VN Ren'Py Onhold Tales of Unity [v0.11] [Stronkboi]

[Stronkboi]

hello i have a lots of text without image like when they enter in the drawf cave is black and just the text

Hey !

That's planned, basically the cave is dark so the group is just walking through pure darkness, I would've liked to use a REAL cave map, but the engine I use lacks one unfortunatly.

 

[Cool'Thulhu]

I know its a porn game and all, but the following scene TOTALLY loses me:

Succubus: hey girl you like MC right?
Girl: yes!
Succubus: he likes you, you know?
Girl: I'm not sure, I'm to shy stupid to do something
Succubus: By the way, while you think about it, let me lick your pussy to give you confidence.

HAHAHAHAHA

 

[Stronkboi]

I know its a porn game and all, but the following scene TOTALLY loses me:

Succubus: hey girl you like MC right?
Girl: yes!
Succubus: he likes you, you know?
Girl: I'm not sure, I'm to shy stupid to do something
Succubus: By the way, while you think about it, let me lick your pussy to give you confidence.

HAHAHAHAHA

So that's LITTERALY me in the beginning when it comes to writing Lmao.

But yeah that's basically it, the way succubus works in that world will be explained down the line of course, but damn ngl that made me laugh too to read it like that

 

[tremyz]

ok ouff i was thinking i screw up something lol, it make sense do.

 

[SumTingWong0420]

Sorry if this has been mentioned b4, it's not a huge deal But your basic lore beginning of game has Huge holes mathematically speaking: 30 years of slavery, story states: in 2030 humans started a war with other races & after 5 years of war they lost, in 2050 they were freed from slavery, 2030 to 2050 is only 20 years but you don't enslave a race before they've been defeated so now its 15 years of slavery. This can all be fixed by simply changing the beginning lore to say " in the year 2065 they were freed from slavery " Or change the description in OP to say 15 years of slavery.

Sorry I got temporary OCD >;D

 

[Stronkboi]

Sorry if this has been mentioned b4, it's not a huge deal But your basic lore beginning of game has Huge holes mathematically speaking: 30 years of slavery, story states: in 2030 humans started a war with other races & after 5 years of war they lost, in 2050 they were freed from slavery, 2030 to 2050 is only 20 years but you don't enslave a race before they've been defeated so now its 15 years of slavery. This can all be fixed by simply changing the beginning lore to say " in the year 2065 they were freed from slavery " Or change the description in OP to say 15 years of slavery.

Sorry I got temporary OCD >;D

Oh yeah those kind of plot holes needs to be fixed I'll ask the uploader to edit it !
Thanks for reporting it !

 

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[Kalenz123]

I'm curious how people play this game/see the chars
This is how it was for me:

Chumee - (Cute little tomboy goblin! ) Lover
Vanessa - Sis/bestie
Elise - good friend
Mine - Pet
Ophelia - Trying to steal her pet
Himia - (I like her but I wanna rip her brother's head off..) friends but it's complicated?
Louise - The devil on my shoulder/fuckbuddy/wingman -girl

How was it for you?

 

[LewdMiester001]

Give this game 10 stars! I mean story is so addictive! Multiple choice! Enough girls to please any man! Action! Suspense! Plot twists! Demolish that 4th wall and Comedy! Plenty of nudity but not to much. Whats not to love. This game going to the top 3 of my watch list right away..

 

[Rock&Rule]

I think this one has potential. The main story is a bit all over the place but the personal stories are good. The dialogue made sense which is a huge plus. I tried a similar styled game earlier in the day and reading every sentence made brain cells beat each other to death. That issue was not here everything was understandable.

The girls were cute and I still want to know more about them. So I will definitely be following the updates on this.

 

[SumTingWong0420]

Oh yeah those kind of plot holes needs to be fixed I'll ask the uploader to edit it !
Thanks for reporting it !

Another fix would be changing the year the war started to 2015, I don't know if any of these subjects had content within the story, that would need to be adjusted also to make sense, glad to be of service.

 

[Neobrakeon]

Usually. In this kind of games, it's difficult to pick one girl. But this time it's obvious Chumee is the superior one

 

[Stronkboi]

Another fix would be changing the year the war started to 2015, I don't know if any of these subjects had content within the story, that would need to be adjusted also to make sense, glad to be of service.

I'll have to sit down and think a bit about how I want to rewrite it, but overall it won't change the story that much.
Still, gladpeople have pointed that out because it definitely needs to be fixed !

 

[seeraltair]

I wish this game have harem path. But I don't demnad or judge nor I have right to do that. Alas in these types of games I like this choice so I can see all H interaction between MC and other girls. Bu still it looks good, so keep up the good work.

 

[Kalenz123]

I wish this game have harem path. But I don't demnad or judge nor I have right to do that. Alas in these types of games I like this choice so I can see all H interaction between MC and other girls. Bu still it looks good, so keep up the good work.

Is it even possible not to hook up with at least two girls?

 

[seeraltair]

Is it even possible not to hook up with at least two girls?

Ou I know it is ...but...but... I want all of them

 

[Stronkboi]

I wish this game have harem path. But I don't demnad or judge nor I have right to do that. Alas in these types of games I like this choice so I can see all H interaction between MC and other girls. Bu still it looks good, so keep up the good work.

Is it even possible not to hook up with at least two girls?

The game HAS an harem path YOU CAN have an Harem Ending !
It was just a bit blurry during the first parts of the game !
Btw I should DM the uploader and ask him to add the harem tag !

 

[seeraltair]

The game HAS an harem path YOU CAN have an Harem Ending !
It was just a bit blurry during the first parts of the game !
Btw I should DM the uploader and ask him to add the harem tag !

Thanks for info, but to see all animation, you have to more than once or am I mistaken?

 

[SumTingWong0420]

The game HAS an harem path YOU CAN have an Harem Ending !
It was just a bit blurry during the first parts of the game !
Btw I should DM the uploader and ask him to add the harem tag !

Game does have Harem tag, question regarding that tho, not asking for spoilers but neither do I care if I see any, I noticed some choices are darked out unless you focus on that characters path, example Elise choice theres a choice where she is sad about her dad & you can say 'you have me now' but its darked out unless you what? Always make certain type choices or do u need to focus on that character ? Also does Not focusing on a specific character cause missed content? Example: Chumee if you don't go for her you miss the shower fuck scene, is this the same with other girls?

 

[Stronkboi]

That's one of the few mistakes that happened early in development, I wanted to create a lot of catch up mecanics, making the early game a bit "exclusive" by locking some content, however with chapter 2 I realised that It would've been too annoying, so Chapter 2 will have WAY less "restriction".

The Harem route is totally planned, And even if you missed some stuff on the 1st chapter you can still achieve it by the end of the game which shall come in who knows !