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This is considered smart compared to other Ntr protags? Oh boy...
RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551] [Fujino]
- Oct 14, 2018
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The Affection description will be translated, as soon as you update her stats in the shrine.
Hi. I want to preface this by saying I'm a long time lurker in this thread and this is my first post in f95. Seeing as Fujino just posted a notice addressing some criticisms and other parts of his work, I'd like to share the comment I posted in ci-en regarding my opinion on the game.
Honestly, the update was good. The scenes were really well done (in my opinion) and the facial expressions were top notch.
I think a lot of people are forgetting that we're still in ver 0.25 of a game that's intended to be a slow build up for a really good payoff. I love the pacing of the story as it is, and speeding it up would limit creativity I think. The potential for multiple massage scenes, multiple risky phone call moments and risky FOG scenarios (such as the one in this update) is really really high. The sky's the limit with these scenes. Making Inoda and Asuna speed up would give people short term satisfaction, but would overall hurt the final product I think. Especially with the way the story is currently set up, having Asuna jump straight into Inoda's arms (or just speeding it up in general) instead of letting Liz and Inoda's plot play out would remove some of the excitement of waiting to see what's next in the new update.
Personally, I think just doing what you do best and not letting people dictate everything you do too much would be ideal. At the end of the day, I'm here for a game made by the hard work and effort of Fujino, not a game that's dictated by an audience that can't handle letting a narrative properly develop with a good payoff, and is just obsessed with short term pleasure instead of a long term great game and narrative.
TLDR; Let Fujino cook. They clearly have an idea that will take some time to execute but will pay off big time. For people complaining about how we're only getting handjobs and too much Kirito development, remember that this is VERSION 0.25 of a game. Give it time. Trust me a short term payoff would absolutely SUCK in the long term.
Honestly, the update was good. The scenes were really well done (in my opinion) and the facial expressions were top notch.
I think a lot of people are forgetting that we're still in ver 0.25 of a game that's intended to be a slow build up for a really good payoff. I love the pacing of the story as it is, and speeding it up would limit creativity I think. The potential for multiple massage scenes, multiple risky phone call moments and risky FOG scenarios (such as the one in this update) is really really high. The sky's the limit with these scenes. Making Inoda and Asuna speed up would give people short term satisfaction, but would overall hurt the final product I think. Especially with the way the story is currently set up, having Asuna jump straight into Inoda's arms (or just speeding it up in general) instead of letting Liz and Inoda's plot play out would remove some of the excitement of waiting to see what's next in the new update.
Personally, I think just doing what you do best and not letting people dictate everything you do too much would be ideal. At the end of the day, I'm here for a game made by the hard work and effort of Fujino, not a game that's dictated by an audience that can't handle letting a narrative properly develop with a good payoff, and is just obsessed with short term pleasure instead of a long term great game and narrative.
TLDR; Let Fujino cook. They clearly have an idea that will take some time to execute but will pay off big time. For people complaining about how we're only getting handjobs and too much Kirito development, remember that this is VERSION 0.25 of a game. Give it time. Trust me a short term payoff would absolutely SUCK in the long term.
Gender-Equalized NTR for the win XD!Hm, nice. I hope Suguha gets more screentime from now on, she was really neglected in Part 2.
Would be nice, If she would turn into an Inoda counterpart NTRing Asuna even more.
This is the sad reality, if Fujino doesn't do exactly what they want, they will complain...but because so many people want different or specific things he will never be able to please everyone, so someone will ALWAYS complain. Such is the ungrateful nature of internet randoms getting free hentai XP
I assume you never saw SAO beyond S1 or 2 maybe, but Alice is a character for the Alicization arc and a massively popular one in SAO overall, which is probably how she won the poll to be included in this game...the thing is, though, that there is no way to implement Alice as she was in Canon SAO here, even less so than Sinon, so Fujino had to basically make a full-on OC from background to relationship with the cast and give her Alice's looks to 'include her' in the game, which is probably why I'm also the least interested in her XP But yes, 100% agree with you in how great the Suguha part was :3I don't know who Alice is, so I don't care for her.
