VN Ren'Py Abandoned Tales of a Dream Life HAREM [Ch. 2 pt 1] [Kraguto games]

[kraguto]

Is it so hard to give the option to put a name of your own?
I don't enjoy a porn game when they choose the name of the protagonist for you, it only looks good when the protagonist has personality, I don't feel that this one has it, I stopped playing it after a few minutes.
I'll play it again when that option exists.
In any case the effort is appreciated and I hope you take the critics well to improve, greetings.

Thank you very much for the advice. Seeing that not only you but other people by message have mentioned the name issue. I will keep it in mind and modify the game, so that everyone can name the character as they wish. all the criticisms and suggestions are welcome, every thing, however minimal, that may contribute something to the game, is pleasant. so thank you again, for taking the time to suggest this topic.

 

[kraguto]

Regarding the mac theme, I tried to upload the entire file. but my internet, ends up being an inscrutable mountain. so I'll find out if I can split the file to upload it in parts. if you can not. I will look for some more solution.
Regarding the Android theme, I'm seeing how the version for this platform is created. When you have the certitude, if you can or not. have a version, I will let you know.

 

[atlime]

That 1st death had me laughing with my pants off.

 

[repuindy]

@kraguto Hey buddy, i try your game, not the kind of game i usually play but i am not the world and for sure you will find people like it. I want to suggest you a thing, find a translator. I am not an english native speaker and for me is not that bad, sure some sentence sound strange but not that bad but i am on this site long enough to know that a ton of english speaker don't try your game when they read "machine translate". Good luck.

 

[kraguto]

@kraguto Hey buddy, i try your game, not the kind of game i usually play but i am not the world and for sure you will find people like it. I want to suggest you a thing, find a translator. I am not an english native speaker and for me is not that bad, sure some sentence sound strange but not that bad but i am on this site long enough to know that a ton of english speaker don't try your game when they read "machine translate". Good luck.

hello and thank you very much for trying the game. if the subject of the language is difficult. but for now I can not afford a translator. in the future if the game manages to take off a little, the same money from patreon would be used in the first place for that (although I have no idea how much it would cost a translator from neutral Spanish to English)


the truth with the game I pretend to give something different (nothing mind control or incest, if not something else) but I know that the theme of the language is making the game not so pleasant. I hope at least make up for it by adding a good amount of content and a not so typical story.

Even if you do not believe a part of me, think that maybe my fight is in vain and my game will be played by 10 or 15 parishioners and 16 of those will not like it.

well at least I have fun creating it. From the beginning, I knew that with this, money was not going to get. that's why from the beginning the premise was to launch it 100% free.

 

[repuindy]

hello and thank you very much for trying the game. if the subject of the language is difficult. but for now I can not afford a translator. in the future if the game manages to take off a little, the same money from patreon would be used in the first place for that (although I have no idea how much it would cost a translator from neutral Spanish to English)


the truth with the game I pretend to give something different (nothing mind control or incest, if not something else) but I know that the theme of the language is making the game not so pleasant. I hope at least make up for it by adding a good amount of content and a not so typical story.

Even if you do not believe a part of me, think that maybe my fight is in vain and my game will be played by 10 or 15 parishioners and 16 of those will not like it.

well at least I have fun creating it. From the beginning, I knew that with this, money was not going to get. that's why from the beginning the premise was to launch it 100% free.

I know mine probably is a romantic way to see the things but the fact you enjoy make your game is already a victory. I already seen a ton of developer who make maybe a decent/good game with the only interest of making money but without passion and they drop it after a couple of updates because they don't get enough support. I am confident that if you keep your passion and improve some aspect of the game you'll have some support. Don't give up. Good luck again.

 

[kraguto]

I know mine probably is a romantic way to see the things but the fact you enjoy make your game is already a victory. I already seen a ton of developer who make maybe a decent/good game with the only interest of making money but without passion and they drop it after a couple of updates because they don't get enough support. I am confident that if you keep your passion and improve some aspect of the game you'll have some support. Don't give up. Good luck again.

Thanks for the good wishes.

Well, I'll be honest, I'm not a professional in this, so at once. have a vision of oh yes, I launch my game and I become rich as a dark cookie or the other big game developers, well no.

I believe this more as a personal goal. to prove to myself that I can.

I do not know anything about programming, if my studies are basic (in my country, I would say that I only studied up to 11 and, it was jumping some "rules") nobody ever explained how to do something, but based on how to do things, It's like one learns. That's why creating this game is fun for me, because it encourages me to look for things that I do not know and that I can learn.

I know I'm not a competition for game creators. I know that.

let's be honest. Almost all, they know English, I do not.
Many know something about programming, I just barely look for pirated movies on Google.
Most live in countries of the first world, I live in Colombia, in the countryside with a prehistoric internet connection.
that's why, for me, it's a great achievement. the single fact of achieving a humble visual novel.

also by means of this visual novel. I can play to be better than vegeta and jamcha, so I can discover the most intimate bulma or be the new eren of mikasa XD

 

[repuindy]

There is always room for learn new things and you have the right attitude. Happy to have had the chance to know you in this site, you seems a good buddy.

