VN Ren'Py Abandoned Take Me Sweet [v0.03.12] [RiveraLove]

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Tease Me

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May 6, 2017
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The only hint is you need to find a job. But the Phone does not work neither does the MC laptop.
 

HHUUKK

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Feb 9, 2018
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There are many rooms to visit and if we add the parts of the day... it is frustrating because there is nothing to do. Click on 60 rooms throughout a day waiting for something to happen.

Launching a game without content with this format is a mistake even if it is the first Alpha version. I recommend that the Dev reconsider changing the format, adding a consistent story and more scenes for the next update.

It would be a shame if the game was forgotten because the girls, especially Maria, is one of the sexiest characters that have come to the forum in the last month.
 

voyeurkind

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* Once again, a text heavy game by non-native English speakers. Joy.

* I think I understand what's happening, but the poor English doesn't help.

* Renders look nice.

* Some sort of text is definitely needed for the UI. I have no idea what rooms I'm going to, And yes, this should be in the 0.1 version, at leastin my opinion.

* OH wait, there's the text. Just not in an obvious place.

* Okay, the house is empty. What am I supposed to do? I can see the task list, but it doesn't look like I can do anything in any of hte rooms. Well, okay, you can look at a 0icture of Alice un the MC's room, but there seems to be little else you can do.

That's about all I have, as I can't see a way to move forward and do anything. If it sounds like I'm unimpressed, it's because I am.

Perhaps my expectations for a 0.1 release are way too high, but to me if you release the game publicly and start a Patreon, you're saying the following:

* I have a workable demo that gives an idea of not just what the game is about but the mechanics of the game as well. If the game involves solving puzzles, I expect a sample of that. If the game is a dating sim, I expect an example of that. If you as the dev plan to add those features later, you shouldn't release the game to the public until they're available. I know some people feel differently about this.

* If you have a Patreon, I expect you to be a professional. Do your spell checks, make sure everything works, or that if it doesn't inform the player that it hasn't been implemented yet, etc. Get the player excited about playing your game.

There may be some potential here, but at the moment the only thing I have to base that statement on is a handful of renders. Perhaps that's acceptable for some people, but I call it half-assed.
 

grgrgr5

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Why do they always make these young male protags into creepy bastards?
My guess is that either half our porn games are being made by 12 year olds, or that an adult who thinks the height of sexual fantasy is being 12 and having sex with a mother figure is an inherently creepy person.
 

Reese286

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Best of luck Dev. The art/renders looks great, your gonna need a story to match to give it legs. Nothing cookie-cutter with these faces tho, love them. Please mix it up with body types Dev_ keep viewers happy with something for everyone from petite to thick. Some actual content would be nice too ...
 
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SLim_Games

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renders are great.. but man..
going between the rooms is confusing when those icons switch around like crazy
 

johndoe77

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I did not even manage to see her coming out of the bathroom as the pictures show. Either she's on the couch. either in his room or in the corridor in front of the mirror.
after, it's a 0.01a update. All I can say for now is that the decors are pretty good but classic and the character physics attractive
 

batman666

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Girl on the title screen looks beautiful... here we go!

+ MC doesn't look like a douche (no Max = good)
+ Maria is hot, nice boobies, but odd shoes
+ Natalie is even hotter O_O
+ Good and simple UI
+ Alice (from the photo) looks pretty. Hope to see more of her soon
+ Nice render quality

- Not a fan of the ugly filter used for the outdoor and lobby

It looks good but has nearly zero content right now. It's a shame that most scenes consist of only 1 or 2, sometimes a handful more pictures.

This game seems so familiar... is this like a new game after cancelling another one? I swear I've seen most of the backgrounds in another game, along with the bad look of the outdoor view.
 

juanito

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This looks like a redo of a previous game called My Sex Quest.

I’ll have to check. The models and backgrounds look exactly the same. :rolleyes::coffee:
The redhead (or is it brunette? the girl on the cover (?) I mean) from My Sex Quest was lovely; I'll try this if only because of her.
 

laflare82

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So you can identify yourself with them. Duh.
You do realize some people came here intriged to figure out what a porn game is and never had a clue until they found this site and there alot of people who are not creepy not into fetish gets sick at thought of incest, have never spied on anyone, don't look like some puss of a man thats never been or ever will be laid does actually have a cock bigger than 5inch aren't interested in harems bondage futa feet groping exibition voyeur piss oh god my stomachs turning just mention some of the depraved stuff that has never even crossed my mind until I found this site, I came looking for pretty fap fap fap models stayed because of great games like Acting Lessons, Babysitter and games of the same nature Story kept me here not fap material not lewd acts I never even knew about but some Devs Great writing and Storytelling when games update I couldn't care less if theres no new fap scenes as long as the story progress Im ok I'm a Die hard fan of A wife and Mother and am totally glad you have full control over MC cause when Devs take that away I feel like Im been raped and forced to do things I dont want to let me settle down before I get banned again for expressing my opinion cause f95zone does not believe in (freedom of speech) we all don't think alike and can't be forced or swayed to either
 
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