- May 13, 2020
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So I'd played through SG last week, and I'll admit... any editor worth their salt would find many things wrong with SG. What's the name of "the college"? Why are so many places and areas germanic or slavic in nature/name(obvious answer, but it's still an area that requires fixing and should not become a constant... I mean this game is supposed to take place in New York)?
We just left the introductory phase... that along with my favor in this game are the only reasons why I was not harsher with my earlier critiques and ratings. The dialogue needs immediate attention, and that should be addressed before anything else. "I am Coach Stahl" & "I am Coach Cindy" can be changed to "I'm Coach Stahl" & "I'm Coach Cindy". Simple things like that would make this game much easier to read through and follow in regards to its story. There's a whole list of other things wrong that need improvement, but I understand the need for prioritization right now. Oceans has a lot on his plate, and many of these solutions are quite costly and time-consuming. But, like with all business ventures, sometimes you have to invest in your product in order to meet profitable returns.
Even with all of its flaws, it's still better than the majority of games on F95(its story at least). It has the potential to be one of the best adult stories on this website, and that says a lot about both SG and F95. Anyway, I've rambled on enough. I just hope that things work out for this game in the future ღ
We just left the introductory phase... that along with my favor in this game are the only reasons why I was not harsher with my earlier critiques and ratings. The dialogue needs immediate attention, and that should be addressed before anything else. "I am Coach Stahl" & "I am Coach Cindy" can be changed to "I'm Coach Stahl" & "I'm Coach Cindy". Simple things like that would make this game much easier to read through and follow in regards to its story. There's a whole list of other things wrong that need improvement, but I understand the need for prioritization right now. Oceans has a lot on his plate, and many of these solutions are quite costly and time-consuming. But, like with all business ventures, sometimes you have to invest in your product in order to meet profitable returns.
Even with all of its flaws, it's still better than the majority of games on F95(its story at least). It has the potential to be one of the best adult stories on this website, and that says a lot about both SG and F95. Anyway, I've rambled on enough. I just hope that things work out for this game in the future ღ