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VN Ren'Py Summer Heat [v0.6.1] [Naughty Fox Games]

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Dancebunny88

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TonyMurray said:
This is very lengthy but largely spot-on, I would say. The bit at the start is exactly my stance - I love a neat bush, but not the yeti of an LI in another game, for instance! I also thought Mia would be the type to have a lovely little bit of fluff...
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What about the people who don't like it ?
 
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JariloLivy said:
I really didn't expect that my comment would spark such a heated discussion. First, I want to clarify that I am not a native English speaker, so my wording might not have conveyed my true intentions very well. What I actually meant to say is that I find a "moderate" amount of pubic hair to be beautiful and sexy, rather than the "Amazon forest" some replies have imagined. Excessive pubic hair does indeed make me start worrying about hygiene issues (as some replies have also pointed out ).

I can boldly admit that girls with pubic hair are indeed one of my fetishes. At the same time, I believe that the variety of pubic hair, like hairstyles and clothing, is part of character design (especially since this is an AVN). I think the different states of pubic hair among the characters can actually be a good way of storytelling. For example, we can see that Bree and Sophie are preparing to swim in bikinis, so they probably would have groomed themselves beforehand. Plus, considering Sophie's cautious and elegant personality, whether for hygiene or to maintain her flawless appearance, it would make perfect sense for her to keep her pubic hair clean-shaved. As for Bree, although I think Bree would suit having some pubic hair, we can see in the hair brushing scene that she has also shaved herself. While she may not be as meticulous as Sophie, Bree is still a girl who cares about her looks. Perhaps Sophie even reminded Bree about hygiene issues, which would also fit the character personality.

Mia is a very interesting case. At first, I did think she'd suit having a bit of pubic hair, but as the story unfolds, we learn that Mia is very thoughtful and cares deeply about the MC's opinion of her. She even researched how to do a blowjob for him. So, I believe it's quite possible that she might have chosen to groom her pubic hair to align with more mainstream aesthetics. Thus, contrary to my initial instinct, I think the fact that Mia is clean-shaved fits well with her psychological state in the story.

Eve is currently my favorite girl. She's introverted, feisty, and at the same time craves understanding. As she grows closer to the MC, she shows a rebellious and naughty side. That's why I think perhaps some pubic hair would suit her. I believe it could create a strong contrast visually, as she is so pale and clean. And I think this also matches her personality. Perhaps she wouldn't bother conforming to mainstream beauty standards, or maybe because of her introverted nature, she never planned to swim or wear a swimsuit, so she didn't groom herself for that reason.

I also noticed others saying that Kate might be a good fit, but I actually disagree. While being a milf does indeed evoke thoughts of more abundant body hair, we can gather from the story that Kate is likely a very refined woman. She's meticulous in her thinking and very thoughtful in her actions. Therefore, I don't think she would wear such a sexy swimsuit without grooming herself first. Perhaps she would have a little bit of pubic hair, but for the reasons mentioned, I don't think it should be too much.

What I want to say is, even though I do like girls with pubic hair, I don't think the game should make all the female characters sport abundant pubic hair. On the contrary, I believe that the variation in pubic hair styles, along with moderate differences, would better serve the story. And the beautiful and captivating narrative is precisely what draws me most to this game, so I'm just thinking of ways to integrate this game with my personal fetishes.

Of course, all of this is just my personal reflection based on my own fetishes. The decision on how to create the game lies with the developers. I don't know if the developers will see this, and I don't want to, nor do I have the right to, demand that they make adjustments based on my preferences. They've already worked hard to bring us a high-quality product. I'm also happy that my comment has sparked a discussion, but I hope people don't argue over it. I'm glad that there are many people who share similar tastes and opinions. I've only known about this game for less than two weeks, and I'm amazed by how active this community is. I've also joined Patreon as a supporter and am looking forward to the next version.
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brotha if you don't consider yourself a good english speaker after writing so eloquently then im chinese :HideThePain:
 
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Simpgor said:
great story
the whole expulsion thing

you can only pick one :HideThePain:
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I think the expulsion plot element adds a lot to the story. Previously the game was low stakes, part of that seemed to be the fact that we were relatively early on but another part was just that the setup didnt really have any room for a high stakes story. Not only that, the expulsion plot also adds room for character growth with basically all the characters, will the MC x girl he is getting sent home? Will the MC be able to change Kates mind in time? what's gonna happen with the money the weird cop told him to hold onto?

