Hmm well there was some progress but kinda feeling iffy about the story elements, the entire 'She disappeared' thing..
girl you have a business to handle, atleast take your phone for important stuff..
Or the 'I will let connie stay in my room idk how sister will react if she knew I let connie stay in one of the hotel rooms'
What do you mean how she will react? its a hotel, she is a paying customer, let her stay in one of the many rooms, you dont need to 'be friends' with customers before letting them stay..
And is just me? I rather not have these "dream-sex-sequences" at all (atleast from mc side) vs having them in the story to fulfil some quota or something,
Also one of the twins + jaz tell the mc about fetishes etc and this dude who is an adult, has been in a long term relationship, isnt a recent 18yr less-confident-virgin guy... has nothing good to say, he even 'sighs' as a reponse.. like WHY..
Can we ignore the 'sister' and focus on Ashley or some other girl.... (wishful thinking)
Rip twins, the collective 'twin' vibe in the start was completely changed.