BobTheDuck

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Could be art class but what is holding the girl with black hair who is backwards? A ball? Because it can´t be her boobs right :LOL:
And why is Sasha showing her boobs, if it is art class i suppose something related with a painting of female figure or something, but i don´t know why Sasha would show her boobs, after all is Sasha and not Nia :unsure:. I suppose is a female class only, i´m not sure Sasha would show her boobs in front of guys without a reason.

With that ball, in case that is a ball and i´m not wrong i would think that they are in a restroom or something for sport class but the walls are not nothing like a restroom so now that you have mentioned it it fits more ofr an art class.



I have written in his Patreon that i suppose the game will have only one dialogue box with some choices in orange and others in blue, but maybe there will be two boxes like in the photo. I don´t know how i feel about the two boxes, i like the idea of two colors but if is it in one box, two boxes occupy more space in the renders imo.


Now that you mention Nia, you think Nia would try to steal Nika from Bella in their path or she will respect their space?

We know Mila is aggressive about it, but i think when Bella and Nika start a real relationship she will stop.
Hmmm, it depends, I'm doing many saves, just to see the differences. Nia would likely fade away, like she did in the gym - she wouldn't be aggressive or confrontational I don't think. Personality-wise, she's pretty shy.

Mila - she doesn't have a high opinion of Bella, so until we see how that plays out, I don't think Mila will give up. For Vic, yes, but not for Bella.
 

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Hmmm, it depends, I'm doing many saves, just to see the differences. Nia would likely fade away, like she did in the gym - she wouldn't be aggressive or confrontational I don't think. Personality-wise, she's pretty shy.

Mila - she doesn't have a high opinion of Bella, so until we see how that plays out, I don't think Mila will give up. For Vic, yes, but not for Bella.
Well i hope she doesn´t give up, she is a good girl if we compare her with other girls that´s why i don´t think she is going to try all the story to steal Nika from Bella or from any other girl, if Nika stops showing interest in her i suppose she will stop no matter what but if Nika is with Bella and he continues trying to make out with Mila too i suppose she will put an end to it inmediately, even if she doesn´t like Bella she is not that bad...Isn´t she?

But i hope she doesn´t stop, i like challenges in relationships and a way to prove how Nika (or we as the players) is commited with a girl is that.
 

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Well i hope she doesn´t give up, she is a good girl if we compare her with other girls that´s why i don´t think she is going to try all the story to steal Nika from Bella or from any other girl, if Nika stops showing interest in her i suppose she will stop no matter what but if Nika is with Bella and he continues trying to make out with Mila too i suppose she will put an end to it inmediately, even if she doesn´t like Bella she is not that bad...Isn´t she?

But i hope she doesn´t stop, i like challenges in relationships and a way to prove how Nika (or we as the players) is commited with a girl is that.
Mila is the purest of them all, despite already having had sex and despite her childhood. She's an honest working girl, with a good moral and a positive attitude.
We can always discuss which girl is the best looking, that is a matter of taste, but if we talk about character she is the number 1 - and it is not even close. Also she is one of the girls that never broke down, despite having the worst start in life and the shittiest childhood.
 

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You should have read to the end, be more careful.
I read the whole thing and am very curious what part you're referring to.

The paragraphs about how to appeal?
The ones about how the authorities are to return viewed material?
Where it says how the courts of appeal are to be constituted?

Please, show a quote!

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Overall, not bad changes. I hope this is the final version of Ayua and it will not be redrawn anymore.
Marla has looked younger again and looks prettier than before. The only thing that is still unclear is the new dialogue system and whether it will make sense. Dialogues like this remind me of Fallout 4.
And in conclusion, Sonya’s new appearance, I don’t understand why it was necessary to redraw her, the old appearance was also good.
Here's a gift for Sony fans.
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Mila is the purest of them all, despite already having had sex and despite her childhood. She's an honest working girl, with a good moral and a positive attitude.
We can always discuss which girl is the best looking, that is a matter of taste, but if we talk about character she is the number 1 - and it is not even close. Also she is one of the girls that never broke down, despite having the worst start in life and the shittiest childhood.
True, Sonya could be close to her too, at least she seems to be so innocent due to her parents and brother prohibitions. But we haven´t see how is she for real yet.
 

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Mila is the purest of them all, despite already having had sex and despite her childhood. She's an honest working girl, with a good moral and a positive attitude.
We can always discuss which girl is the best looking, that is a matter of taste, but if we talk about character she is the number 1 - and it is not even close. Also she is one of the girls that never broke down, despite having the worst start in life and the shittiest childhood.
True, Sonya could be close to her too, at least she seems to be so innocent due to her parents and brother prohibitions. But we haven´t see how is she for real yet.
Don't forget Victoria too.
 
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That is not hijab. Sonya wears light Quarian Armor while sparring with Ayua, which looks odd outside the Mass Effect universe.
Yeah... it doesn't fit the "sparring" scene, is it even sparring attire? If he could put her in something better and for sparring, it'll be much nicer.

She has like a net-like thing, which would be easy to grab and pull on her with. That expression is weird as fuck too. If it's supposed to be a "smug" face... why? give her a better reaction/emotion. Looks like someone else and not Sonya at all...

I've also mentioned the new choice style.

Orange choices advance the conversation.
Blue choices allow you to ask for more info about a certain topic.

I think using Icons would be better S+ for story progression and D+ for more Dialogue. The thing is, what gives more points towards a LI? the more choices option or advance the story? I see nothing for a LI. It could show S+ LI's Name + etc.

The "This Choice's" thing takes up a row. It could be used for another choice for each.

Are the blue choices just for more stuff to read without adding nothing? (no points towards a LI etc) I don't know.... also, why not an extra choice? like (don't ask for shit lol)

These are just some thoughts. I doubt Ocean will see this and think "yeaah, they have a point" lol
 
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That expression is weird as fuck too. If it's supposed to be a "smug" face... why? give her a better reaction/emotion. Looks like someone else and not Sonya at all...
Yeah, her expression seems to me like out of character, she usually is very innocent and shy, she is enjoying too much that lesson for what i suppose is her first fight class. Maybe she develops a hobby for that type of martial art.
 

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I already said this once, but it's so refreshing when a character like bella is comfortable with PDA, other characters of her type are always reluctant to be affectionate in public, because they think it makes them look weak and vulnerable, but it's pretty cool that bella is so open and honest with herself and not afraid to show it.
 

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So no projections to when chapter 1 starts ?
It depends if we use the numbers of dev log that we get before the release, last chapter that was chapter 5 took #14 dev logs

we already on the #7 on the chapter 2

every dev log is 2 weeks so if we use it to know when its going to comes out like that

is 3.5 months since the first dev log of the chapter 2

since we are at the "half"

in 2 months i hope
 

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It depends if we use the numbers of dev log that we get before the release, last chapter that was chapter 5 took #14 dev logs

we already on the #7 on the chapter 2

every dev log is 2 weeks so if we use it to know when its going to comes out like that

is 3.5 months since the first dev log of the chapter 2

since we are at the "half"

in 2 months i hope
I'd temper those expectations. Next update of the better VN should come out before S2C1 of this.

*waits for Nascs reply lol*
 
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