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RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551c] [Fujino]
Nice update. Lots of battle stuff behind Kuckito's back. Really surprised that Asuna refused penetration, it's interesting to see her trying to fight back. I would have liked to see more of what Inoda was doing to Asuna in the blacksmith's, before you enter the cave, and during the cut scene between the first and second segments of the cave. Looked hot. But still great update. Behind the back battle NTR is really nice. Also loved that this update was almost all about Asuna.
One question though. The love nest blog updated, but I wasn't given the opportunity to go and look at it. Think it happened while I was heading in to log on and didn't have control anymore.
One question though. The love nest blog updated, but I wasn't given the opportunity to go and look at it. Think it happened while I was heading in to log on and didn't have control anymore.
And see, that's the issue and why probably this whole storyline would have been/felt a lot better written as a bunch of OCs than an SAO parody (Though no doubt way less popular): That applies mostly for REAL people. Trying to apply any sort of realistic romantic/relationship logic to Asuna and Kirito if you know even the slightest bit of their real characters just falls flat massively and makes the writing feel even dumber and more forced. Even I, that not only care little for the main story here but also got sick of KiriSuna after years of the main series, can see that, so I imagine it probably makes anyone who even subconsciously thinks of their OG selves feel it even worse XD
Also, something I forgot to mention on my review, "shout-out" (LMAO) to Fujino, he went and finally addressed the gigantic plot-hole of the Fairy Dance arc in this game's AU, half a game late, by twisting shit in the most stupidly possible way, essentially making Kirito seem like a completely useless bum and officially taking all his post-SAO canon achievements away, turns out he was, indeed, unable to save Asuna without Leafa, but Asuna's dad somehow 'realized something was wrong' and saved her from Sugou himself...note how, per Canon, Asuna's dad had the least chance of anyone in the universe from ever finding out shit because he trusted Sugou the most implicitly, and he's also barely above a background NPC in the story in general even in Canon, while Asuna was in a very short time limit before Sugou perfected his emotional-experimentation on her and it was only Kirito and Suguha/Leafa rushing it that saved her at allSo he both "fixed" a plot twist with even shittier writing and also eliminated any and all achievements KiriSuna had in their canon-relationship post-Aincrad from his timeline in one go, LOL
I think you're probably the only advocate for the major dissonance between the original and this. When I mention things like not looking for a master piece of writing, it's just overall acknowledging that it's specifically an NTR Parody. The entire notion of what's being done is so unbelievable that you shouldn't honestly take it 100% too seriously to begin with. Like Asuna being in an NTR situation with how the LNs go make it rather ridiculous for it to even be a possibility.
So understanding it's a parody, I usually end up approaching the general story line with a general amount of plausibility for things. Is it plausible for Asuna's dad to have saved her? It's highly unlikely but not implausible. And even if it's a little too crazy to believe, the next course of action is to overall ignore it as its overall value towards the story doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of things. Like it does explain something about where we are and why we're here, and honestly that's the most important point/aspect of it. But it doesn't really matter that this happened towards what's going on, which is Asuna is going to get stolen from Kirito by this fictional ugly bastard trope Inoda character.
For some context I also read up to the Alicization arc, but I kind of gave up reading the LNs, but either way I'm not too worried or caring of how closely it relates to the original work. Since it's porn specifically NTR of characters that people find hot and just want to see get fucked up, that's kind of what you're here for. I'd say overall for story writing that Fujino is doing generally ok in that things are pretty reasonable/plausible while being loosely related to the original works.
I guess you just gotta enjoy this in a vacuum?
I mean, I have mentioned before that at the end of the day I long-since, even back in Part 1, gave up and just decided to enjoy the Hentai, that's what I was here in the first place, but back then Fujino's writing with this was also WAY simpler so it was easier to just stay silent XD It honestly feels like the more he tries to write his plot as a complex thing while indirectly referencing and twisting the OG SAO plot (Not even the characters but the actual setting), the more the stupid and inconsistent writing of this NTR-verse AU stands out, so yeah, it honestly just keeps sticking more and more for me when he releases updates like these and keeps trying to put explanations that just create more plot holes if you know even remotely anything about SAOI think you're probably the only advocate for the major dissonance between the original and this. When I mention things like not looking for a master piece of writing, it's just overall acknowledging that it's specifically an NTR Parody. The entire notion of what's being done is so unbelievable that you shouldn't honestly take it 100% too seriously to begin with. Like Asuna being in an NTR situation with how the LNs go make it rather ridiculous for it to even be a possibility.
So understanding it's a parody, I usually end up approaching the general story line with a general amount of plausibility for things. Is it plausible for Asuna's dad to have saved her? It's highly unlikely but not implausible. And even if it's a little too crazy to believe, the next course of action is to overall ignore it as its overall value towards the story doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of things. Like it does explain something about where we are and why we're here, and honestly that's the most important point/aspect of it. But it doesn't really matter that this happened towards what's going on, which is Asuna is going to get stolen from Kirito by this fictional ugly bastard trope Inoda character.
