RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551] [Fujino]
Just thoughts on the second part of the game:
The plot of the game changed in the other direction, in the first part of the game everything was like in the usual N.T.R. genre.
- stupid, blind GG. with a small penis and no stamina.
- a cunning, fat freak, a loser, with a huge penis and stamina, who presses for pity or blackmails or deceives or manipulates girls in the game.
GG doesn’t guess anything and doesn’t notice anything (well, or just a little). We observe(as a player) of hidden betrayals and enjoy it (at the end of the day in the room of memories we discover something that we didn’t see (and we get even more excited as a player and jerk off _))
Everything is going according to N.T.R.’s scenario. and blah blah blah, the slow corruption of Asuna by Inoda. And everything is fine for us (as a player) because we expected this from N.T.R.
But then we start playing the second part of the game) and everything becomes somehow wrong:
“Deus ex Machina” appears (read on the Internet what this means
in the role of “Administrator” and here the script goes in the laziest way:
- we remember that Inoda was deceived when he bought “candles”
(candles are fake) BUT on a rainy night when Asuna has already been at her house for several hours (candles do NOT affect her) and it’s BOOM! "Administrator" is just having fun and makes Asuna super sensitive. And Inoda rapes her and blah blah blah.
- further in the story, Kirito finally becomes super anxious, constantly notices something, adds 1+2 and analyzes, and begins to suspect Asuna and Inoda (but we, as a player, saw how stupid, deaf and blind Kirito is_)) and it seems that here again the influence of the “Administrator” "(after all, Kirito amuses her and she always, and everywhere, intervenes for the sake of her amusement).
- the appearance of Lisbeth, so that Inoda gets 1 more girl (but for now I assure us that she is interested in Kirito and may get him. SPOILER - NO!), she starts her own intrigue. Takes patronage over Inoda. And again, it’s not clear whether she’s a genius at finding out secrets and noticing and analyzing everything (or whether the “Administrator” directs her for his own entertainment)
- the appearance of Alice and Sinon, Alice is interested in Kirito just like Suguha, and Sinon who will go to Kirito because Hebishima will be removed from the game later (because no one is interested in him and everyone asked to remove him)
- now we have parity, Inoda will have Asuna, (Asuna's mother) Kyoko and Lisbeth, Kirito will have Suguha, Alice and Sinon, but we will be shown the tapo Alice will be with Klein SPOILER - NO!
- then the plot turns into a soap opera like Santa Barbara, there is a lot of text and reflections, the characters change their character and the first part of the game seems to be forgotten, there are almost no peeks with guesses about what is happening there (no intrigue) because we, as a player, are waiting for the end of the day to see what was left behind the scenes in the room of memories later (to have a good jerk off)
- the lazy way of how to reveal the plot continues, due to the fact that we already know that everything in the game is the tricks of the “Administrator”, all the characters lose their significance
- Asuna twisted her ankle, Inoda (after praying to all the gods) BOOM! knows how to give a massage and BOOM! Asuna forgave him for RAPE! and HARASSMENT! during the fight with the TREE! and is already jerking off to him, hiding everything from Kirito as always (but we, as a player, know that it was the “Administrator” who intervened, and not the whore Asuna, or the genius Inoda, such as they are)
- “Administrator” helps any character, or interferes in reality or in the FOG if this requires advancing the plot or explaining something
- with Alice’s hypnosis I laughed and jerked off =) The stage is fire! but the plot idea is just funny
(where then are the dances with a tambourine? or rolling a chicken egg on the forehead =) such a lazy plot...
My opinion is that the influence of the “Administrator” should be reduced, because because of her, all the characters, their actions, actions and thoughts are devalued. It turns out we are playing a game where the “Administrator” controls everyone like puppets for fun. The feeling of N.T.R disappears.
The plot of the game changed in the other direction, in the first part of the game everything was like in the usual N.T.R. genre.
- stupid, blind GG. with a small penis and no stamina.
- a cunning, fat freak, a loser, with a huge penis and stamina, who presses for pity or blackmails or deceives or manipulates girls in the game.
GG doesn’t guess anything and doesn’t notice anything (well, or just a little). We observe(as a player) of hidden betrayals and enjoy it (at the end of the day in the room of memories we discover something that we didn’t see (and we get even more excited as a player and jerk off _))
Everything is going according to N.T.R.’s scenario. and blah blah blah, the slow corruption of Asuna by Inoda. And everything is fine for us (as a player) because we expected this from N.T.R.
