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The last thing I want in my life is for an ex-girlfriend who cheated on me and had children with another person to come to my house. I wouldn't even touch it with a 10-meter stick.
I think it would be more logical for Inoda to show this blog to Asuna himself after some time. Inoda will believe in herself and her exclusivity, and decide to tell Asuna how cool he turned everything around and how he fucked her mother over her sleeping body, how he humiliated Kirito. Inoda commits stupid acts quite often, and if it weren't for luck, he would have been in prison a long time ago or worse. But what will it do? Is Asuna facing a choice of sex or relationship? No! Her life is already broken and she already has children with Inoda. I don't think the blog will reveal much new to her.
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I just remembered that since the action will soon be in irl, and Asuna has a camera in her room, can we expect Inoda to send Kirito edited videos from the hotel?
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Well, most likely he will add video it to blog with humiliating comments. But a few updates ago, the blog stopped playing any role in the story. Now it's just additional materials from the point of view of the Inode, which no longer affect anything. Kirito forgets everything anyway.
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It could have worked if Asuna had been faced with the choice of her future fate. For example, Asuna found out that she was pregnant with Inoda's child and was thinking what to choose: break up with Kirito or tell Kirito that the child was his. She chooses to break up, goes home to Kirito to talk. Kirito is in the shower there, and Asuna sees the blog and finds out that everything up to this point was lies and manipulation, finds out about Liz's rape and that Inoda is fucking her mother. That's where it would have caused a dramatic incident, and it would have been funny to see what Asuna would have said to Kirito, who came out of the shower.
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Right now no but I can imagine when Inoda finally breaks the "friend limit" affection he will get ballsy enough to start flaunting Asuna in front of Kirito. The only real difference between Kirito's text and the blog is Kirito will react to the texts so there should be more of those in the future.
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Ok
Asuna: you knew and you didn't tell me, Kirito, you bastard
Kirito: what do you want? I don't even remember seeing it, what are you talking about?
Asuna: this! *points to Inoda's blog*
Kirito: oh my god! how could this happen, Inoda, I'll kill you *then looks away from the monitor*
Kirito: *forgetting what he just saw* what were we talking about? xD
Asuna would say this
Asuna: you knew and you didn't tell me, Kirito, you bastard
Kirito: what do you want? I don't even remember seeing it, what are you talking about?
Asuna: this! *points to Inoda's blog*
Kirito: oh my god! how could this happen, Inoda, I'll kill you *then looks away from the monitor*
Kirito: *forgetting what he just saw* what were we talking about? xD
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Do you mean text messages(SMS)? But did Inoda ever text Kirito? Therefore, there was no such thing, Inoda probably doesn't even have Kirito's phone number. It would have been better if Fujino had returned Kirito's reactions to the blog posts.
What Kirito forgets from what he saw on the blog looks like a mystery. In the game, this is just a convention so as not to waste time on Kirito's reaction. But if Fujino introduces this element directly into the game and some other person sees Kirito forgetting what he saw when he turned away from the computer, it will need to be justified by the plot. It's difficult and long.
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It would be better if there was reactions in the blog.
Remember near the end of Part 1 this scene happened. Thank you 13Gatsu777! Your mods made this game so much easier to fap to!
So someone send Kirito a Inoda's POV of getting a titfuck from Asuna in the clothes store. It was not from Charlie and unless it was early fuckery from Administrator who has not been introduced yet, it must have come from Inoda. So Inoda should have Kirito's number. But even if Inoda didn't know Kirito's number he could just get the number from Kirito himself if Kirito agrees to start watching Inoda fuck his (from Kirito's perspective) unknown girlfriend.
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Hmm, I forgot about that moment. But I looked at the messages in the second part and since 27/05 there has not been a single message from Inoda. And it seems to me that it would be quite strange for Kirito if Inoda suddenly starts sending him videos and photos of him fucking an "unknown girl" And it would be funny if Kirito told Asuna about it, and Asuna would understand whose video it was.
