- May 10, 2017
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Brief review on this update.
First off to sum up how I felt about this update, it feels unfinished, it felt like it barely got going. I am of course not going to criticize anything about Maria or Abby's mother, those where clearly plot hooks. But this update had moments that barely got off the ground, the relationship with your aunt, your aunts friend, the milking business, pregnancy pills and the pregnancy, just to highlight how bad it was, in the last update you got to know Roxxy's friends better than the main focus of this update.
In the last update you resolved Roxxy's living issues over a few days, in this update, the mother of the MC's child sleeps on the couch for over a year for her full term, this is never addressed and it seems like a really big oversight.
There wasn't an arc or story for this update. You knock up the aunt and then the game goes through the process of popping out what I assume is a randomly generated child. It all feels so mechanical and cold for what should have been a really, really, big deal in the story.
First off to sum up how I felt about this update, it feels unfinished, it felt like it barely got going. I am of course not going to criticize anything about Maria or Abby's mother, those where clearly plot hooks. But this update had moments that barely got off the ground, the relationship with your aunt, your aunts friend, the milking business, pregnancy pills and the pregnancy, just to highlight how bad it was, in the last update you got to know Roxxy's friends better than the main focus of this update.
In the last update you resolved Roxxy's living issues over a few days, in this update, the mother of the MC's child sleeps on the couch for over a year for her full term, this is never addressed and it seems like a really big oversight.
There wasn't an arc or story for this update. You knock up the aunt and then the game goes through the process of popping out what I assume is a randomly generated child. It all feels so mechanical and cold for what should have been a really, really, big deal in the story.
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