But then we start playing the second part of the game) and everything becomes somehow wrong:
“Deus ex Machina” appears (read on the Internet what this means
in the role of “Administrator” and here the script goes in the laziest way:
- we remember that Inoda was deceived when he bought “candles”
(candles are fake) BUT on a rainy night when Asuna has already been at her house for several hours (candles do NOT affect her) and it’s BOOM! "Administrator" is just having fun and makes Asuna super sensitive. And Inoda rapes her and blah blah blah.
- further in the story, Kirito finally becomes super anxious, constantly notices something, adds 1+2 and analyzes, and begins to suspect Asuna and Inoda (but we, as a player, saw how stupid, deaf and blind Kirito is_)) and it seems that here again the influence of the “Administrator” "(after all, Kirito amuses her and she always, and everywhere, intervenes for the sake of her amusement).
- the appearance of Lisbeth, so that Inoda gets 1 more girl (but for now I assure us that she is interested in Kirito and may get him. SPOILER - NO!), she starts her own intrigue. Takes patronage over Inoda. And again, it’s not clear whether she’s a genius at finding out secrets and noticing and analyzing everything (or whether the “Administrator” directs her for his own entertainment)
- the appearance of Alice and Sinon, Alice is interested in Kirito just like Suguha, and Sinon who will go to Kirito because Hebishima will be removed from the game later (because no one is interested in him and everyone asked to remove him)
- now we have parity, Inoda will have Asuna, (Asuna's mother) Kyoko and Lisbeth, Kirito will have Suguha, Alice and Sinon, but we will be shown the tapo Alice will be with Klein SPOILER - NO!
- then the plot turns into a soap opera like Santa Barbara, there is a lot of text and reflections, the characters change their character and the first part of the game seems to be forgotten, there are almost no peeks with guesses about what is happening there (no intrigue) because we, as a player, are waiting for the end of the day to see what was left behind the scenes in the room of memories later (to have a good jerk off)
- the lazy way of how to reveal the plot continues, due to the fact that we already know that everything in the game is the tricks of the “Administrator”, all the characters lose their significance
- Asuna twisted her ankle, Inoda (after praying to all the gods) BOOM! knows how to give a massage and BOOM! Asuna forgave him for RAPE! and HARASSMENT! during the fight with the TREE! and is already jerking off to him, hiding everything from Kirito as always (but we, as a player, know that it was the “Administrator” who intervened, and not the whore Asuna, or the genius Inoda, such as they are)
- “Administrator” helps any character, or interferes in reality or in the FOG if this requires advancing the plot or explaining something
- with Alice’s hypnosis I laughed and jerked off =) The stage is fire! but the plot idea is just funny
(where then are the dances with a tambourine? or rolling a chicken egg on the forehead =) such a lazy plot...
My opinion is that the influence of the “Administrator” should be reduced, because because of her, all the characters, their actions, actions and thoughts are devalued. It turns out we are playing a game where the “Administrator” controls everyone like puppets for fun. The feeling of N.T.R disappears.
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The game is really very cool. But I agree with the previous commentator. The very essence of NTR, as it seemed to me, is that a girl loves her boyfriend, but she is not satisfied with sex with him, so over and over again she finds herself “stolen” by a more depraved guy. And all the drama and feelings are built on her internal contradiction between love and lust, where she gradually loses her morality more and more and tends to believe that sex becomes more important to her than love. Therefore, the first part was a masterpiece for me. The hottest scene was undoubtedly the fireworks and action scenes.
It seems to me that Fujino certainly knows better how to make his game, but I hope the spirit of the first part will return. During the first part, I lazily skipped content with Suguha and random girls (and that’s ok), in the second part I admit I got bored from the abundance of filler content.
In any case, thanks for this game, it's one of the best in the genre along with Home Prisoner
It seems to me that Fujino certainly knows better how to make his game, but I hope the spirit of the first part will return. During the first part, I lazily skipped content with Suguha and random girls (and that’s ok), in the second part I admit I got bored from the abundance of filler content.
