Towards the end I had a few errors involving AegisNovaPregnant not being defined, I ignored the 4 times it appeared and was able to finish the story but I would have liked to see them pregnant as well. Great game. Loved the story.
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Odd, but thanks for letting me know, I'll check it up.
EDIT: Error found, fixed and patch updated. Thanks for letting me know!
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Talothral, finished playing your game right now. Honestly, it's more than great. Alone and only one year in development - it's a great achievement by itself. But beside that, you wrote a good captivating story, that's not focused on porn but with many porn scenes (all are in place storywise). And the main good thing - here it's already released version, not 0.x something, but complete story. Another great achievement by itself. And you said that English is your third language... hard to believe, not one time I saw games written in native language of developer that had worse grammar and style. Of course, for me English is not native too, but I already know (and hate) what Engrish is, believe me, your English is really good. And typos... well, everyone has 'em.
As I saw in this topic, people complain about ending. My advice, please, don't listen to them, you made a good ending, it perfectly ends the game, just how it should be. Of course, there's a hint for countinuation, but it's good hint, not a cliffhanger. And the base storylines is finished correctly, it's good ending all around.
I wish you continue with what you are doing.
As I saw in this topic, people complain about ending. My advice, please, don't listen to them, you made a good ending, it perfectly ends the game, just how it should be. Of course, there's a hint for countinuation, but it's good hint, not a cliffhanger. And the base storylines is finished correctly, it's good ending all around.
I wish you continue with what you are doing.
very nice game... 
i liked playing it, i kind of play it like 2- 4 days not sure... but i loved it tnx to develper just mybe end was too fast ended,... well probably no.2 is comming soo on start there will be vacation and then alll stufffs,... ( possible to find out who is his mom),... well or he could show from start, how and why it is even that game made
i liked playing it, i kind of play it like 2- 4 days not sure... but i loved it tnx to develper just mybe end was too fast ended,... well probably no.2 is comming soo on start there will be vacation and then alll stufffs,... ( possible to find out who is his mom),... well or he could show from start, how and why it is even that game made
- Jan 23, 2018
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I am not a expert but what method you used to render the images? the method I used when I was learning, were rendering every object alone with an option to use it as a png transparency, them after I put all images together,in that way you could save some time and processing power if you're using a low spec rig (I used the inbuild videocard of my pc back them)
Answer to that depends on the image, most of the times I can render it in one go and it takes 10 to 20 minutes per image, roughly. If I need more then 8 people on screen with lots of props I layer the images, it's just simply faster that way, up to 5 gen 8 I can render without issues for most of the times, depends on the amount of props. In TRS that wasn't much of a problem really as there was very little clutter around. And it helps that I'm not exactly aiming to make photo realistic images with tons of details.
There's some bald action going on here lol
Ok, so... nice game overall, really good story, the renders are fine... weird scenes, not because all the alien thing, perhaps more varied scenes with more closed up camera angles...scenes felt too short for me... but really good game dude, the story is the best part of it... is hard to find games that keep you interested in the story.
Yeah, i'm going to keep an eye on this dev... i really liked this.
(we need some good Mass Effect harem game dude lol, the biotic thing reminds me of that amazing series)
Ok, so... nice game overall, really good story, the renders are fine... weird scenes, not because all the alien thing, perhaps more varied scenes with more closed up camera angles...scenes felt too short for me... but really good game dude, the story is the best part of it... is hard to find games that keep you interested in the story.
Yeah, i'm going to keep an eye on this dev... i really liked this.
(we need some good Mass Effect harem game dude lol, the biotic thing reminds me of that amazing series)
- May 28, 2019
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Came for the porn, stayed for the story.
There were a lot of things I liked : a good alpha MC who's not a wimp or an asshole, no other male character in the sex scenes, an "everyday life-like" scenario well used, but I think what I liked the most was the atmosphere. Only a very few games I played had that level.
Well done, Dev. Well done.
If you have some idea for a part two, maybe, after the vacances or after the birth of children, don't hesitate.
Need to see some kink with Nadia and Nathalie, or maybe with the Matriarch and her daughter (maybe I push a little but still doable).
Congrats !
