- Nov 16, 2018
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I would just like to be understood correctly.
It is important to read this message to the music "Ost Death Note - DETECTIVE topic." Or some intence and relax piano...
YOU took "labrats" as A basis, and made a very nice story out of it.
But ARE the essence of the game is in corruption and TRUE mind control.
NOW I just would not want it to be filled with characters that are not interesting to the player and do not make sense in the game. And they are not tied to the main character, that is, without which the game would not have lost anything... If you listen the music know we not trying to control your mind ...Characters without emotional binding that are simply uninteresting to corrupt. They are created by developers who have no ideas, they do not move the plot and are not interesting even if you count them as side quests, because they are not interesting for the character you are playing for.
I can TELL The scriptwriters, often do not prescribe why THE main character would start corrupting others, that is, if you are scriptwriters of such a game, then you should get into the role of the character and imagine what would move him. Because, in this game there are just a lot of ambitions. Intrigue with an entertaining plot is not simple i see the plot and see the oportunity, but in many games with such ambitions, the characters are just dummies or gags for the plot. So players corrupt and interact with them, simply because there is a possibility, what add DEVELOPER, not a desire. You need to think of THAT like it were not A game, or not WE - the player makes a decision, but the character himself, according to his own NEED.
A MORE big plus this game is the animation and very good SCENES, in particular WHITH a 'rommate' and 'landlady'.
For example - the mom whom son wanted all THIS time but he exactly know what its taboo for his mother. And he have the opportunity to take this change, cure his addiction whith this mindcontrol serum, to banned his PERVERTED thoughts toward his MOTHER. But instead hes think that he need change the mothers thoughts and CORRUPT HER...
(and not to as half of the games. Son:- "I didn’t know that my mother has such awesome juicy ass!!! oh and now i INTO it." FUCKING what?! where have you been watching all these years!! One look on ass and this is count like fucking motivation for him to become CRAZY-creepy-INCEST MACHINE? )... OR mom who pestered HER and he just decided to take revenge on her, for years torn from his life. Or if you take this game, the mother who would work for the government or, on the contrary, opposed them. Or had the connection necessary for the implementation of the SON’s plan but would not want to endanger him... or just distrust him... or simply hate him. why not? or she just as an object for testing the serum, but this kinda lame. Not just because the SON is an asshole and just an done-up bastard WHO wants to FUCK HER WHITH no reason.
this is just an example ... But at the same time, these characters should fit into the storyline and move it to make the player at the level of intuition understand that this should be so.
And again I repeat the character needs an excuse in his actions, not the player. The player himself makes the decision, but it must be the basis for the character.
For example, I will take the game that you took as a basis ...
"Lab Rats" was interesting but had SOME weak CHARACTERS, but there the main character had all the excuses for himself! He tested the serum On the sister AND mom, to see how the serum will manifest itself. Because it is necessary for him. Conduct experiments on them and watch them every day at home without fearing that someone will interfere. Ideally for the scientist!The HOT assistant needed him to assist in the manufacture of an improved version of the serum as well as an object for testing.We need take boss into SUBMISSIVE so as not to interfere whith main character plans.
3 characters without which the plot would be completely different, MOMMY AND LITTLE SISTER in this case, I take them as one character.
that's just an unnecessary character in the background was his girlfriend from the university, I corrupted her only for the harem)))))
trainings of mom and other characters are just ordinary cool experiments, they are not very important for the plot but are very interesting as something like PREGNANCY.
But again, I’m just picky and take a close look at the dialogues between the characters - this is still a visual novel in general) others are not so picky they just look at the pictures) and being that I can see your game when I tried, I was skeptical about another piston collection 3d pictures. but the game sucked me in and I understand that I like it, it intrigues me. It have Needed characters for the plot and most importantly interesting, but requiring improvements, but very good and fit. maybe I would like a little more drama in in the plot of bad government or bad rebels, detective atmosphere and conspiracies if yo wrote about government you need CONSPIRACIES...
So I do not complain about your game, I like the atmosphere created and therefore the characters that fit into it are important. and did not directly criticize it. If you saw criticism here, so you knew exactly where you screwed up. so far everything suits me, well, maybe not everything, but this is your game, and not mine, let me play it)
One day i learn English. Blame Googletranslate.