In any case, thanks for this game, it's one of the best in the genre along with Home Prisoner
In these perks, the point where Inoda asks Asuna to still play the role of Kirito's girlfriend is confusing and feels like some kind of mental disorder. from all of Inoda's actions in the first part, it's clear that he wants to make Asuna his. And that surrogacy thing, what a load of bullshit.
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You know at the end of the day we are still going come back to see the ending because sex scene are hot and erotic we want to see inoda bang Asuna and maybe Liz why because that tiny dark resides in are heart i like this game my only beef I hate hebishima
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Well, I think, as soon as Inoda finds out that Asuna is completely fallen in love with him, he'll probably get his "revenge" by allowing them to meet. I'm sure he will use some provocative methods, perhaps putting a vibrator on her while she's on date with Kirito, but he'll forbid Asuna from having any kind of sexual contact with him. It's just about manipulation and power I guess. Same with surrogacy, it's a total victory in his eyes.
That's my interpretation. However, Asuna going along with this does not make any sense, aside from truly loving Inoda and turning into a total bitch all of a sudden.^^
On a side note, in terms of content, many fetishes will be covered, so don't worry about that.
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I really liked part one, but these comments really make me uneasy about whats to come. I hope Cuckito isnt made to be too much of a loser or be disrepected too much for no reason, or that Asuna suddenly starts turning on him for the smallest things. I hate that kind of thing in these games. For me, at that point sex scenes turn from naughty to simply plainfull.
I had the same thing happen playing Hentaria 2, until the halfway point it was naughty, after that every sex scene felt so long and torturous that I couldnt wait for story bits. It was brutal, which would be good if there was a good payoff in good endings, which there was for male characters, but not for female. They barely apologized, and if they did, it was only for cruelly betraying him and telling on him, not for slutting themselves. Even the mc only blamed himself, even if he was so sweet of a character.
Sorry for the rant, but I hope I dont feel the same with this one.
I had the same thing happen playing Hentaria 2, until the halfway point it was naughty, after that every sex scene felt so long and torturous that I couldnt wait for story bits. It was brutal, which would be good if there was a good payoff in good endings, which there was for male characters, but not for female. They barely apologized, and if they did, it was only for cruelly betraying him and telling on him, not for slutting themselves. Even the mc only blamed himself, even if he was so sweet of a character.
Sorry for the rant, but I hope I dont feel the same with this one.
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Not gonna lie, it's not looking good for Kirito by any means
but he probably won't know anything until the end.Theoretically, there is a very slight possibility that Sugu picks him up."
forget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity
we need more sex in battleforget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity
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Asuna decides nothing, she isn't even a proper character in the common sense to begin with; she has no goal, motivation, or developement. She is just there to reflect the actions of others.forget it, part two is a love story between inoda and asuna's mother. Well, only one scene, the battle with the tree in the previous update, is worth something. Other than that every update goes about inoda and asuna's mother, kirito is physically painful to play in the last update. Asuna is now an innocent maiden who can't decide what she wants and gives handjobs to kirito and inoda. Out of pity
Well, we may have gotten an even more original way of getting rid of Hebishima after this last update, so maybe that last bit of hate from you (and me) will pay off XD
Ironically, that description of Kirito is usually how Fujino went with the main girls and the MCs on his Fate games before (They fell almost instantly to the NTR guy and over time they acted more and more 'subtly negatively towards their previous love interest until they were outright not insulting them to their faces to keep the façade, poorly at that), and this SAO one was the first time he tried going a different way actually XD
An accurate description tbh, hell, most of the characters were like this during Part 1 and a good chunk of Part 2, as a direct result of the NTR world and NTR Tropes being applied over their personalities. Ironically, Liz was the first one to leave that mold by trying her 'manipulations', but the moment Inoda turns the tables on her she will end up the same way. And Suguha was like that too until her unexpected change in this update :OAsuna decides nothing, she isn't even a proper character in the common sense to begin with; she has no goal, motivation, or developement. She is just there to reflect the actions of others.
Maybe I don't understand something and the plot is really just great and super cool. but neither on patreon nor on ci-en or anywhere else, the adepts of slow development didn't explain what is developing there. They talks about some kind of trust, but I can't understand it.Asuna decides nothing, she isn't even a proper character in the common sense to begin with; she has no goal, motivation, or developement. She is just there to reflect the actions of others.
