RPGM Completed TakenoteR [v1.0] [HNStudy]

[ahbapftw]

it was good until last update, slow but steady now it has multiple loose threads, a rushed ending where dev tried to end it quickly as possible, and a bad story at our hand. blonde girl and husbands relationship got revealed in one minute part with no impact despire main character showing disgust/contempt from the beginning she didnt question anything from the husband. Their relationship could be the fuel beginning mc's corruption but ofc no that got rushed. the double twist part is so dumb sorry for saying this but it IS dumb. wish you didnt do this last update it just means you shot a bullet through ur games ankles

 

[Cazzorine]

Was enjoying this game until it came to my attention the ending is some sort of dark NTR shit when the rest of the game doesn’t have that sorta tone will be dropping it sadly

 

[luckymeee]

i'm stuck on beach....

 

[The Paranoid Pumpkin]

I saw this game before but never downloaded it until now that I see it was complete. I really don't know how to feel about it~

The tone shift in the latter part of the game from the rest of it is crazy ( Although it was kind of hinted at beforehand ). It seems like a totally different game. Also, the scenes with the character that the game refers to as 'child' are too weird for me.

 

[Vearn]

The ending isn't great, but the overall experience is. This is a top tier game and I hope we get more stuff from this fantastic game creator

 

[adoltswimmer]

Does anyone remember where to go early in the game when looking for a hangover cure for William? After the first sauna scene? I go to the general store, the storekeeper is in the back with some lady, and I can't figure out where to go next. Yeny outside wants to go to the pool but I can't figure out where to go about this hangover cure first.

 

[Klauschop]

Ok, now i hate Elika

 

[kaban666serval]

how???

 

[EquinoxGG]

Rushed ending ruined it tbh

 

[EroPulse]

View attachment 4133549 how???

Talk to the garbage can right next to you.

 

[tsudoplat]

Wow that was a terrible ending. The cut to the book writing was a nice twist, should have ended it there where you don't know if any of it happened or if it was all made up for the book. Easily could have taken that into a second game and built off it.

The true ending we got was insanely stupid, like I realize this is all made up and fantasy... but even I couldn't wrap my brain around the colossal leap that took. Game is still good, but yikes at that ending.

 

[kaban666serval]

Talk to the garbage can right next to you.

thanks bro

 

[holy8675]

Good game man well done. For a second when we went back to the writer room I thought you pulling the twist that she is "just" a writer and its all her fantasy ( earlier I suggested this Idea to you trying to influence you , but you made it clear, that your story won't end well for William ) My only problem/turn off was the husband laughably small penis. Don't get me wrong there people with this small penis, but I don't think he would have get this far in relationship with girl like our heroine. (getting married, being together long therm etc...) Also on the other hand, some of the cocks drawings bigger than her head okay I get it it's big and I like it big, but come on
Anyway thank for this project I liked your plot and story telling
If you looking for future projects Ideas drop me a DM

 

[TheUberstuff]

Good game man well done. For a second when we went back to the writer room I thought you pulling the twist that she is "just" a writer and its all her fantasy ( earlier I suggested this Idea to you trying to influence you , but you made it clear, that your story won't end well for William ) My only problem/turn off was the husband laughably small penis. Don't get me wrong there people with this small penis, but I don't think he would have get this far in relationship with girl like our heroine. (getting married, being together long therm etc...) Also on the other hand, some of the cocks drawings bigger than her head okay I get it it's big and I like it big, but come on
Anyway thank for this project I liked your plot and story telling
If you looking for future projects Ideas drop me a DM

You mean a women that is clearly a whore? wouldn't like a small penis and only cares/judges guys on their penis sizes?

 

[cry32wolf]

great game.
waiting for the next one with the same theme.
good luck

 

[holy8675]

You mean a women that is clearly a whore? wouldn't like a small penis and only cares/judges guys on their penis sizes?

Yes, in a matter of fact yes. How is possible for this women to get married to this men with a micro penis ? how is that wasn't an issue before this holiday ? was there really a point of their relationship where she was satisfied with his boyfriend ?! I know, I know it's only fantasy, but for me this is a turn off That is all, but don't get offended if it hits the spot for you than it is all good we all different we all like different things. Game developers can't please all of us Regardless of my criticism, I liked the game overall, it just felt like sizes in this game were overdone (small-->tiny,big-->gigantic)

 

[%&543ahn]

Release it on android asap HNStudy

 

[TheUberstuff]

Yes, in a matter of fact yes. How is possible for this women to get married to this men with a micro penis ? how is that wasn't an issue before this holiday ? was there really a point of their relationship where she was satisfied with his boyfriend ?! I know, I know it's only fantasy, but for me this is a turn off That is all, but don't get offended if it hits the spot for you than it is all good we all different we all like different things. Game developers can't please all of us Regardless of my criticism, I liked the game overall, it just felt like sizes in this game were overdone (small-->tiny,big-->gigantic)

Oh I completely agree, either it is an issue for this women or its not. I do not see how it develops as an issue. It either always was one or it isn't and she is just being a bitch, but hey there are a lot of women who are completely selfish and are willing to hurt their partners just to get what they want.

If you don't like someone for whatever reason male or female FUCKING GET OUT OF THE RELATIONSHIP.

 

[xdosxdox]

Guys that’s just a game why’d you all get so mad wtf

 

[TheUberstuff]

Guys that’s just a game why’d you all get so mad wtf

Because bitches be doing this stuff IRL.