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i have no idea on how to reply to you...Perfect ending is something that makes the readers feel that the story has come to an acceptable conclusion with our preferred characters achieving their main goals, right ?... Mate, Yours sounds more like a book missing the last 20 pages.
Let's see, my perfect ending...I actually can see a lot of possibilities.
First MC overcomes his trauma then he helps Bella overcome hers too, and makes sure Nami feels complete about her need to make sure MC gets to the light and she is happy with herself too.
While he grasped most of the basketball techniques and appreciated his potential, he decided not to pursue that career and move on with a simple but not so simple life so he can focus on other things that matter more to him.
Like being a surfer for a short period...WHAT ?...He could be a secret lover of waves for all we know !...I mean he can surf any situations no matter how bad they get. So taming a bunch of waves is like dealing with Nami and her rolls. After getting enough of surfing he moves on to next one...an accountant, we know he has good analytical skills and his keen attention to detail, gets a promotion then he quits and moves on.
My MC wants freedom, he hates being stuck at a certain phase in his life. He is an adventurer.
Nami figures out she's really good at making people comfortable and have a knack for needles, so she becomes a Nurse.
Bella has changed a lot compared to how she was on her first day of college, thanks to MC. She doesn't go around punch anyone who asks stupid questions anymore...okay, only like every once in a while. MC and Bella make sure each other doesn't derail their crazy path to like another level of crazy. Bella keeps a journal now... Dammit! That's like another level of crazy. Okay stike the journal and let's move on.
A lot of things have changed except for Bella's devil's attention grabbing driving, Nami's rolls and...
Bella : * Smacks MC's head angrily *...I would've chosen something moderately better, if I had known you were gonna keep your first ever hairstyle for the rest of your life. We're going to Emilio's tomorrow.
MC : No.
Bella : YES !!!
MC : Fine.
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Things that's happened during the college...
* Ayua kicks air *...
Sai : Bitch ! You almost kicked my face in.
Ayua : Sorry, practising my new kick.
* Ayua kicks someone's face in *
............
Nia : Nami, did you hear about that rumor ?
Nami : Cyrus grabbed Robin's butt out in the public ?...Nah.
Nia : T-They say there are pic-pictures.
* Sai screams for life outside the class *
Nami : ... ... Look, even if it's true, as long as he didn't have any boner while doing it, I'm okay with it.
Nia :..b-but..
Nami : NO BUTTS !
............
Nadia : Who is ready for a tabletop ?
Sonya: ME!!!
Victoria : Me too.
Bella : * laughs hysterically *
Victoria : What's so funny ?
Bella : Tabletop is like the ONLY thing you can do girl. * Laughs *
Victoria : That's because I'm in a wheelchair ?...I used to be an outdoorsy.
Bella : * uncontrolled laughter *
MC : I'll come too.
Bella : But but you said you'd keep me company.
MC : I would've if you had kept your mouth at home.
Bella : Dumb fuck ! Just like you left your balls alone with Nojiko for safekeeping ?
MC : No, just like I'm leaving your ass in here alone with Troy. Have a nice detention.
Troy : ...
MC : Let's roll.
Bella : * loud laughter *
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an accountant? fuck i do some of that shit and i got me on these forums writting shit posts!
a surfer bum?
only positive part of your post is putting that cunt Bella in her place... it seems you are a secret Victoria team... or should i say you are on team victoria´s secret???
oh. just got a message from Sasha... its just a link!
why do i feel i am going to be trojaned and key logged...
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she is such a cutie!