Really thank you 13Gatsu777! I hope he will design the mod for the second part in the style of the first.
Sorry for the huge amount of text... I will support this statement by mos555 and at the same time give my opinion about the game.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
To be honest, I don't like this perk the most. Because it looks like a bad cliche. This would be normal for the original game, but Fujino should not forget that SAO has a backstory and he partially used this backstory for his game. As far as I know, everything that happened in Aincrad is canon for Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic. That is, if Asuna is now 19-20 years old, then she and Kirito have been together for 4-5 years. And they have huge plans for their lives here, but is it enough for a couple of months for Asuna to forget about everything? Just because of sex? Have you fallen in love with a hopeless, cowardly fat man who will have a harem of women with children like her in the future? Then I'm afraid it's not Kirito we should be feeling sorry for. Asuna will suffer the most in the end. Kirito may be sad for a couple of years and start a life for himself, but Asuna will spend her whole life giving birth to children to a dirty fat man.
You can say that this is NTR and this cliche looks quite normal. I agree. But! This is not the case when characters with a deep background are used, which the author uses as a canon. If Fujino had said that there was no Aincrad, no ALFheim, and Kirito and Asuna had met six months ago, it would have worked, but not in this case. I can say that if Asuna wants to fuck Inoda, then let her fuck. Even if she gives birth to a child from him (according to the canons of NTR, a girl will be born - a copy of Asuna and no one will understand anything), but she should not love Inoda. This will be more correct for the NTR component and for the adequacy of what is happening in the game.
Well... That's my opinion. Sorry for another stream of consciousness... If Fujino leaves Asuna love for Inoda in the plot, I hope he writes to us in large letters that - Asuna has gone crazy. It's very difficult to accept it in any other way.
A couple of days ago you were talking about hypnosis and blackmail, and it's a good thing that Fujino did without them. But it's not like that. Inoda was blackmailing Kyoko at the very beginning of the 2nd part, and through her he influenced the lives of Asuna and Kirito. Without this influence, their story would have developed differently. Hypnosis wasn't the same as usual, but it had a different sauce– Asuna's negative states made it easier for Inode to get her. This was the case before the scene in the forest house and before the scene in the tent during camping. Moreover, after the scene in the tent, Asuna received a status – only Inoda's penis can satisfy Asuna's pussy. The status on which the whole game is based. Which brings us back to another of your points – it's good that Fujino is trying to move away from the cliche of antagonist having a big dick.… But that's what the whole game is built on. On the other hand, where without this cliche. Would we like Inoda to fuck Asuna with a cock smaller than Kirito's? )))
It would be pretty ridiculous)))
So it turns out that the game is very, very cliched. Right down to the characters (a beautiful girl who constantly wants sex, her boyfriend who has sex once a week and an antagonist who is ready 24 hours a day, 7 days a week).
Mos 555 mentioned the perks at the end of the game. Yes, they are really quite frustrating. They are frustrating from the point of view that the author is not able to write a beautiful original story, but constantly slides down to the cheapest cliche from such doujinshi. Plus, the author absolutely cannot take out the story and character of the characters he took into his game. (yes, I agree with mos555 on almost everything, and we have already discussed this on this forum). How is it that Asuna is starting to treat Kirito like shit? Does she have that trait?! Then why doesn't it apply the same way to the Inoda at the beginning of the game?! And if she is kindness itself, then why does she have such an attitude, even towards her former lover at the end of the game? It doesn't happen that way.…
Plus, with that kind of character in this game, she should have been fucked by the entire school basketball team a long time ago.… Oh, we lost today. Have pity on us, Asuna. How? Well, give me a hug or something? And then it started – they stroked her ass, then kneaded her tits, then asked her to cheer up before the game with a blowjob. Oh, we lost anyway, it's your fault. Let's get laid… Well, you get it. In our story, Asuna is so kind that she can't refuse such requests. Isn't that right?)))
what? is the Asana's life position never to take a dick in your mouth? Asuna, let's play dice for a wish! Asuna, you've lost. My desire is to suck my dick! you have to fulfill your wish! ... And Asuna is like, oh, right. Okay, let's do a blowjob.