It is important to read this message to the music "Ost Death Note - DETECTIVE topic." Or some intence and relax piano...
YOU took "labrats" as A basis, and made a very nice story out of it.
But ARE the essence of the game is in corruption and TRUE mind control.
NOW I just would not want it to be filled with characters that are not interesting to the player and do not make sense in the game. And they are not tied to the main character, that is, without which the game would not have lost anything... If you listen the music know we not trying to control your mind ...Characters without emotional binding that are simply uninteresting to corrupt. They are created by developers who have no ideas, they do not move the plot and are not interesting even if you count them as side quests, because they are not interesting for the character you are playing for.
I can TELL The scriptwriters, often do not prescribe why THE main character would start corrupting others, that is, if you are scriptwriters of such a game, then you should get into the role of the character and imagine what would move him. Because, in this game there are just a lot of ambitions. Intrigue with an entertaining plot is not simple i see the plot and see the oportunity, but in many games with such ambitions, the characters are just dummies or gags for the plot. So players corrupt and interact with them, simply because there is a possibility, what add DEVELOPER, not a desire. You need to think of THAT like it were not A game, or not WE - the player makes a decision, but the character himself, according to his own NEED.
A MORE big plus this game is the animation and very good SCENES, in particular WHITH a 'rommate' and 'landlady'.
For example - the mom whom son wanted all THIS time but he exactly know what its taboo for his mother. And he have the opportunity to take this change, cure his addiction whith this mindcontrol serum, to banned his PERVERTED thoughts toward his MOTHER. But instead hes think that he need change the mothers thoughts and CORRUPT HER...
(and not to as half of the games. Son:- "I didn’t know that my mother has such awesome juicy ass!!! oh and now i INTO it." FUCKING what?! where have you been watching all these years!! One look on ass and this is count like fucking motivation for him to become CRAZY-creepy-INCEST MACHINE? )... OR mom who pestered HER and he just decided to take revenge on her, for years torn from his life. Or if you take this game, the mother who would work for the government or, on the contrary, opposed them. Or had the connection necessary for the implementation of the SON’s plan but would not want to endanger him... or just distrust him... or simply hate him. why not? or she just as an object for testing the serum, but this kinda lame. Not just because the SON is an asshole and just an done-up bastard WHO wants to FUCK HER WHITH no reason.
this is just an example ... But at the same time, these characters should fit into the storyline and move it to make the player at the level of intuition understand that this should be so.
And again I repeat the character needs an excuse in his actions, not the player. The player himself makes the decision, but it must be the basis for the character.
For example, I will take the game that you took as a basis ...
"Lab Rats" was interesting but had SOME weak CHARACTERS, but there the main character had all the excuses for himself! He tested the serum On the sister AND mom, to see how the serum will manifest itself. Because it is necessary for him. Conduct experiments on them and watch them every day at home without fearing that someone will interfere. Ideally for the scientist!The HOT assistant needed him to assist in the manufacture of an improved version of the serum as well as an object for testing.We need take boss into SUBMISSIVE so as not to interfere whith main character plans.
3 characters without which the plot would be completely different, MOMMY AND LITTLE SISTER in this case, I take them as one character.
that's just an unnecessary character in the background was his girlfriend from the university, I corrupted her only for the harem)))))
trainings of mom and other characters are just ordinary cool experiments, they are not very important for the plot but are very interesting as something like PREGNANCY.
But again, I’m just picky and take a close look at the dialogues between the characters - this is still a visual novel in general) others are not so picky they just look at the pictures) and being that I can see your game when I tried, I was skeptical about another piston collection 3d pictures. but the game sucked me in and I understand that I like it, it intrigues me. It have Needed characters for the plot and most importantly interesting, but requiring improvements, but very good and fit. maybe I would like a little more drama in in the plot of bad government or bad rebels, detective atmosphere and conspiracies if yo wrote about government you need CONSPIRACIES...
So I do not complain about your game, I like the atmosphere created and therefore the characters that fit into it are important. and did not directly criticize it. If you saw criticism here, so you knew exactly where you screwed up. so far everything suits me, well, maybe not everything, but this is your game, and not mine, let me play it)
One day i learn English. Blame Googletranslate.
