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Well, everything is pretty clear, but I'm really curious about how the dialogs are?
- Thread starter androm3dart
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It written in kinda a terse statement style - obviously not the writer's first language - so it comes across a bit flat.
They sometimes refer to you as 'mc' even though you just introduced yourself by name and repeat some phrases which makes it weird to read (at the start about 5 sentences in a row start with 'Some time later ...').
Because the speech is kinda stilted it's hard to work out whether everyone is adversarial to each other or it's just a byproduct of the writing.
There are also some abrupt shifts of scene, one moment he's looking around in the forest and next thing there's a woman threatening to kill him. I mean wtf, did he find her, did she suddenly jump out at him, it's just one thing straight into the next.
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i was realy hoping this a family in game it need,s a patch for me to like it not even ntr bugger thats means lot grinding to get anywhere
here is my unofficial android port of The Castaway Story 0.5 + Compressed
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So this is the tale of our castaways.
They're here for a long, long time.
They'll have to make the best of things.
It's an uphill climb.
The first mate, and his Skipper too,
will do their very best
to make the others comfortable
in their tropic island nest.
They're here for a long, long time.
They'll have to make the best of things.
It's an uphill climb.
The first mate, and his Skipper too,
will do their very best
to make the others comfortable
in their tropic island nest.
Just a thought, would it be possible to post the game here in F95zone and put something else in Patreon just to get support from patreons?
Yeah, I was thinking about that. Thinking of editing my patreon page with just different levels of Patreon. No post or no updates whatsoever related to the game. I still haven't decided yet. I'll keep you guys posted for when you can start supporting me on Patreon.
If he manage to get them all pregnant at same time..An island with just women so far sounds ideal enough to me why would we ever want to leave
androm3dart
Played your game. Looks like it's 5th version, so it supposed to be clean from beginner's errors. But still I see sometimes word "MC mc" instead of MC's name in the first chapter, I see some mistypes like names not beginning from capital letter (that thing is not only in first chapter, it's just common thing in game). Another thing is messages about end of chapter and beginning of next chapter with save warning, if it's not the last chapter we shouldn't see them, that messages confuses us, players. I suppose it's not looking good in the eyes of your supposed donaters on Pateron.
I see people already told about dialogs so I don't need to repeat that. To the 5th chapter I began to see a story and I can tell I liked it. I think it's a deep story that can be interesting to read. But your "way of speaking" (not only dialogs but text at all) seriosly mess with story and worsening text part at all. I suppose it can be overcame with simple thing. One screen, MC's telling what he's going to do, next screen, "some time later" or "after the (designated time period or time of day)". Just a suggestion. But it's for the description text, dialogs are the worst.
There's a bug in 5th chapter. Ater Jane/Debbie choice and sex scene story is jumping to the second morning of Rob chase, i.e. dream with Madison and pleasant awakening with Lauren. Story goes on after that till the end of chapter (with according message) then it jumps back to the next morning after Jane or Debbie sex scene and goes on till the first night of Rob chase, then it cuts to main menu.
Played your game. Looks like it's 5th version, so it supposed to be clean from beginner's errors. But still I see sometimes word "
I see people already told about dialogs so I don't need to repeat that. To the 5th chapter I began to see a story and I can tell I liked it. I think it's a deep story that can be interesting to read. But your "way of speaking" (not only dialogs but text at all) seriosly mess with story and worsening text part at all. I suppose it can be overcame with simple thing. One screen, MC's telling what he's going to do, next screen, "some time later" or "after the (designated time period or time of day)". Just a suggestion. But it's for the description text, dialogs are the worst.
There's a bug in 5th chapter. Ater Jane/Debbie choice and sex scene story is jumping to the second morning of Rob chase, i.e. dream with Madison and pleasant awakening with Lauren. Story goes on after that till the end of chapter (with according message) then it jumps back to the next morning after Jane or Debbie sex scene and goes on till the first night of Rob chase, then it cuts to main menu.
On this moment there's some people who disagree with you. There are some sex scenes where MC is only watcher, not participant. For some it's already ntr (not that I agree with them but I would prefer to not see such scenes).
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes and the bugs. I guess I really need to start working in my dialogue writing. And meanwhile, I'll figure out the bugs and those mistypes and reupload the modified version.
You're welcome. I really want to play your game without "textual" obstacles.
Hey, I've fixed the bugs, and I'm working on fixing the textual obstacles, will be ready by tomorrow. Just copy the bugfix file in the OP to your game folder, extract and replace all the files. Please inform me if there are any other issues.
22 May 2020 Update
Ok guys, my system was having some issues. So, I couldn't render it for about 3 weeks, now everything seems fine, but the risk is still there. But I am gonna go ahead with the risk, which probably is negligible since I've already performed stress test for 24 hrs straight. For the project, around 40% has been completed, along with some big animations.
P.S.- I've cleared my Patreon page, now it doesn't show that I am creating adult games, As I told earlier, I can't really show I am creating adult games on my Patreon page. And if you want to show some support, you can do it now.
Everyone stay safe
Ok guys, my system was having some issues. So, I couldn't render it for about 3 weeks, now everything seems fine, but the risk is still there. But I am gonna go ahead with the risk, which probably is negligible since I've already performed stress test for 24 hrs straight. For the project, around 40% has been completed, along with some big animations.
P.S.- I've cleared my Patreon page, now it doesn't show that I am creating adult games, As I told earlier, I can't really show I am creating adult games on my Patreon page. And if you want to show some support, you can do it now.
Everyone stay safe
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