But Slutsuma is a boring character, all she does, is going to school, after that fucks with Inoda or Kirito or play games, and everybody knows how it's gonna end, so she is basically just a fuck toy. I don't believe that I'm saying this, but even Cuckito has more depth.
Suguha on the other hand, despite being in a much worse situation and much more corrupted is finally developing as a character. Making her NTR Asuna was a smart move by the dev, that's unusual for the genre, makes her much more likable and opens possibilities for new scenes.
Lame update, the game is going backwards, from nowhere Asuna gives a handjob to Inoda, but inst she totally reluctant on even approaching on him? It seems like the dev dont know how to please everyone and its trying to do it giving Asuna's scenes and at same time slowing a lot the progression.
Mostly this update for me was like "skip skip skip skip skip" all of those useless text.
Such a shame that the dev is being so much influenced by others opinions and ruining the entire game.
And what a fuck was that shit of "increase dick medicine"?
Fuck men i'm so disapointed with all this waiting for this. The man has everything to make Asunas get convinced to fuck him again in game with the excuses of not being a real thing, but no, he choses to make her submisseve from nowhere.
Mostly this update for me was like "skip skip skip skip skip" all of those useless text.
Such a shame that the dev is being so much influenced by others opinions and ruining the entire game.
And what a fuck was that shit of "increase dick medicine"?
Fuck men i'm so disapointed with all this waiting for this. The man has everything to make Asunas get convinced to fuck him again in game with the excuses of not being a real thing, but no, he choses to make her submisseve from nowhere.
- Jan 26, 2019
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the thing is : Fujino clearly has a vision for his game
but at the same time, he's trying to cater to his patrons.
something that NEVER works.
either go into tunnel vision mode on the idea/concept and accept the fact that some people will drop support while others don't
or let the patrons decide what they want using polls and have them voice their opinions on Discord. (this choice is the safest for HDEVS)
- Oct 14, 2018
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Yeah, I only watched the first season and liked only the first half of it.
To be clear, I think there is nothing wrong with side characters; they are needed to progress the story in a more fluid way. Otherwise, we would just jump from one scene to another like many NTR games do, which is boring.bro the fucking game still need story if you want CG go to nhentai and porn of some shit you don't need to play the game disapointed because the update not for you it fucking happen for all game when it have new update that why never hype for anything it will disapointed you if you want only CG for next update just don't play the game just ask people for CG
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- Oct 21, 2022
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Yea, the game is made in Chinese, then he uses MTL to make the English version. MTL is not perfect and misses stuff, especially if the original text is in the picture and not the engine. You have to wait for an actual translation for everything else.
that why i hate some moron on internet i hope fujino not care for a lot toxic comment
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I agree it needs story but come on,
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Then you got Asuna's mother,
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Then there is Kirito he is getting dumber in each update, yes yes I know everyone hates him so who cares, but turning him into the horny boy who then ignores and treats everyone else like crap is again not the best the storyline.
There are other things I could keep going on here and this is not an attack, this is a forum where people can have their own thoughts and mine are the story is a mess, there were much better options that could be used for almost every girl in the game then what is currently being used.
I like a storyllne in any game even NTR but this storyline is all over the place, perhaps that due to trying to keep everyone happy.
I liked that there was a little more showing of the scenes of Kirito and Asuna having sex, where you can see that Asuna is not happy with him. Even Asuna didn't like it when Kirito fucked her pussy hard even though she likes being fucked hard by Inoda. This is nicely shown, because then Asuna's relationship with Kirito will decrease, and her relationship with Inoda will increase. I didn't like the scene of Suguha jerking Kirito's cock while Kirito was sleeping on the bed. Of course, I also liked the Inod and Asuna scenes, when Asuna was jerking Inod's cock or doing kinky things to her in FOG.