When the game doesnt have a story people complain, and when it gets one people complain. Whats the point?
 
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shitass1001 said:
the expulsion plot also adds room for character growth with basically all the characters, will the MC x girl he is getting sent home? Will the MC be able to change Kates mind in time? what's gonna happen with the money the weird cop told him to hold onto?

When the game doesnt have a story people complain, and when it gets one people complain. Whats the point?
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Sorry but no just look at it logically

1. Will MC get sent home (away from every single LI) and have the story continue? Obviously not :HideThePain: I really dont feel like I need to go further into this one...
2.Will MC be able to change Kates mind...... she is an LI so obviously she is not going to cause an "early game over" and honestly see above
3. That is the only potentiality interesting thing because unlike the expulsion it could legit go either way. Notice that I did not bring that up though i literally just said the expulsion stuff

If you can answer me how the MC could get expelled and still have the game function (dont say only texting on phone) then honestly you should be writing your own game because its clear a fair amount of people can see its literally just "mid season" forced drama :KEK:

Edit: when MC obviously doesnt get expelled people better not be saying "well it could have gone either way" (futrueproofing)
 
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Simpgor said:
Sorry but no just look at it logically

1. Will MC get sent home (away from every single LI) and have the story continue? Obviously not :HideThePain: I really dont feel like I need to go further into this one...
2.Will MC be able to change Kates mind...... she is an LI so obviously she is not going to cause an "early game over" and honestly see above
3. That is the only potentiality interesting thing because unlike the expulsion it could legit go either way. Notice that I did not bring that up though i literally just said the expulsion stuff

If you can answer me how the MC could get expelled and still have the game function (dont say only texting on phone) then honestly you should be writing your own game because its clear a fair amount of people can see its literally just "mid season" forced drama :KEK:

Edit: when MC obviously doesnt get expelled people better not be saying "well it could have gone either way" (futrueproofing)
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Obviously when he gets expelled Mia says she's leaving too, follows him home and then proceeds to bang him nonstop until he is hospitalized from exhaustion.

Mike gets into a fivesome with the remaining girls and Kate while Helen posts videos of it to an online subscription porn site, raising enough funds to save the art school. A happy ending all around.
 
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JJ1960 said:
Obviously when he gets expelled Mia says she's leaving too, follows him home and then proceeds to bang him nonstop until he is hospitalized from exhaustion.

Mike gets into a fivesome with the remaining girls and Kate while Helen posts videos of it to an online subscription porn site, raising enough funds to save the art school. A happy ending all around.
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Adding "NTR", forcing/switching an LI, while the person who caused it only benefits?

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Simpgor said:
Sorry but no just look at it logically

1. Will MC get sent home (away from every single LI) and have the story continue? Obviously not :HideThePain: I really dont feel like I need to go further into this one...
2.Will MC be able to change Kates mind...... she is an LI so obviously she is not going to cause an "early game over" and honestly see above
3. That is the only potentiality interesting thing because unlike the expulsion it could legit go either way. Notice that I did not bring that up though i literally just said the expulsion stuff

If you can answer me how the MC could get expelled and still have the game function (dont say only texting on phone) then honestly you should be writing your own game because its clear a fair amount of people can see its literally just "mid season" forced drama :KEK:

Edit: when MC obviously doesnt get expelled people better not be saying "well it could have gone either way" (futrueproofing)
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obviously the MC wont get sent home early, its about the character moments and drama that comes from him thinking he is going to be sent home. The questions in my post were rhetorical, their purpose was only to illustrate that interesting things can come from the fact that the MC thinks he is going to get sent home.

