VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Castaway Story [v0.7] [androm3dart]

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ThunderRob

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ok..the good..some of the dames are nicely done..the setting is good..the bad..ugh..the story is a joke..was it written by a 13 year old virgin?..lol...too many other dudes..gives the fear of future "seeing other dudes dicks in your dame" shit..lol overall this was not really a pleasant experience and ima pass on this without even a look back goodbye.
 
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Vrijgeest

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Great renders and models but that is a good as it gets. Nice to see normal sized healthy women. The story is so weak. It does not have a bit of plausibility. Are they natives? Communication seems to be no problem. No old people or children. No background information either on the "tribe". Just a porn story but not a VN. A novel has a beginning, a middle and an end. This is not even a beginning. The language is disjointed and lacking a thread of a story.
 
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Deleted member 1019532

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Okay, you've got the original two castaways. Then they discover, or are discovered by, a "tribe" consisting of nothing but white babes (subsequently augmented by one male), all of whom speak perfect English, live in buildings constructed of finished lumber (even their furniture is built of finished lumber), with no offspring or old people anywhere to be seen.

It's supposedly a small island, yet the tribe has been totally unaware of not only the original two castaways, but also the other castaways living on the other side of this supposedly small island. All appear to be doing quite well with no crops being raised, no pigs or cattle being raised, and no local fishing.

Oh, and now the tribe has a token black couple.

Have I missed anything?
 
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Mormont

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Vrijgeest said:
Are they natives? Communication seems to be no problem.
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I'm guessing it saves time and just keeping it to English that is unless there is a story behind how they all speak English maybe the dev can come up with something like they were taught it from another survivor many years ago.
 
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justbringit

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Mormont said:
That is true, but would you prefer they had a full bush? :p
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Well it will be different xD
And it would help to identify in the game, no woman after a few says without shaving looks like a barbie doll, it just don't look real, but that's just my point of view
 
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aimatt

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Agreed, would be better if the girls had full bush, by staying in the island over time. The one that fell with the Mc could be shaved in the beginning, but then she should grow hair if isn't shaving...
 
Mormont

Mormont

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The beach scene with Jane was a bit abrupt when they hear a noise and get scared by it, would have been nice to have maybe heard some kind of noise, looks like more of the females on the island are becoming more interested in the MC.
 
LewdDao

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RetMSgt said:
His first day on the island and he's worried about food?

Dude, the general rule is three minutes without air, three days without water, and three weeks without food.

Missing something to eat for a day or two isn't going to hurt anyone.
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3 weeks without food is with little to no activity...
 
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BaasB

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Not bad at al, keep it up

i have one spot left on my Patreon Support list, this game just joint my short list
 
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