I read the novels before the anime was even a thing so I didn't have even remotely the same issues most people have with it (Mainly as a lot of them are problems with the anime adaptation being terrible in many of the novels' aspects sadly or cutting content, or people plain misunderstanding scenes even the anime made clear XP), but I can get you. If it helps, most of the issues people had with the 2nd half of S1 are gone in the next ones so I would recommend it if you were particularly into Kirito's adventure, or better yet reading the novels for the less cringe experience lolYeah, I only watched the first season and liked only the first half of it.
And yeah, I agree with that. Though I may also be biased for being one of the few SAO fans that's just sick of Asuna after how much Canon gives us so much of her and completely sidelines the rest of the female cast constantly in her favor, so I prefer most of the other girls over her, especially with Kirito, which is why this Suguha development that I did NOT expect to see in a NTR game pleased me so much XD
Preach it dude! While I'm not 100% sure Fujino will not just drop this particular development and devolve back to cliche NTR tropes with her, I wanna believe otherwise, especially with how positive her reactions seemed to be towards basically sleep-raping him twice XD (Really wanna see that added to the recollection room next update)
- Aug 7, 2019
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next time less talk and more action. However we know the fate of the game, we were cuckolded and we will remain cuckolded
The SAO series is about the boundary between VR and reality and the relationship of Kazuto and Asuna. That's why Asuna and Kazuto have more scenes in the LN and anime, and the rest of the characters are secondary. But from the Unital Ring arc, Lisbeth, Silica, Yui have more scene. Suguha had her scenes in the Fairy Dance arc, the same Sinon in the GGO arc. I like it when Asuna and Kazuto (Kirito) love scenes are shown more in the LN, of course I like the rest of the girls' characters too.
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2. There was an excessive focus on Inoda's inner struggles, resulting in a weak sense of betrayal.
This is also my own doing, as I intended to shape Inoda as a somewhat perverted and comical character. Moreover, considering that many friends identified with Inoda through self-insertion, I didn't want to portray him as a complete scumbag. However, it appears that the outcome didn't satisfy everyone, and I will reassess this moving forward.
The issue with the sense of betrayal lies in the current progress. I currently don't have any remarkable developments for Inoda and Asuna's dynamic. This ties into another problem.
So from what I read from the dev is that we are not suppose to see Inoda as a complete scumbag by seeing his inner struggles. What inner struggle was there? In Part 1 I could see him less scumbag because he only went after Asuna and used pretty tame tactics. But in Part 2, he uses fake aphrodisiac, blackmailed Kyouko into accomplice, and teams up with Liz to break the couple up. Even when I hear his thoughts, I see him as a uncontrollable sex addict. If anything he was less a scumbag before and now has no redeeming qualities. Did I miss something?
Was it all times he said he was unloved by his parents and he is so ugly no like him? He said those things when we trying to get Asuna to feel sympathy for him so am I suppose to think he is right or deserves it?
This is also my own doing, as I intended to shape Inoda as a somewhat perverted and comical character. Moreover, considering that many friends identified with Inoda through self-insertion, I didn't want to portray him as a complete scumbag. However, it appears that the outcome didn't satisfy everyone, and I will reassess this moving forward.
The issue with the sense of betrayal lies in the current progress. I currently don't have any remarkable developments for Inoda and Asuna's dynamic. This ties into another problem.
So from what I read from the dev is that we are not suppose to see Inoda as a complete scumbag by seeing his inner struggles. What inner struggle was there? In Part 1 I could see him less scumbag because he only went after Asuna and used pretty tame tactics. But in Part 2, he uses fake aphrodisiac, blackmailed Kyouko into accomplice, and teams up with Liz to break the couple up. Even when I hear his thoughts, I see him as a uncontrollable sex addict. If anything he was less a scumbag before and now has no redeeming qualities. Did I miss something?
Was it all times he said he was unloved by his parents and he is so ugly no like him? He said those things when we trying to get Asuna to feel sympathy for him so am I suppose to think he is right or deserves it?