that find their way on here.

 

[CrimsonCuck]

I'm saying it's bad practice for actually learning the system that the game is built on. It's just frankensteining the game into another one using the spare parts that are already there, instead of actually understanding how the game works and using it as a platform to build up and off of. That and it's kind of bad form and a bit disrespectful to the original dev (even if they're okay with it).
If you're going to completely rewrite the game to fit your own vision, at that point just make your own game, since you'll be alienating the people that were interested in the game in the first place. Which is fine on one hand, but on the other, by picking up an existing game where one dev left off, you're also picking up that game's original fanbase as well instead of building one by yourself. Which might leave things splintered.

I wish the dude all the luck in the world. Since at least they've got the time and enthusiasm to try it, which I lack. But I'm a bit of a cynic, and I see this fizzling out in a month or two, like most projects that find their way on here.

Wow, I wonder why it took this long to get ANYONE wanting to pick up an incomplete game out of love for a game

 

[Xtirp8]

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I can't argue with you, because you're basically right.
One of these days I will post a preliminary archive for evaluation. and if many people do not like my vision of the game, then there will be no point uploading it further. But for myself, I can continue to refine it.

Given that the game is marked as "Abandoned" , then there can be no claims to authorship, and anyone can take the original game and do anything with it.

 

[UndeadEve]

I can't argue with you, because you're basically right.
One of these days I will post a preliminary archive for evaluation. and if many people do not like my vision of the game, then there will be no point uploading it further. But for myself, I can continue to refine it.

Given that the game is marked as "Abandoned" , then there can be no claims to authorship, and anyone can take the original game and do anything with it.

If people don't like it, but you continue to make it for yourself, can i bother you for a copy in dms ?
I wish to continue playing this game, even if it changes a lot.

While i'm here, I downloaded the last thing i saw here(with your link to the other version i mean) and i have two HTML files, but i didn't find a difference between the two other than there is russian (i think) in the name of one.
Is there a difference ?

 

[CrimsonCuck]

Would also love a copy!

 

[Deleted member 690333]

same here

 

[Xtirp8]

If people don't like it, but you continue to make it for yourself, can i bother you for a copy in dms ?
I wish to continue playing this game, even if it changes a lot.

While i'm here, I downloaded the last thing i saw here(with your link to the other version i mean) and i have two HTML files, but i didn't find a difference between the two other than there is russian (i think) in the name of one.
Is there a difference ?

Wait 1-2 days and I will post a new archive ( 8Gb ). This is a preview version, and many files will be deleted or replaced over time.
I'm currently sorting files ( so I do not want to delete some files, they are so pleasant to the eyes. But in order for the archive not to grow too much i will have to delete many) and edit the difficulty of passing

 

[UndeadEve]

Wait 1-2 days and I will post a new archive ( 8Gb ). This is a preview version, and many files will be deleted or replaced over time.
I'm currently sorting files ( so I do not want to delete some files, they are so pleasant to the eyes. But in order for the archive not to grow too much i will have to delete many) and edit the difficulty of passing

Can't wait to play it

 

[Xtirp8]

Would also love a copy!

In such situations, it is better to make many copies during editing. One incorrectly placed comma can break the entire file