There were a lot of things I liked : a good alpha MC who's not a wimp or an asshole, no other male character in the sex scenes, an "everyday life-like" scenario well used, but I think what I liked the most was the atmosphere. Only a very few games I played had that level.
Well done, Dev. Well done.
If you have some idea for a part two, maybe, after the vacances or after the birth of children, don't hesitate.
Need to see some kink with Nadia and Nathalie, or maybe with the Matriarch and her daughter (maybe I push a little but still doable).
Congrats !
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The story isn't bad and even interesting, the Babylon 5 nostalgia adding to it, but my god there's so many lack on the writing side.
There's the bad English of course, but well, as none native English myself, it's just half a problem. A proofreader would have been a good addition, but all in all the dialogs are still understandable ; just the systematic use of "then" in place of "than", that end being really annoying.
No, the real problem come from the constancy of the dialogs, or more precisely the lack of it. There's way too many time where it's impossible to not feel that there's missing dialog lines. Like by example this scene :
"Correct" ? What is correct ? When used as sole word of the sentence, it's an approbation, but an approbation to what ? Ezan isn't so arrogant that he would give approbation to his own words... And where is "there" exactly ?
There's a least a line missing, one that should have been said by Garret.
To that, should be added the scenes that pop-up without warning. Garret is doing something then, without notice he suddenly do something totally unrelated because of totally unknown reason. It's even more disturbing when it's to met someone and the first thing he say is something like, "you asked for me ?", since the first half of the game is full of useless scene with sole purpose to say that [whoever] asked for his presence.
Passing from, "my office, in 30 minutes", followed by a, "[whoever] want to see you, go now", once in the office, to nothing at all is going from Charybdis to Scylla. It's assumed that, Garret being who he is, when one of the admiral call him, it's a secured line. Therefore, the information could have be told directly during the call, it would have worked fine. And, obviously, small transition would have also improved the story during the second half, once those call don't happen anymore.
And finally there's the few inconstancy regarding the branching of the story. Here, the most obvious example is probably when Garret awake in bed with Zae'na even if he declined her offer to celebrate the creation of Ot'ai's embassy or, worse, when there's nothing to celebrate.
With a little more time to proof test code and dialogs, this could have been avoided. Which is a shame, because those errors pull down a story that deserved more attention.
There's the bad English of course, but well, as none native English myself, it's just half a problem. A proofreader would have been a good addition, but all in all the dialogs are still understandable ; just the systematic use of "then" in place of "than", that end being really annoying.
No, the real problem come from the constancy of the dialogs, or more precisely the lack of it. There's way too many time where it's impossible to not feel that there's missing dialog lines. Like by example this scene :
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EA "What a surprise."
MC "Somehow I doubt that."
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EA "We have some progress with the renegades son. Or to be precise with his implants, some of them are legacy human implants, similar that were experimented in here but more advanced."
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EA "Correct. At least some of the parts were manufactured there. Some are manufactured in Aqin space."
MC "Well that will be a problem."There's a least a line missing, one that should have been said by Garret.
To that, should be added the scenes that pop-up without warning. Garret is doing something then, without notice he suddenly do something totally unrelated because of totally unknown reason. It's even more disturbing when it's to met someone and the first thing he say is something like, "you asked for me ?", since the first half of the game is full of useless scene with sole purpose to say that [whoever] asked for his presence.
Passing from, "my office, in 30 minutes", followed by a, "[whoever] want to see you, go now", once in the office, to nothing at all is going from Charybdis to Scylla. It's assumed that, Garret being who he is, when one of the admiral call him, it's a secured line. Therefore, the information could have be told directly during the call, it would have worked fine. And, obviously, small transition would have also improved the story during the second half, once those call don't happen anymore.
And finally there's the few inconstancy regarding the branching of the story. Here, the most obvious example is probably when Garret awake in bed with Zae'na even if he declined her offer to celebrate the creation of Ot'ai's embassy or, worse, when there's nothing to celebrate.
With a little more time to proof test code and dialogs, this could have been avoided. Which is a shame, because those errors pull down a story that deserved more attention.
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Ok that's... not how it should be in all honesty. And it is missing a line there.
EDIT: And this has been fixed, actually was fixed last night but was too tired to update this post. It's in the patch as always.
That's mostly Andrew (the caller) being a dick, and making Garrett to come to him because he can.
