- Thread starter ozoz69
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- Sep 24, 2017
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Honestly I think the story is great, haven't seen NTR yet though since it was all consensual between couples. Somebody argued with me that 'swinging' is not NTR, according to the Likes this one received it wasn't a conversation I could win by denying so I assumed he was right :test: However, it would be NTR if Brian and the MC wife hook up secretly while Ashley and the MC do the same.
The only thing that is missing are proper transitional phases, scenes just seem to pop from one to the other. Beyond that, the amount of content is excellent especially considering it's 0.05b. The blonde friend of the wife, Ashley is definitely my favorite, such a slutwife ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Loves sharing and having other women's husbands, my ideal girlfriend harharhar
EDIT: Is incest out of the question? Too taboo? :tf: Cuz I'd love to see some daughter-father and brother-sister action.
The only thing that is missing are proper transitional phases, scenes just seem to pop from one to the other. Beyond that, the amount of content is excellent especially considering it's 0.05b. The blonde friend of the wife, Ashley is definitely my favorite, such a slutwife ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Loves sharing and having other women's husbands, my ideal girlfriend harharhar
EDIT: Is incest out of the question? Too taboo? :tf: Cuz I'd love to see some daughter-father and brother-sister action.
- May 30, 2017
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I'm trying to make a good game. There had to be many different possibilities in the story. But my computer is so bad that I have to skip some details. There is some deception in the new version.
MC and Brian will change their partners in the future.
Tania will be a big bitch.
There will be a little bit about incest, and will continue to increase in future versions.
But all of this is pushing me hard. My earnings not good in Patreon and and excessive increase in the dollar exchange rate in my country.. Computer prices have increased 3 times.
I expect a material improvement at the end of this month. If this happens I will replace my computer with a much better computer. Then the game will be much nicer.
We'll wait and see.
Swinger Family v0.6
I apologize for this everybody.
Sep 8 at 7:18pm
I live in the region because of weather conditions, internet access is broken because I have a delay, I apologize for this everybody.
with pleasure in your game
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I apologize for this everybody.
Sep 8 at 7:18pm
I live in the region because of weather conditions, internet access is broken because I have a delay, I apologize for this everybody.
with pleasure in your game
- Nov 15, 2017
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And needs some serious polishing.
The translation this time (apart from the 2 pages that were totally missed) was appalling. Really broken English which also mixes up genders all over. The intention was fairly clear and by watching the stats the choices were understandable, that's the best I can say about 0.6.
Sorry @ozoz69 that was possibly the worst update so far.
ETA - there were 2 pictures by the pool where the husband was bald.
- Oct 30, 2017
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''....... their life and guiding and controlling their decisions.''
''.... their sex life is becoming boring. You can help them overcome this''
ok its seem so good . how much content on it? i'ts seem not to much right?. but really wanna test it :firstimekiss:
''.... their sex life is becoming boring. You can help them overcome this''
ok its seem so good . how much content on it? i'ts seem not to much right?. but really wanna test it :firstimekiss:
my friend, It seems you need to take a step back and work on your stuff more before releasing it.
Your game is also against patreons rules so when they find it they will ask you to remove it. (incest is against their tos)
most people make patches so you can change it back to what the intended thing were. In this case incest.
But my advice is to at least find someone willing to proof read the text a little. renders and the other coding stuff, take your time with it. i think you are doing pretty well so far, this is the best game of this genre that I've seen so i'd like for it to continue and get better a long the way.
- Jul 5, 2017
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That would be cheating. And it could be classified as NTR as long if sexual jealousy is involved. But I prefer to classify NTR differently, as for example: if Tania engages in sexual activity with Brian, and then becomes romanticaly or sexualy involved, at the point that she starts to care less and less with her husband. Also, in some point of the story, the protagonist, the husband, in case, would be invoved in jealousness.
- Jan 29, 2018
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This latest update-0.06,in my opinion was very very short!Not much content from any of the characters,really disappointing.I played it then deleted it from my HD,as it wasn't worth keeping!Maybe next updated if I decide to download it will actual have a decent amount of content!
- Jun 10, 2017
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It's not just mixed up genders, take this choice : "Oh, never mind. Elliot is his son. Besides, my love is to much horny if my mother sees the secret places and Better fuck me."
It's not his son (neither "her son") and it's not the mother who see the secret places, she show it.
What bother me here, is not the broke English. It's not my natural language and it took me thirty years before reaching my actual level of knowledge with it. So, I clearly understand that it's not easy and that you can mess up with your translation.
No, what bother me here is that he just needed to peacefully read what he wrote to see the two obvious errors I pointed ; I don't even talk about proof reading it, just reading it again, in the context and while not in the hurry. "What I did ? He's not her son !", and, "Er... 'sees' ? Isn't it the opposite, isn't she showing it ?"
Now come the main question : If he didn't took the time to verify that he didn't messed up with the relation between two characters and used a verb expressing the total opposite of what he wanted to say, how can we be sure that he took the time to ensure that his code is working correctly ?
Messing with letter's case, by writing "lesbiansex" instead of "Lesbiansex" by example, is a common error that even coders with decades of experience do way too often that they are ready to confess. The problem is that it will totally break the game. If the error happen in a test condition, it will prevent a scene to be triggered, this whatever the player do. And we will never know it unless someone proof read all the code.
That's what bother me...
I don't, and will never, expect from an author to have a perfect English ; I don't care about this. I don't, and will never, expect from an author to be perfect and don't have a single error in his dialog ; it's sometimes disturbing, but we are humans, we all make some errors.
But when the problem is so obvious, yes, I complain. Not for the pleasure to do it, but as warning/advice for the author. Writing a working code mean that you need to be really careful to the smallest details. And you clearly aren't if you don't see the Elephant stuck between your head and the screen ; like it's the case here.
- Nov 15, 2017
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I totally agree.
It's easy for me to criticise someone else's English, being a native speaker, but I know I'm not perfect and try not to do it unjustly, also I barely speak more than a couple of words in other languages, so can't talk. I hope my posting history comes across as understanding of non-native English speakers, which I know @ozoz69 is. It was just this episode was particularly poor and now you say it, I also remember the switch in dialogue between Elliot and her husband. Everything seemed very rushed as it was uncharacteristic mistakes.
- Jun 30, 2018
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Just working through the game, so for now just a comment about the music. I won't do anything about it, of course, but I would strongly consider taking the Avril Lavigne song out. Unless you pay royalties for it to use it in your game. Also, it gets annoying after about the tenth time.
- Jun 10, 2017
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Not sure how to take your answer, so I'll play it safe. You don't have to worry, I don't think that someone can read your initial comment as an harsh one regarding the author's english.
It's another example of the "you need to be careful" thing. With Ren'py, dialog lines looks like this :
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mc "So, I am the MC of this game. I'll hope that you'll enjoy making me fuck my relatives. Yes, I know, yet another incest game."
mom "Hi, I'm his mother. I can't wait to see if my son have a big dick."
sis "And I'm the annoying little sister who wanted to be banged by her brother even before her birth."And like you said, the fact that the errors are obvious, and usually don't happen with this game, feel like the update was rushed. Which isn't a good thing seen how people can be impulsive and call for bullshit, milking and things like that, when an update don't reach the standard they expected.