What the hell kind of plot is this? And who is this heroine from sao?!
A separate song is about Asuna and Kirito's relationship.… They treat each other like shit the whole game. Well, except for a couple of moments when the author remembers that at least something needs to be shown, otherwise Their relationship is absolutely idiotic for a loving couple. Well, accordingly, we have a scale that devotion, which shows. Some people only noticed this in the last update, and I had already written about the absurdity of what was happening in the game itself and the readings on the scale. For the latest update, it would be logical to give Kirito 500-600 points, and Inoda 700-800.…
How can you worry about a couple when they have such a relationship? Asuna never reject Inoda, but she regularly rejects Kirito. Well, what should we worry about in this case? The most appropriate comparison is that today the whore I usually order from a brothel is busy with another client. Everything, how to live on?! Why the author turned the characters of the original work into these stupid, powerless idiots is completely incomprehensible to me. because fans love the original work because of them, because there is no very original plot there.
As we have already discussed with mos555, in a game of the genre, the main character does not have to be "impotent" at all.
I'll give you an example (a day with a bath for Kirito, Asuna and Inoda). Kirito goes to take a shower. Inoda follows Asuna into the room and begins to pester her, but she reluctantly gives in to him.… Perhaps this is the boundless love for which she is going to give her life? Her boyfriend came into the next room, and she's already ready to have sex with her lover!
But it should be like this. Inoda begins to pester Asuna, but she rudely rejects him. Literally sending him to hell. Because tonight she has a night with her loved one. and the Inode is needed for a one-time hookup during the week "for health." And if Inoda is not satisfied with something, then let her go wherever she wants, and she will find herself another dick! Inoda pulls off his usual trick. He pretends to leave, but he remains invisible in the room. Kirito arrives and they with Asuna have sex. (let's omit the option with his non-removable underpants, in our case it's not really necessary). Yes! They're having sex. Not 2 minutes, but normal. Yes, everyone is satisfied. Asuna cums (maybe a couple of times), Kirito cums. They're going to bed. We see an evil Inoda with a standing dick. He approaches the bed from Asuna's side. He lifts the blanket and starts fucking her with his fingers. Asuna wakes up and is shocked, unable to understand what is happening… But the skillful Inode brings her to a violent orgasm.
From this scene, we can see that Asuna really loves Kirito and he comes first for her. It's just that the evil Inoda gets his way anyway. Just in case, I'll add in case anyone has forgotten that Asuna has an unwritten fetish (or maybe a prescribed one). It turns her on when Inoda forcibly takes her. She's in the tent just cumming while masturbating with the thought of it. And anyway, most of their contacts are such that she puts up little verbal resistance, but gives up under the pressure of a powerful member.
And then everything gets more interesting! This event is made regular. And each time the Inoda goes further and further. Moreover, he leaves the balcony door open to get into the room. As a result, Kirito fucks with Asuna, and then Inoda comes over, pushes Asuna to the edge and fucks her, or he pulls her completely off the bed and fucks her on the floor.... If Asuna is on the bed, Kirito feels the bed rocking and starts to wake up, and Asuna kisses his neck and lulls him to sleep while Inoda continues to fuck her. And with each new time, a new pose is added, which could then be selected from the list and launched at will (It would be an opportunity for us to play and make a choice, not just viewing a visual novel). Plus, you can play with the balcony door. Close it, and Inoda will not enter the room and there will be no sex. The relationship between Asuna and Inoda could be built on this. She closes the door and he Can't do anything. She opens it, but he doesn't come in on purpose, and Asuna is nervous the next day, because she wanted to, but didn't get her fabulous orgasm. Can make a situation where Asuna refuses sex to Kirito, and Inoda fucks her longer and better for it. But after having sex with Inoda, out of guilt, she jerks off Kirito's sleeping cock, picks up his cock and starts jumping on it. Kirito wakes up in disbelief, and Asuna says that this is her gift to him. You can play with Inoda's skill, which first makes himself and her invisible and silent. Then, gradually, something will be canceled, which will only turn Asuna on more. It would be possible to make a scene where they fuck like in silent mode, Asuna cums loudly, Inoda comes out of her and removes the skill. Kirito wakes up to from the scream of Asuna's orgasm.