This should have been fixed with the patch, as I fixed it once already but I'll check again. If it's broken I probably did something that I shouldn't have.
EDIT: The scene where you wake up next to Zea'na after declining shouldn't happen with the patch installed. Keyword shouldn't, I can't reproduce it on my end with the patch.
As for the other feedback, I'll take it under consideration and see what I need to change in the future. Thank you for playing.
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It's possible that it came from me then. I intended to play your game from few times already, but always had to delay it by lack of time. So it's not impossible that I forgot to add the patch, while thinking that it was done.
Thanks to you for your game.
As I said, the story was interesting and hooking, and it's already a good achievement. There were some lack here and there, but well, I know that it isn't something easy to do ; hell, near to one year that I "works" on my own game, and still haven't wrote more than few dozen lines of dialogs, while the few CG I've render will probably never be include in it, because they are far to be good.
And anyway, we all need to start at some points and, from my point of view, you did a good start. You can only improve, and I know that I'll probably like even more your next game if you decide to do one.
Also it would be nice to see more of the other existing alien ladies in the possible sequel
- Sep 11, 2018
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I really liked it. Matter of fact I started playing it and did not want to stop. I played it for 2 days when I found the time and really enjoyed it. Has a mass effect feel story-wise. When I got to the end my final through was I want more.
- Aug 7, 2019
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hot damn, now that's the kind of quality I didn't expect from this site, came for the porn, stayed for the plot, great story, fantastic lore and interesting characters
I really like the character designs, the aliens look believable and not like someone dialed 0800-xenobimbos, so even if they are in a sense not conventionally beautiful, they have their own charm, the humans look standard enough with some nice variatons like sage being a dwarf and nova and aegis being buff due to the experiments (I also love the fact that the story actually acts upon aegis not liking her manly appearence), I would have liked for garett to get some action with nadia aswell because I love her perky tits but here's to hoping for the pre-/sequels to act on that
I also liked that the story was told in third person, rather than in first person, as the dev said, it's not telling ''our story'' but rather ''garett's story'', and also thank you very much for a proper ending, because even if it feels a bit rushed, it's still better than the original cliffhanger ending with garett unconcious on the lab floor, because in that case it would've set itself up to have some kind of sequel, but with all that's happening nowadays, who knows if a sequel gets made at all, that's why I enjoy storys with proper endings and eventual sequels that build upon the previous material more, than cliffhanger stories with criticaly needed sequels that might never get made
read it all in one go, took me 10+ hours, totally worth it
I really like the character designs, the aliens look believable and not like someone dialed 0800-xenobimbos, so even if they are in a sense not conventionally beautiful, they have their own charm, the humans look standard enough with some nice variatons like sage being a dwarf and nova and aegis being buff due to the experiments (I also love the fact that the story actually acts upon aegis not liking her manly appearence), I would have liked for garett to get some action with nadia aswell because I love her perky tits but here's to hoping for the pre-/sequels to act on that
I also liked that the story was told in third person, rather than in first person, as the dev said, it's not telling ''our story'' but rather ''garett's story'', and also thank you very much for a proper ending, because even if it feels a bit rushed, it's still better than the original cliffhanger ending with garett unconcious on the lab floor, because in that case it would've set itself up to have some kind of sequel, but with all that's happening nowadays, who knows if a sequel gets made at all, that's why I enjoy storys with proper endings and eventual sequels that build upon the previous material more, than cliffhanger stories with criticaly needed sequels that might never get made
read it all in one go, took me 10+ hours, totally worth it
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Talothral.
I really, really enjoyed this game. Like Animi666 said above, the game was not about the sex but the story. The script could have used a thorough proof-reading but it was not bad. The way the days happened made each feel like an episode on a classic sci-fi show (OG Star Trek or BSG maybe). Honestly if the script was cleaned up I would easily watch this series on HBO.
I am looking forward to your new game, Sorceror.
I really, really enjoyed this game. Like Animi666 said above, the game was not about the sex but the story. The script could have used a thorough proof-reading but it was not bad. The way the days happened made each feel like an episode on a classic sci-fi show (OG Star Trek or BSG maybe). Honestly if the script was cleaned up I would easily watch this series on HBO.
I am looking forward to your new game, Sorceror.