OK - so I finished 1.62.
Starting with (mostly minor) bugs and glitches:
Zoe's portrait is messed up.
Some lines are mixed up (Narrator and Kait) and dialogue with wife when you said "Bullshit" - narrator will comment wife ignored daughter even when D is not in the same room.
And mowing the lawn... (one of my favorite lines in the game btw. about dedicated and good husband. :closedeyesmile
. Now this is more complicated. Although narrator mentions youdid it, iicon is still there. Of course, if you click on it, you can't pick up Meg and if you click on it when you're back (saturday evening), the game will throw you back in time to "saturday early morning"...
Now, praise:
You showed how important and how much adding new and more dialogues can improve (already great) game. In fact, I think you should add at least one new conversation with D or Wife or any other character from time to time. That subtle change in your wife's tone - almost hateful - or shocked D's expressions when you say something with sexual conotations, turning into caring words and flirtatious responses... Fantastic! You gave your characters more realism and that's always a good thing.
I'm glad you included Zoe in girl's roster - it doesn't matter how much or when she'll get her content. With adding supporting characters (like Jackson and Chad - both with two scenes), you're making school and whole game world more lively.
You can definitely enrich the game with already existing events - like you did with clothes changing scene. I noticed my first 2 or 3 shower scenes have "happy ending", but then, every other time, there is "an incident". So, I think you should do exactly the same thing - use corruption and romance stats so D. doesn't care about poking with her ambiguosly commenting or joking after the shower.
I don't know what else to say. I can only repeat myself like a parrot: "Great game".