Kirito – Asuna, what's wrong with you?
Asuna – Kirito… Kirito-kun…
Kirito touches Asuna's forehead – Asuna, are you all wet, are you feeling unwell? (it's clear that she's all wet, she had intense sex with Inoda)
Asuna – I had a nightmare…
Kirito – okay, calm down, it's okay.
Asuna buries her head into Kirito's shoulder, trying to keep her lower body away and pull her thighs together so that Inoda's sperm does not leak out. At the same time, she is in a Madness state due to simultaneous orgasm and guilt in front of Kirito.
And it's only on this one recurring event that you can build a game! without 100 thousand maps of the area that will be used once in 20 hours of playing time.
At the same time, Asuna and Kirito's relationship is quite normal, and Asuna uses Inoda When she needs it. But at least we will see that Kirito is valuable to her (you can develop the game towards I love Kirito, and Inoda is just an enchanting orgasm once a week ... well, or 2 times))), or you can gradually take Asuna away from Kirito...). It could also be where Liz could be stuffed. Like she was filming the evidence base of Asuna's infidelity. Moreover, Inoda can spoil her records after sex, so that Liz comes back again and again. It could even be used in the form of – You want me to fuck that slut, Asuna, today? But I got so turned on by the thought of it that I couldn't resist and jerked off.… And now I can't get up! Help me, Liz! And so on....
That's what I'm talking about. Purely in my opinion, Fujino came up with an amazing idea for the NTR game, which is really amazing. 10/10! But he prescribed the plot disgustingly. For example, he introduced a massage, which was supposed to return Asuna to Inode after the first part. But in the end, Inoda fucks her in all poses 2 times a week anyway... and what's the point of him squeezing her tits during a massage?! It was just necessary to make the event earlier and more often.… Plus, in real life, their relationship could be reached through a massage. The four of them gathered together at Kirito's house. Liz takes Kirito outside. Inoda approaches Asuna and starts massaging her shoulders. Asuna yells at him, "What the fuck are you doing?" and Inoda says, "Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot that we're not in the game." I'm so used to giving you massages. You really like him so much. And everything. Inoda becomes Asuna's massage therapist in real life… When she's stressed, she calls him to her house and it went – shoulder massage, back massage, foot massage, chest massage ... well, and the usual from Inoda – I'm so excited, You have to help me too)))
In the hotel, it was possible not to put them in one room, but to put them in different rooms with the ability to move around the hotel. Inoda came to play in Asuna's room. When they finished - oh, it's so late, I don't want to wake anyone up and I'll stay with you, okay? At lunch in the hotel restaurant, they chose a large round table at the end of the hall. Inoda drops her spoon and reaches under the table. Asuna, the spoon is right under your foot – he pushes Asuna's leg (spreads them) and fucks her with his fingers in the middle of the restaurant.
After that, Asuna could be bullied by dropping the spoon, but not getting under the table, while Asuna would be nervous and twitchy every time, but at the same time excited. After 3-4 days, she would ask to repeat it herself, and Inoda would have said – what am I to you, some kind of dog? You are ready to do something yourself, if so, then fulfill the request. Asuna agrees. Inoda tells her to go to the bathroom and come back without panties.…
In short, in this game, the field is not plowed for the slow growth corruption of the heroine, but everything comes down to us – oh, Inoda's big dick is so cool!
Therefore, in my opinion, the idea, potential of the game 10/10, the visual in the game 9-10 / 10, the implementation of the plot 3-4 /10 ... I'm a little upset.… and it's a pity that the author didn't realize his creation very well. But he's still doing great and he's got some promising ideas in this game.)