 

[kraguto]

There is always room for learn new things and you have the right attitude. Happy to have had the chance to know you in this site, you seems a good buddy.

It's good to have a good attitude, if not then. everything is more difficult.
thank you very much for the good friend. It's nice, to please others, even more when they like me for being the way I am.
so greetings from Cristian from the mountains of Antioquia Colombia.

 

[zetodragon]

Deverdad no esta tan mal graficamente un poco de poraqui y poraya nada mas XD, espero que incluyas el español y me alegro ver mas latinos. Uno casi se siente Solid Snake infiltrado en una base en estas paginas, espero ver mas del juego de verdad es muy bueno suerte.

 

[kraguto]

Deverdad no esta tan mal graficamente un poco de poraqui y poraya nada mas XD, espero que incluyas el español y me alegro ver mas latinos. Uno casi se siente Solid Snake infiltrado en una base en estas paginas, espero ver mas del juego de verdad es muy bueno suerte.

en esas estoy, no eh podido, dar con una forma de que queden los dos idiomas. pero si no logro eso. incluire las dos versiones (ingles de traductor y español tan neutro que ni tildes tendra xd)

 

[zetodragon]

en esas estoy, no eh podido, dar con una forma de que queden los dos idiomas. pero si no logro eso. incluire las dos versiones (ingles de traductor y español tan neutro que ni tildes tendra xd)

XD espero con ansias mucha suerte

 

[kraguto]

small patch with you can name the main character

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the only thing you have to do, is to unzip it in the folder of the game launcher and accept to overwrite the files

 

[kraguto]

Hello to all who still have hope in this visual novel. I wanted to inform you. that its creator ... not yet dead XD. I will soon release the 0.3 update.

I hate December, December hates me, so my lateness. I hope someone wants to play tales of a dream life. for my luck, Christmas will not be back within a year. So now I can devote more time to my humble creation.

 

[theinternetis4]

So, what's the 0.3 changelog?

 

[kraguto]

So, what's the 0.3 changelog?

the size of the images from 1920x1080 to 1280x720 has been reduced, which has meant that the game weighs much less.



For this reason the game was created again, so the saved ones will not serve.



besides that, it will not need a patch to give us the name of the protagonist, so I'm free to name him Homer Griffin or Peter Simpson.



A lot of dialogue and several scenes have been added. I do not remember how much ...

 

[theinternetis4]

the size of the images from 1920x1080 to 1280x720 has been reduced, which has meant that the game weighs much less.



For this reason the game was created again, so the saved ones will not serve.



besides that, it will not need a patch to give us the name of the protagonist, so I'm free to name him Homer Griffin or Peter Simpson.



A lot of dialogue and several scenes have been added. I do not remember how much ...

As a heads-up, the game didn't appear to recognize that I entered my name when I started playing. Works with the patch you put up earlier though.

 

[vengefulspirit]

In this story, you will have control of Cristian, who is a normal cook.

What is a normal cook? Does he make pizza? Lots of people eat pizza. I guess that might make him normal.

that one day in the middle of the search for some condiments in the forest, you will find a dragon girl.

Is searching for condiments in the forest normal? Oh shit, wait. Christian was addressed in the third person in the first sentence. We were addressed in second person. CRISTIAN HAS ENSLAVED US AND IS SENDING US OUT INTO THE WOODS TO DIE FINDING CONDIMENTS! FUCK!! SHIT!!

that will give you the opportunity to travel to a new world.

Also, where are capital letters?

where he will soon discover that he is the only man in the city.

Seriously where'd they go? Also did we go to a new world or a new city?

You will be surrounded by multiple girls that we all know (girls from the most famous anime) that will happen?

Oh there's a capital. We must only be using them at the start of paragraphs now. Why did NO ONE HERE TELL ME? And you told me we would be surrounded by girls, you don't need to tell me again that "that will happen". I believe you. Not like CRISTIAN, the TRAITOR.

come and discover it in tales of a dream life.​

Oh the title doesnt even get capitalized now. Also if it ends up being all a dream I will be AnGeRyY

 

[kraguto]

What is a normal cook? Does he make pizza? Lots of people eat pizza. I guess that might make him normal.

Is searching for condiments in the forest normal? Oh shit, wait. Christian was addressed in the third person in the first sentence. We were addressed in second person. CRISTIAN HAS ENSLAVED US AND IS SENDING US OUT INTO THE WOODS TO DIE FINDING CONDIMENTS! FUCK!! SHIT!!

Also, where are capital letters?

Seriously where'd they go? Also did we go to a new world or a new city?

Oh there's a capital. We must only be using them at the start of paragraphs now. Why did NO ONE HERE TELL ME? And you told me we would be surrounded by girls, you don't need to tell me again that "that will happen". I believe you. Not like CRISTIAN, the TRAITOR.

Oh the title doesnt even get capitalized now. Also if it ends up being all a dream I will be AnGeRyY

my game is bad, continue to the next game with good English and a lot of incest, because in real life incest is the only thing that exists XD

 

[kraguto]

As a heads-up, the game didn't appear to recognize that I entered my name when I started playing. Works with the patch you put up earlier though.

you are sure that you downloaded the 0.3. because just in case I just tried and if he asks to name the beginning.