I don't know what in your eyes could be good writing or not, but for what I know there is a good background for each character with a story arc with plots that make good points in my book. Saying you don't like the game because maybe it's not your kind of game is fine, but saying it's bad? It looks like a bit of a whimsical child who didn't get his favorite dessert. Constructive criticism might be more appropriate. There are definitely some inconsistencies in the writing, and what Mrdot does is probably not to everyone's taste. So unless you're here just for some nice pictures to jerk off to, I don't understand why, if you don't like the story of "Melody", you're bored playing other Mrdot games because that for the three games he developed, we can see his style and his trademark which remains unchanged since DMD