VN Ren'Py Completed Sunshine Love [Ch. 3 v1.01i Extras] [MrDots Games]

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Broutminou said:
They are tied in my game. I count only 2 with Trisha. One in her office, and the other in her car. And she was only fucked once by the Mc
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trisha and mc were going to fuck in her house but got interrupted.
 
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Broutminou said:
I don't know what in your eyes could be good writing or not, but for what I know there is a good background for each character with a story arc with plots that make good points in my book. Saying you don't like the game because maybe it's not your kind of game is fine, but saying it's bad? It looks like a bit of a whimsical child who didn't get his favorite dessert. Constructive criticism might be more appropriate. There are definitely some inconsistencies in the writing, and what Mrdot does is probably not to everyone's taste. So unless you're here just for some nice pictures to jerk off to, I don't understand why, if you don't like the story of "Melody", you're bored playing other Mrdot games because that for the three games he developed, we can see his style and his trademark which remains unchanged since DMD
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Adult VN games have their own cliches and you can see most of them in this game. What I meant is the dev lacks creativity in the development of the story. The general aspect of the story and characters are really good. And I already said that the renders are beautiful. My problem is mostly with the dialogues and some scenes. Dialogues are boring for me most of the time and I saw several "accidental" sexual situations like characters falling upon each other. But maybe it is so hard to make intriguing this kind of story and I'm wrong. I don't know.

And I must say I'm almost sure we will suddenly make peace with the most evil characters in this game too. I'm still stuck with Melody about this. I was like "wtf? just like that huh?" :D
 
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only way to peace with connie's dad is that mc marries connie or sis sells hotel to him or some sort of miracle happens.
 
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Uthuriel said:
Good MrDots writing? :KEK:
Because so far in SL I'm not impressed...
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well i was thinking more like sis hotel comes so successful that it can't be bought or mayor orders that town must have 2 hotel owners or he gets caught due past shehanigans and his son becomes hotel boss.
 
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well i was thinking more like sis hotel comes so successful that it can't be bought or mayor orders that town must have 2 hotel owners or he gets caught due past shehanigans and his son becomes hotel boss.
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I'm pretty sure he and Kristinas father will both be in jail at the end. Lucas too. He is a criminal anyway.
 
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Someone told me on Dating My Daughter page that SL will have a update this month, so how long until it arrives?

P.S. If ithis question was already answered point me to it, please...
 
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only way to peace with connie's dad is that mc marries connie or sis sells hotel to him or some sort of miracle happens.
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hmmm
Guess I'll be hoping for the miracle path then, lol

I even went back and rejected the kiss... hoping not to spend any more time w Connie but that didn't
really help. tbh that's kind of why I kind of eased off of playing so much. But oh well... We'll just soldier on! lol

Cheers
 
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This probably have already been solved but I can't find anything about it. After the cuddle scene in Chapter one I get the error iamge can't be found. How do I fix this? My whole screen is black except for dialogue boxes and options to pick.
 
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Tiago Patrício said:
Someone told me on Dating My Daughter page that SL will have a update this month, so how long until it arrives?

P.S. If ithis question was already answered point me to it, please...
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The next update will be released on Saturday, October 29th

https://f95zone.to/threads/sunshine-love-ch-2-v0-03i-extras-mrdots-games.49330/post-9098393


I also thought I saw that they were going to focus the next 2 updates on SL and then DMD for a Christmas release...
BUT, I could be very wrong about that so take it w a grain of salt... I'm still looking for that particular post.... heck could of even been from a diff game... I'm fairly stupid... lol

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TrenciJack said:
Adult VN games have their own cliches and you can see most of them in this game. What I meant is the dev lacks creativity in the development of the story. The general aspect of the story and characters are really good. And I already said that the renders are beautiful. My problem is mostly with the dialogues and some scenes. Dialogues are boring for me most of the time and I saw several "accidental" sexual situations like characters falling upon each other. But maybe it is so hard to make intriguing this kind of story and I'm wrong. I don't know.

And I must say I'm almost sure we will suddenly make peace with the most evil characters in this game too. I'm still stuck with Melody about this. I was like "wtf? just like that huh?" :D
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From this point of view, yeah I understand what you mean and I agree. Mrdot is not great for surprises in his plots and we see them coming from afar. Dialogue point of view, it's especially the internal monologue of the Mc that I find the most boring. All the time asking himself 500 questions before answering his interlocutor. I know it's important to think before you speak most of the time, but fuck... I'm glad we don't have to see him pee.

"Hmmm... Do I sit or stand? But if I stay up I risk pissing everywhere" (yeah, he's continuously hard) "But if I sit down, I risk pissing myself in the face! Maybe if you do a handstand on the toilet seat it might work?" And then before any action with girls....
If you do that with a girl she will go away before you know it [the girl] "Have him got a stroke or something??? What a fucking weirdo! That's it! I'm out"
 
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Grront said:
This probably have already been solved but I can't find anything about it. After the cuddle scene in Chapter one I get the error iamge can't be found. How do I fix this? My whole screen is black except for dialogue boxes and options to pick.
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I didn't get any error for the missing pic. Maybe try re-downloading the game? some archive might be corrupted
 
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Broutminou said:
From this point of view, yeah I understand what you mean and I agree. Mrdot is not great for surprises in his plots and we see them coming from afar. Dialogue point of view, it's especially the internal monologue of the Mc that I find the most boring. All the time asking himself 500 questions before answering his interlocutor. I know it's important to think before you speak most of the time, but fuck... I'm glad we don't have to see him pee.

"Hmmm... Do I sit or stand? But if I stay up I risk pissing everywhere" (yeah, he's continuously hard) "But if I sit down, I risk pissing myself in the face! Maybe if you do a handstand on the toilet seat it might work?" And then before any action with girls....
If you do that with a girl she will go away before you know it [the girl] "Have him got a stroke or something??? What a fucking weirdo! That's it! I'm out"
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I just saw the first handjob scene with MC's sister and she convinced him it's all a dream. Come on man. Now I'm sure the problem is not me here. :D

And yeah, I completely agree about the internal monologue thing. I'm sick of reading about every small thing from MC's point of view after they happened.
 
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Uthuriel said:
I'm pretty sure he and Kristinas father will both be in jail at the end. Lucas too. He is a criminal anyway.
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possible.

Broutminou said:
hehe... I know that I was here humm.... Well, you know what I mean, but interrupted so not fucking, so not saucage in the doughnut, soooo Trish = 2 not 3 :p
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well he got hj i think.

Forgotted said:
I also thought I saw that they were going to focus the next 2 updates on SL and then DMD for a Christmas release...
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sl gets 2 updates in row, current and upcoming and then devs focus on dmd. normal would been dmd at end of month and then sl at december.
 
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