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It will either be:Hmm, I forgot about that moment. But I looked at the messages in the second part and since 27/05 there has not been a single message from Inoda. And it seems to me that it would be quite strange for Kirito if Inoda suddenly starts sending him videos and photos of him fucking an "unknown girl" And it would be funny if Kirito told Asuna about it, and Asuna would understand whose video it was.
- Inoda already knows Kirito's number but Kirito doesn't know Inoda knows so the videos are sent anonymously.
- Inoda will ask if Kirito wants to see him fucking his girlfriend and Kirito gives his number willingly.
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Also, let's not forget the moment in 0.60 in the hospital where he asked Kirito if he wanted to see the photo the girl sent him. Although he was not prepared for the fact that Kirito might agree, and since he is at the hotel, he can edit the videos and send them to Kirito. It's like the next level of corruption.
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Well said. What you're absolutely right about is how awkward Asuna and Kirito's relationship looks from the very beginning. Everything could be attributed to Japanese conservatism and shyness in the relationship between a man and a woman, but they have been together for more than 4 years. I'm not even sure if Fujino has even watched anime? It perfectly shows their relationship and how close they are.
Perhaps in order to initially create an NTR atmosphere in the game, Fujino cooled their relationship and changed the canon so that Kirito did not save Asuna ALFheim so that the player could understand why their relationship was so strange. And I agree that Kirito's relationship with 998 out of 999 is much worse than Inoda's with 430 out of 500. Apparently, this is Fujino's way of showing us that Asuna is just a hypocritical and stupid nymphomaniac. It's not Asuna, it's just someone who looks like Asuna with a completely different consciousness that Oberon put there. Because a smart girl with developed critical thinking, despite her kindness, would never have believed a man like Inoda.
But in general, this is Fujino's first story game and we can understand why he makes mistakes, we just have to watch and play.
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Many people might say, "What are you talking about? This is a parody! The author makes the characters what he wants and makes the plot what he wants!" Maybe...
But are people playing this game because they're just familiar names? Asuna and Kirito? Or are people playing this because Asuna and Kirito are practically the strongest romantic couple among the ranobe and anime, and it would be interesting to see the NTR version of their story? I'm sure it's more likely the second option.
But at the same time, I would like to see some realism in their relationship. And not Kirito, who throws Asuna out of a date to go investigate some far from urgent nonsense, or Asuna, who refuses Kirito to go through the quests to go wash the another man cum off her thighs.(it's a matter of 2 minutes, I think Kirito could have waited.). It looks like they've been married for 20 years and are just tired of each other.
It's sad...
But are people playing this game because they're just familiar names? Asuna and Kirito? Or are people playing this because Asuna and Kirito are practically the strongest romantic couple among the ranobe and anime, and it would be interesting to see the NTR version of their story? I'm sure it's more likely the second option.
But at the same time, I would like to see some realism in their relationship. And not Kirito, who throws Asuna out of a date to go investigate some far from urgent nonsense, or Asuna, who refuses Kirito to go through the quests to go wash the another man cum off her thighs.(it's a matter of 2 minutes, I think Kirito could have waited.). It looks like they've been married for 20 years and are just tired of each other.
It's sad...
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Now all the Kirito hate makes sense! Everyone's jealous that he gets Asuna AND has great sex with her
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my request made Sinon horny ehehe
It's done, I'll be raped by her xD
It's done, I'll be raped by her xD
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Let's not forget he also has a perfect daughter, a harem of girls right to go if Asuna is not available including his not related sister, guy friends who doesn't threaten his harem (except in fanfics), god tier gaming skills, and a stable government job. Yea. A lot of possible hate/jealousy reasons for Kirito.Now all the Kirito hate makes sense! Everyone's jealous that he gets Asuna AND has great sex with her
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Asuna's departure makes Kirito the same as he once was, a loner