This subplot adds drama, but it isnt "forced" drama, its very clear and reasonable why Kate feels the need to send the MC home. It is up to the MC to change her mind, and "obviously" the MC will succeed in that, but as a reader you still ask "will he be able to do it?" "how can he change her mind?" etc etc.

"honestly you should be writing your own game because its clear a fair amount of people can see its literally just "mid season" forced drama" why would this be reason for me to write my own game?

Its ok to not like the expulsion subplot but your reasoning for it to not exist has nothing to do with the characters or story. You just dont like it.
 
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shitass1001 said:
I think the expulsion plot element adds a lot to the story. Previously the game was low stakes, part of that seemed to be the fact that we were relatively early on but another part was just that the setup didnt really have any room for a high stakes story. Not only that, the expulsion plot also adds room for character growth with basically all the characters, will the MC x girl he is getting sent home? Will the MC be able to change Kates mind in time? what's gonna happen with the money the weird cop told him to hold onto?

When the game doesnt have a story people complain, and when it gets one people complain. Whats the point?
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Simpgor said:
Sorry but no just look at it logically

1. Will MC get sent home (away from every single LI) and have the story continue? Obviously not :HideThePain: I really dont feel like I need to go further into this one...
2.Will MC be able to change Kates mind...... she is an LI so obviously she is not going to cause an "early game over" and honestly see above
3. That is the only potentiality interesting thing because unlike the expulsion it could legit go either way. Notice that I did not bring that up though i literally just said the expulsion stuff

If you can answer me how the MC could get expelled and still have the game function (dont say only texting on phone) then honestly you should be writing your own game because its clear a fair amount of people can see its literally just "mid season" forced drama :KEK:

Edit: when MC obviously doesnt get expelled people better not be saying "well it could have gone either way" (futrueproofing)
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Maybe the Mc gets expelled and in his way to home the owner of the money intercepts him o_O
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It would be a way to continue the story in a more "mafia" game type, which imo is the way the game is taking.
 
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Don Sucio said:
It would be a way to continue the story in a more "mafia" game type, which imo is the way the game is taking.
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I mean I'm sure some people would like that more than the "slice of life" we've gotten but isnt there enough soaps about how a group of (mostly artistic in this case) teens somehow beat a criminal organization? :KEK:

Like do we really need to see the render of MC punching the "mafia guys" in the face and knocking them out in a couple of hits? Like these people mostly arent even athletes or anything and since it's a "vanilla" (lack of risks) VN there is no way that any of the girls will be in any serious danger doubley so since this would (theoretically) start with the MC being kidnapped :HideThePain:

I guess you could say the (utterly useless so far) adult male of the the house could be some badass Navy seal type saves the day but do people really want that? To be saved by a random guy who is the (one of) the reasons your "getting expelled"?

I will say your idea makes more sense because unlike shitass yours "forces a path even if you wouldn't choose it" (even if you want to give money back they "kidnap you") which is the exact same thing as the expulsion even if you are sexless, as kind as can be, literally do the minimum of amount you still get expelled because of things you forced to do, and MC will not have any options to say "hey but wait......" despite how logical it would be

Edit: just avoiding a double post here but another reason this whole thing is stupid is because the upcoming "character moments" are going to be pretty Meh or not make sense as things are set up.

MC to (insert gf here): omg I'm so sad I'm being expelled!
Gf: oh no MC whhhhhhy?!,!,@,!,!
MC: option 1: uhhhhh I can't tell you?,
option 2: oh I fucked Kate and now she's scared of blackmail
Option 3: I was 100% forced to go to a bar and 100% forced to drink and get a lap dance there and she's expelling me without talking to the absentee adult male who literally forgot to get us enough food :KEK:
 
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