After reading the changes, the situation with the "threeway setup" got not really solved. It's now "you have the option to reject Victoria's advancement, but you also kill the potential threeway alltogether if you do so" or "go along with the sudden lesbian scene, that we implemented in some kind of punishment for going for both LIs in one playthrough, if you want the threeway". In my opinion it doesn't even make any sense at all, that if the sister (by player choices) doesn't want to fuck Victoria, that Vic breaks up with the MC. And there are probably thousand different ways to implement a threeway relationship without the betrayal of any LI. But here you went with one of the worst.
As for the twins, yeah, well nobody needs to be prefect and I don't expect anyone to be a virgin uppon meeting. I don't even care, if the LI or fuckbuddy has already children. But in all honesty, coming now, close to the end of this VN, and revealing that they running an escort services, them saying they are part of the service and not only managing it, and also having sex with some of the clients for cash and then telling us outside of the VN, that they're not prostitutes, is the most dumb way to justify this. And IMO, there is no way you could rewrite that without changing the story, so that your fanbase will magically accept it. It's still prostitution, even if you call it escort service.
Take my post with a grain of salt, because I didn't play this "fix and rewrite". I even doubt, that my opinion would change. The whole update felt in the first attempt like a punishment for players, that tried to maximize their scene count in one playthrough, and the post with the changes reads like it didn't get better in any way. But whatever, my post will probably once again be deleted, like the last one in this thread.