From this point of view, yeah I understand what you mean and I agree. Mrdot is not great for surprises in his plots and we see them coming from afar. Dialogue point of view, it's especially the internal monologue of the Mc that I find the most boring. All the time asking himself 500 questions before answering his interlocutor. I know it's important to think before you speak most of the time, but fuck... I'm glad we don't have to see him pee.
"Hmmm... Do I sit or stand? But if I stay up I risk pissing everywhere" (yeah, he's continuously hard) "But if I sit down, I risk pissing myself in the face! Maybe if you do a handstand on the toilet seat it might work?" And then before any action with girls....
If you do that with a girl she will go away before you know it [the girl] "Have him got a stroke or something??? What a fucking weirdo! That's it! I'm out"