Asuna's doing handjobs out of pity. But then Inoda earns trust, starts hitting on Asuna, she pushes him away again and trust is lost. And so it goes on and on.
If she doesn't push him away, she's just a handjobs whore who thinks she's an innocent virgin.
I don't understand what kind of development is going on between Asuna and Inoda, if someone could explain it, maybe my ass would burn less.
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It's hard to explain because of how torn and inconsistent the story and characters are. While there are good twists and setups, they don't work particularly well when put together on a larger scale.
Now, on your question:
The trust arc, to my understanding, is as simple as Asuna being upset for that night. Inoda couldn't figure out how to get close to her again, but with the help of Kirito in the first place and Liz secondarily, he wins her trust back by being a nice guy. Earning her trust means, that he can start to corrupt her once again.
But honestly, it's better not to dive too deep into this, because then it all falls apart.
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after the first part, Inoda has so much material to blackmail Asuna that she should have just fucked Inoda to death, but everyone just pretended it never happened.Now, on your question:
The trust arc, to my understanding, is as simple as Asuna being upset for that night. Inoda couldn't figure out how to get close to her again, but with the help of Kirito in the first place and Liz secondarily, he wins her trust back by being a nice guy. But honestly, it's better not to dive too deep into this, because then it all falls apart.
I'm more interested in who Kirito will end up with in the end than the NTR to be honest. That's why the game is best played as a mystery NTR. Keeps the stakes high. If you view all the scenes every time they occur in the story, it ruins the suspense and plotting. Since the story is pretty banal and all plot threads are stolen from other games anyway.Not gonna lie, it's not looking good for Kirito by any means
Theoretically, there is a very slight possibility that Sugu picks him up."
There was a scene with shino and kirito at the end of this update. A character that has had hardly any interaction with kirito thus far. Maybe liz is a red herring and shino is the true route? Although hebishima could end up with a threesome with sugu and shino and inoda could end up likewise with lis and asuna.
Maybe Kirito gets nothing in the end. Brutal
From the very beginning things have been set up for Kirito end up with a terrible 'bad end', either all alone and none the wiser or becoming someone who enjoys being cucked, from what the creator said.
The Shino/Sinon bit is clearly just there to create more of a 'NTR' feeling, before now this Sinon had practically nothing in common with the original one beyond their looks and MAYBE the backstory, but Hebishima seems to have fucked all trauma out of her, so Fujino probably wanted to create SOME link between her and Kirito to later make her being fucked by someone else feel 'more NTR' most likely (Hence why he finds her just as she's thinking she should maybe try and 'see other guys to get Sempai jealous', coincidentally).
Thing is, before this update it was very clear either Hebishima was gonna end up fucking Suguha and Sinon together eventually, or if he was removed they would both probably end up being fucked by Inoda, that was the only real outcome that could happen. HOWEVER, out of nowhere we got Suguha going a bit crazy this update and even slightly Yandere, giving not only a handjob but hinted to have done MORE while offscreen to Kazuto, TWICE even. And after that we see her in FoG apparently having openly screwed Hebishima over and then argued with him with no showing (At least as far as the update went) of they 'making up' by him fucking her, which is why suddenly Suguha maybe being the one to 'remove' Hebishima if that indeed does happen (As nothing is certain yet) is a possibility now.
Granted, this is still meant to be a NTR game so the odds of things just going wrong for Kirito will never vanish even with this change, tbh, there is just not gonna be a "happy" ending for him at all, as Asuna is the only one he cares for and she IS gonna be stolen away regardless. Hell, Suguha going Yandere on his ass may end up terribly in the way that she fucks him whenever she wants while he cries for Asuna, but I guess it would technically be a 'happy end' for Suguha (LMAO), and I would honestly don't mind it 'cause it would feel like a refreshing change from all the cliche NTR Tropes XP
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I wouldn't bet on Kirito getting something in the end; there are possibilities for at least an consolation prize since the last update with Sugu, however. ^^
As for Hebishima, well, sure, you can still go with the generic scumbag gets the other girls troupe, but that seems unlikely now.
Inoda will end up with Isuna, mom, and Liz; that's for sure unless Fujino changes his mind on his roadmap
I don't know if there are finished games by Fujino. I've only played the two unfinished ones, so I don't know how he likes to treat the main character in the end. The games were also very different from that one.