Yeah, I really like the game, the setting is interesting and it's always nice to see femdom games that aren't purely about the MC getting beat up constantly, but that was one of the things I didn't like in the update, I'm not a fan of the whole "being part of a harem" thing, even more so when it sounds like there will be another "privileged boytoy" (a chef) with the MC.
The other thing that bothered me was that after all the build up to it, the sex scene with Olivia was really disappointing, I'm really not a fan of sex scenes in games that are just a short looping animation and then they're over. It just seems very underwhelming, especially when the entire thing can be accidentally skipped with 1 mouse click. It's also always hard to take the characters seriously after when they talk about how great it was when it's so... short, lol.
While the sex scene with Kerren in the first version wasn't perfect, the scene with Olivia felt like a major downgrade from that, which sucks because I was really looking forward to it. I'm also not a big fan of the spinning camera during those animations, it makes it hard to focus on whatever you want to see, and it's a bit immersion breaking to just have the camera from afar constantly spinning like that around them.
It might be an unpopular opinion, but I'd rather have a bunch of CGs that show more of the action, more interactions between the characters and the actual penetration than the current 1 looping animation where it can be hard to see anything and then it's over.
It would also be nice to see when and where the MC cums, it seems like a bit of a missed opportunity that it's not even acknowledged by anyone right now.