Whats the point in choosing your own name if everyone is still gonna call med Steve...
- Mar 2, 2017
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Welcome to the club, I fixed the "Steve", but it doesn't stop this game from needing a full time proof reader.
- Jan 13, 2018
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I think the game has potential. The renders are good and the women are beautiful but as others have mentioned, the writing and the names have to get fixed as well as the relationships. even calling them step-mom or step sister, it just sounds weird. I had step siblings when I was a kid and I never referred to them as step anything.
- Sep 10, 2019
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Have to say tried the Demo.. and it was bad. Never thought I would come back to it but was curious. The work has improved and to be honest that's all we can hope for from Devs who do this work for little reward.. As they go on the work improves. Ready to see how much Notteaa grows in the next update. Keep plugging away.
We can change the name of all the others characters, but not the name of the MC, nonsense.
- Sep 3, 2017
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Overall good. Girls look amazing. The writing is a bit janky and nonsense at times but it's decent.
- Mar 8, 2021
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There is not a lot of content on the demo, but the picture is beautiful, I hope there will be more content updates in the next
Port to Renpy is a good choice. There some small problem: you give ability change names and relations, but it change name labels ONLY, in text still default names. and wt mod not fixed it
Some hints:
i recommend NOT compile scripts and NOT pack it in rpa, until game get more content - it's make bugfix, spell check, translations more easy for community.
Game has a good start, keep up the good work, and do not be fooled on the provocations of NTR lovers - they provoke the authors to add crazy shit in VN, the author loses an vanilla community that does not like it, then NTR supporters arrange the battles among themselves and in the end leaving the author completely without support. Better add harem path - harem community more positive and supportive. if you decide add some crazy things - make it completely optional.
Some hints:
i recommend NOT compile scripts and NOT pack it in rpa, until game get more content - it's make bugfix, spell check, translations more easy for community.
Game has a good start, keep up the good work, and do not be fooled on the provocations of NTR lovers - they provoke the authors to add crazy shit in VN, the author loses an vanilla community that does not like it, then NTR supporters arrange the battles among themselves and in the end leaving the author completely without support. Better add harem path - harem community more positive and supportive. if you decide add some crazy things - make it completely optional.
This game is quite fun, i enjoy the female characters, and the MC seems relatable.
If i had to suggest improvements, i would let the player name the MC, and possibly make John less of an all-around dick, i get that he is supposed to be an obvious antagonist, but he is almost a comic-book level villain.
Looking forward to future updates!
If i had to suggest improvements, i would let the player name the MC, and possibly make John less of an all-around dick, i get that he is supposed to be an obvious antagonist, but he is almost a comic-book level villain.
Looking forward to future updates!
- Dec 28, 2017
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The renders and the girls are gorgeous, but there are many issues involving the pace of the story. We are pushed around from one scene to the next one without almost any transition whatsoever. We are here, a snap of fingers, we are somewhere else; another snap, a whole day has passed.
Also, some things don't even make sense to me. How can your sister's best friend be in love with you if apparently you have never met? Would a mom really talk on the phone with a girl she hasn't even met and organize a date with his son?
I don't know, certain aspects of the story need some rethinking.
Finally, I remember playing the first version in Unity and it definitely had sound. At the very least I remember that we could listen to the music the MC was listening to when he was wearing headphones at the beginning of the game. I don't understand why the Renpy version is soundless.
Also, some things don't even make sense to me. How can your sister's best friend be in love with you if apparently you have never met? Would a mom really talk on the phone with a girl she hasn't even met and organize a date with his son?
I don't know, certain aspects of the story need some rethinking.
Finally, I remember playing the first version in Unity and it definitely had sound. At the very least I remember that we could listen to the music the MC was listening to when he was wearing headphones at the beginning of the game. I don't understand why the Renpy version is soundless.
- Dec 6, 2017
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It has potential, renders are nice and the main girls are cool, still pretty short but lets see how it develops in the next chapters. Overall I am enjoying it so far.
- Oct 30, 2020
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Future LI sucking another dick......Why should it be tagged with NTR?
There's no NTR AFAIK
- Oct 30, 2020
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I forgot people here have their own definition of things.