For some context I also read up to the Alicization arc, but I kind of gave up reading the LNs, but either way I'm not too worried or caring of how closely it relates to the original work. Since it's porn specifically NTR of characters that people find hot and just want to see get fucked up, that's kind of what you're here for. I'd say overall for story writing that Fujino is doing generally ok in that things are pretty reasonable/plausible while being loosely related to the original works.
I guess you just gotta enjoy this in a vacuum?
As I said, I legit couldn't care less about the main story, but I just can't stop my brain from going on a rampage every time he so casually butchers and twists the setting more and more when he could perfectly just not do that and keep focusing on Inoda NTR-ing Asuna and nobody would give a shit either way XpP
- Feb 20, 2019
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Fair enough I guess. I don't know how to give advice on how to deal with it tbh rofl. Like my favorite character is Sinon, and she's being butchered the most out of everyone and it's just like I'm just like whatever about it. The GGO arc in the LN was my favorite part from what I read. But yeah, good luck with it I guess.I mean, I have mentioned before that at the end of the day I long-since, even back in Part 1, gave up and just decided to enjoy the Hentai, that's what I was here in the first place, but back then Fujino's writing with this was also WAY simpler so it was easier to just stay silent XD It honestly feels like the more he tries to write his plot as a complex thing while indirectly referencing and twisting the OG SAO plot (Not even the characters but the actual setting), the more the stupid and inconsistent writing of this NTR-verse AU stands out, so yeah, it honestly just keeps sticking more and more for me when he releases updates like these and keeps trying to put explanations that just create more plot holes if you know even remotely anything about SAO
As I said, I legit couldn't care less about the main story, but I just can't stop my brain from going on a rampage every time he so casually butchers and twists the setting more and more when he could perfectly just not do that and keep focusing on Inoda NTR-ing Asuna and nobody would give a shit either way XpP
He said he would try to at least, but I wouldn't take it as confirmation that it's guaranteed going to come out at the end of August.
I mean, same here for me with Kirito and Suguha, which is why at this point I'm just enjoying her going Yandere and constantly raping him because it lets me get good-quality Hentai of my favorite SAO pair despite how butchered they are, I just personally think the game would be way more enjoyable if Fujino stopped trying to give it a deeper plot. Like, let's be honest, how many people you think gave any shit about what Kirito was saying on the bath instead of just enjoying Asuna getting molested till she came by Inoda right by his side XD?
- Oct 14, 2018
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But is it right to ignore such things if the developer is including them in the game? It’s his vision and must have some meaning that may be important later in the story. Sure, you can ignore everything, but what’s the point of playing the game then? You could just wait for someone to share the scenes. Considering this, it’s also natural that there will be criticism, both positive and negative, if there are things to address.
- Aug 7, 2019
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It's more that I'm not taking it too seriously. It's like reading an AU fanfic I guess. A lot of things will generally make no sense or loosely reference the original material depending on the genre you're reading? So since it's a NTR Parody, a lot of dialogue is just going to be said in favor of that. But anyways it's kind of why I say at the end of my tangent to I guess enjoy this game/story in a vacuum. Constantly comparing it to its source material would only be headache inducing, because like you said "It's his vision and must have some meaning that may be important later in the story" is going to focus more on what the developer wants instead of focusing on respecting the source material.But is it right to ignore such things if the developer is including them in the game? It’s his vision and must have some meaning that may be important later in the story. Sure, you can ignore everything, but what’s the point of playing the game then? You could just wait for someone to share the scenes. Considering this, it’s also natural that there will be criticism, both positive and negative, if there are things to address.
In this sense, the developer and us consumers want to see the NTR Porn shit go down, so all the story bits being mentioned/used are just there to further this agenda. Kirito and Asuna are realistically nowhere near this stupid, and all the other girls that had any interest in Kirito definitely don't go off the deep end. Referencing the ALO bit, where Asuna's dad somehow saves her instead of Kirito, it probably can further imply Kirito's incompetence, hence it's important towards furthering the NTR storyline. So it's "important" but also not something to waste time comparing to the original is what I mean in terms of "ignoring" it, if that makes sense?
So my general advice is to not take the connection between the original source and the parody too seriously is about it?
We just really like this game, and it helps it updates monthly so the thread gets constantly revived.
- Aug 7, 2019
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Yeah I wouldn't be surprised if no one really gave a shit. Though I do find it amusing though that the fluctlight reference is probably the bit being used to further explain that the stuff that happens in game directly effects how they feel in real life, even though all the characters say the nonsensical "it's just a game" that wouldn't come up in normal SAO dialogue. It's amusing to me how dumb it is I guess in that aspect as well? In regards to Suguha, I'm also excited for the yandere bits, because Suguha seems to rarely appears in porn where she steals Kirito.
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It also helps that Fujino posts a progress report once a week so there's always something to be talked about as well. We're all just circle jerking our general excitement.